A brilliant fire
Ala Quin
57 ATC | 3596 BBY - The Battle of Onderon.
Decades after the treaty of Coruscant, and the conflict with the Zakuulan Eternal Empire, the third Galactic war continued to divide the Galaxy between forces of light and Dark. While the war had reached many worlds along the border, the focus of the Republic was turned towards Onderon, as forces of the Sith Empire had begun their invasion of the jungle world. To respond to this new threat, the Republic called on the Jedi for assistance, and many quickly gathered to help defend the Republic held planet.
Among these Jedi was the renowned Jedi Master, Valery Noble, the leader and Battlemaster of a smaller Enclave located on Caamas. With a focus on purging darkness from the Galaxy, her Enclave was always ready when the call for aid against the Sith was made, and this time was no different. Along with Jedi of all specializations, she gathered on the Valor-class cruiser Vigilant, and became part of the joint strike force to engage the invading forces.
Only a few days into the new conflict, the Jedi and their Republic allies arrived, and landed in Iziz, the captial city of Onderon. With its large surrounding walls and lack of entry points, it was the ideal stronghold to fall back to if necessary. But thus far, the Republic forces had succesfully kept the frontlines away from the major cities - only the occasional air strikes came through.
But with their new Jedi reinforcements, the tide of the planetary war began to shift drastically. With Jedi such as Valery Noble leading the assault, the enemy forces were being pushed back, and after a crucial battle in orbit was won by the Republic, victory seemed near. Through intelligence reports from various scout units, the remaining high-priority targets were brought onto Republic radars, and both soldiers and Jedi were assigned to launch strikes against them.
One such target was a large imperial facility, constructed in one of many caves on Onderon. While scouts had been unable to acquire a great deal of information about the facility itself, the relatively strong Sith presence indicated it was a potentially crucial target to strike. Because of the Sith presence, the Jedi Battlemaster was assigned to lead the assault.
With a group of well-trained Jedi behind her, as well as Republic soldiers, the Keshian Master ventured through Onderon's jungles to reach the facility hidden within the cave, in hopes of taking a step closer towards ending the conflict on Onderon..
(Image from SWTOR)
Chapter I: The Facility
"The enemy base is up ahead. I spot guards but no Sith." the Sergeant said after lowering his binoculars. He looked at the Jedi Master to his side, who seemed to be lost in thought. Her vibrant orange eyes were directed forward at the cave, and her long hair was flowing along with the breeze while she stood quietly, analyzing her options and mentally preparing herself for what was about to happen. Having heard his words, a soft smile appeared on her face and she'd finally confirm his report with a nod of her head.
"Have your troops encircle the entrance while I lead a group of Jedi down the center. I'm sure I can get their attention." she said with confidence, as well as an understanding that the superior numbers of her group weren't as effective at the narrow entrance of the cave. At her words, soldiers began to spread and position themselves in a half circle around the entrance, but a safe distance away. The Jedi that were present would meanwhile follow Valery, who began her direct approach towards the cave.
"Jedi! They're here!" one of the defending imperial soldiers called out as a blade of purple plasma burst into existence, held by the woman leading the assault. From the jungle, Valery and a group of 10 Jedi stepped towards the defending troops, who moved behind their barricades and opened fire. But against the Jedi, the accuracy of the imperial troops wasn't as helpful as they hoped it would be.
Blaster bolts were redirected back towards the soldiers or deflected away to neutralize the threat, and slowly, the Jedi were getting closer to their opponents while Republic troops moved up and returned fire as well - the battle had begun.
Having a desire to minimize the casualties of the imperial forces, who were severely outnumbered, Valery would extend her left hand after she deflected a series of incoming bolts. She felt the Force flowing through her, and gathered the strength of its energy within her fingertips, before extending it outwards to grasp for their rifles. With a sudden tug and her hand balling into a fist, she pulled the weapons from their hands, and continued her path forward.
Without their weapons, and the Republic forces moving in, some of the imperial soldiers ran into the cave for help, while others raised their hands in surrender.
Because of this, Valery lowered her lightsaber down to her side, and gestured for the Republic officer to join her again. "Sergeant, take these soldiers away, and leave the rest to me. The Sith within the caves are best handled by the Jedi." Valery said as the Sergeant joined her. He dipped his head and began to guide his troops to restrain the imperial soldiers. "Signal us when the threat is taken care of, Master Jedi." he said.
Valery nodded and turned her eyes into the darkness of the caves. A soft sigh escaped her lips, and together with the other Jedi, she went inside to face the darkness within.
