Approved Tech Tn-2 Sniper Rifle

[Titan]

Image Source: [x]
Intent: To expand CDA's line of weapons.
Development Thread: If needed
Manufacturer: Concordia Cresent Technologies.
Model: Tn-2 Sniper Rifle
Affiliation: Closed Market
Modularity: No
Production: Limited
Material: Xonolite, Blaster Parts,
Classification: Blaster(Sniper)
Size: Handheld
Length: 2.3 Meters
Weight: 20 Kilos
Ammunition Type: Power Cell, Gas canister,
Ammunition Capacity: 20
Effective Range: 600 Meters
Rate of Fire: Semi-auto
Special Features: Extreme range
Strengths: Accurate up to a 600 Meters.
Weaknesses: See weight and height, the Tn-2 is a massive gun.
Description: The Tn-2 sniper rifle is the second in CDA's Tn-line of weapons, it has the capability to shoot up to 500 meters away. Nearly as tall as the average adult, the Tn-2 is a massive 2.3 Meters. It has a
built in targeting scope, that can switch between optical, infrared, and night vision modes although while in night vision it is vulnerable to "flashing"(shining a bright light in front of the scope). The Tn-2s design closely resembles that of a slugthrower or the such.
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[Zef Halo]

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[Zef Halo]

Hey there [member="Tel Ordo"], there's a few adjustments before I could put his up for secondary approval.

Image Source: Barret 50Cal

Please link the source of where you have taken this image.

Affiliation: CDA

Is this going to be used only by the company ? If not and it is being sold over marketplace threads or roleplaying threads then put this as 'Closed Market'

Material: Xonlite, Blaster Parts,

I assume 'Xonlite' is the metal known as Xonolite, correct ?

Length: 3.3 Meters Weight: 20 Kilos

This might be too much for your own good. A 3.3 meter is twice the size of a real life Barrett M82 and weight is 7 kg over the RL equivalent Barrett M82. I am pretty sure you could reduce those to make this submission better but if you do not want to change them - it is fine.

Ammunition Capacity: 50 Effective Range: 1 Mile

I would like to have this changed, 600 meters is what the longest optimum range of blaster sniper rifles in canon as far as I recall. A capacity of 50 ammunition with an effective range of 1 mile and a semi-auto firing mechanism is a bit too much.

Strengths: Accurate up to a mile. Weaknesses: Useless within 50 meters

I do not think that 'useless within 50 meters' is a weakness. If it can shoot so far away then I am pretty sure it can shoot me when I am within 50 meters of the sniper. If you keep the weight and length as they are then that can definitely be a weakness cause moving around 3.3 meters of a weapon is a bit hard.

The description needs a bit more information about the weapon.

 

[Titan]

[member="Zef Halo"] done.

 

[Zef Halo]

[member="Tel Ordo"]

Drop the ammo to 20.

Why can it only fire 5 shots per minute ?

 

[Titan]

Sorry brain malfunction.

 

[Titan]

Double post

 

[Titan]

[member="Zef Halo"] done.

 

[Zef Halo]

[member="Tel Ordo"]

The description says that it is capable of shooting a mile away which is roughly 1700 meters, edit that to reflect the actual effective range.

 

[Titan]

[member="Zef Halo"] done.

 

[Zef Halo]

<p>Awesome. Pending Admin Approval. Thanks! [member="Spencer Varanin"]</p>

 

[Ellie Mors]

Approved.