Chapter II: Confronting the darkness
"What do you think all this equipment is for?" the Zabrak Jedi Master asked after disengaging his lightsaber. He stood up from his crouched position, and casted a final glance at the Sith pureblood on the cold floor of the cave. With the 10 Jedi that went inside the caves, the two Sith Lords inside were rather quickly overwhelmed. But despite the dark taint they leave on the Galaxy, the Master hoped they would finally find peace. "I'm not sure, I expected this facility to store weapons, supplies, or something crucial to their war effort, considering how far behind their lines this place is." Valery said in response.
But looking around, they only saw strange devices - machines they had never seen before, and none of the Jedi had any idea what they were for with the exception of one device, which looked similar to some of the more advanced medical beds they had on-board medical stations. But unlike those, the patient could barely be seen inside this pod, and some of the systems linked up to it were very different in nature as well.
"It looks like a medical facility, but I've never seen any equipment like this before." the Zabrak Jedi said while he inspected the pod more closely. "Well, I'm sure the Republic engineers will be able to figure it out. Our task here is done, so we hold this position until reinforcements arrive." she said with a lack of interest in the devices. Understanding sophisticated technology wasn't a skill she possessed, so there were better ways to spend her time.
Valery would move away from the chamber of devices, and found herself a more quiet spot where she could reflect on what happened thus far, and keep herself focused through a routine of mental exercises. The Jedi who had fought alongside her knew her well, and gave her the time and space she needed. They took the time to rest after the intense fighting, and waited for new orders to arrive.
But while they expected new orders, after several hours of waiting something unexpected hit them all as a tremor through the Force. A great imminent darkness sent shivers down their spines, and caused all Jedi to rise up to their feet. "Did you feel that?" one Jedi asked while another stepped towards the door leading into their room. "We have company.." the Zabrak Master said as he felt the enemy approaching.
Having felt it too, Valery stepped into the room with the other Jedi and they quickly moved towards the entrance of the cave together to prepare. At this point, the sun had gone down and only the moon and stars above reflected light down to the jungles of Onderon. But the Keshian Master needed little light to see them moving through the jungle - her oranges eyes were able to see the heat produced by their bodies. The incoming group she spotted was much stronger than the forces that were defending the cave originally, and up in orbit she could see a Sith fleet dropping from hyperspace.
"We stand our ground here." Valery said, her voice calm and her exterior confident. "They're going to hit us hard but if we stand together, we can make it through this." she said, hoping to calm the nerves of those around her. But seeing the approaching threat, Valery knew they were going to be up all night, fighting off wave after wave of enemy attacks.
The first waves, the Jedi were able to push back without significant casualties but the enemy forces knew what they were doing, and were exhausting the valiant defenders gradually through sustained efforts. One-by-one, the Republic soldiers were taken out over the course of the night, until only the Jedi remained and it wouldn't be long until the first fell, as Sith joined the battle.
Throughout the night, the fierce fighting continued but as eventually only a handful of Jedi remained, Valery realized that this battle was over. They were exhausted, injured and only the Zabrak Master and herself had the mental strength to keep fighting. Thoughts of surrendering briefly crossed her mind, but she understood that it would likely lead to execution, so she dismissed the option and decided she had to step up as their leader.
"Move into the facility and stand back." Valery said as she glanced over her shoulder. Her words seemed to surprise the Zabrak, who had always stood beside her when things got tough. But the fierce, determined look in her eyes made him understand how serious she was, and he trusted her more than anybody else. He simply nodded his head, and guided the others back inside, while Valery moved towards the approaching group of Sith.
What exactly happened after they separated is knowledge only Valery holds within her memory, but from within the caves, the Jedi could feel the Force manifest itself to a far greater extent. Constant clashing of blades was then followed by a large explosion and after several minutes of intense fighting, everything went very quiet. The dark, corrupting presences that first left a taint on the jungle were gone but the Zabrak could feel the pain from his friend echo into his body through the Force.
Without second thought, he moved out of the facility and ran into the jungle, where he found her on the ground, surrounded by a few dark cloaked bodies. Her clothing was torn in several places, her body bruised and bleeding, and her eyes were closed while she fought to stay alive. The Zabrak kneeled down besides her with a frown covering his face, and balled his hands into fists.
The fight was over but at what cost, he wondered. The Imperial forces were still out there in great forces, and they had no clue whether or not this facility was even worth defending. But they all had their orders, and they followed them until the end.
But while many had lost their lives serving the Republic, there was still hope for his closest friend.
(Character commission I own)
Chapter III: Lost to time
Carrying the injured woman in his arms, the Zabrak Master rushes past the other Jedi, and through the facility until he reached the room filled with machines. Behind him, he could feel dark presences moving through the jungle, and directly towards him. He had no time to waste, and his eyes turned to the peculiar medical pod. He quickly made his way there to open it up and gently, he placed her inside and looked at her - she was in a great deal of pain, to an extent he had only seen once before. Normally, he'd never trust a device like this but she was going to die without immediate medical assistance, and there was no way he'd escape carrying her.
So the Zabrak Master was left with no choice - he was forced to place his trust in this machine.
"Hang in there, Valery." he said as he glanced at her one last time, before closing the pod.
He would watch as systems came online automatically, and her current medical state was displayed on one of the monitors linked up to it - it didn't look good. But luckily, the machine was designed to automatically take care of whoever was inside as well. Sounds of the pod sealing would swiftly be followed by various green lights blinking and moments later, the monitor showed that her biological signature was rapidly changing. He didn't understand what it meant, but he could feel her presence in the Force, extremely faint but slowly shifting to a stable state once again.
"May the Force be with you, my old friend. I will be back soon." he said with his infectious smile, as he placed his hand on the pod.
The Zabrak then removed the lightsaber from his belt and began to move through the facility again, first gathering the few other Jedi before heading for the exit into the jungle. He knew that if the Sith were to find Valery, she would be killed so in an attempt to keep her alive, he would turn to his mastery of the elements to collapse the cave behind him. leaving her trapped. With how faint her signature in the Force had become within that device, nobody would be able to sense her but he knew exactly where she was, and intended to bring help back to her, after making his escape.
With his friend on his mind, the Zabrak moved into the jungle at night and began his journey back towards the city of Iziz, unbeknownst of the ambush that was waiting for him between the tall trees and green flora of Onderon's jungle.
Trapped within a stasis chamber buried underneath layers of rock, dirt and metal, Valery Noble shifted away into a world of dreams she would never escape from alone. Throughout her life, she had always followed the will of the Force, and trusted it to guide her path. Once again, her destiny would be determined by its will, and only time would stand in the way of her awakening.
Tears of Time
57 ATC | 3596 BBY - The Battle of Onderon.
Decades after the treaty of Coruscant, and the conflict with the Zakuulan Eternal Empire, the third Galactic war continued to divide the Galaxy between forces of light and Dark. While the war had reached many worlds along the border, the focus of the Republic was turned towards Onderon, as forces of the Sith Empire had begun their invasion of the jungle world. To respond to this new threat, the Republic called on the Jedi for assistance, and many quickly gathered to help defend the Republic held planet.
Among these Jedi was the renowned Jedi Master, Valery Noble, the leader and Battlemaster of a smaller Enclave located on Caamas. With a focus on purging darkness from the Galaxy, her Enclave was always ready when the call for aid against the Sith was made, and this time was no different. Along with Jedi of all specializations, she gathered on the Valor-class cruiser Vigilant, and became part of the joint strike force to engage the invading forces.
Only a few days into the new conflict, the Jedi and their Republic allies arrived, and landed in Iziz, the captial city of Onderon. With its large surrounding walls and lack of entry points, it was the ideal stronghold to fall back to if necessary. But thus far, the Republic forces had succesfully kept the frontlines away from the major cities - only the occasional air strikes came through.
But with their new Jedi reinforcements, the tide of the planetary war began to shift drastically. With Jedi such as Valery Noble leading the assault, the enemy forces were being pushed back, and after a crucial battle in orbit was won by the Republic, victory seemed near. Through intelligence reports from various scout units, the remaining high-priority targets were brought onto Republic radars, and both soldiers and Jedi were assigned to launch strikes against them.
One such target was a large imperial facility, constructed in one of many caves on Onderon. While scouts had been unable to acquire a great deal of information about the facility itself, the relatively strong Sith presence indicated it was a potentially crucial target to strike. Because of the Sith presence, the Jedi Battlemaster was assigned to lead the assault.
With a group of well-trained Jedi behind her, as well as Republic soldiers, the Keshian Master ventured through Onderon's jungles to reach the facility hidden within the cave, in hopes of taking a step closer towards ending the conflict on Onderon..
(Image from SWTOR)
Chapter I: The Facility
"The enemy base is up ahead. I spot guards but no Sith." the Sergeant said after lowering his binoculars. He looked at the Jedi Master to his side, who seemed to be lost in thought. Her vibrant orange eyes were directed forward at the cave, and her long hair was flowing along with the breeze while she stood quietly, analyzing her options and mentally preparing herself for what was about to happen. Having heard his words, a soft smile appeared on her face and she'd finally confirm his report with a nod of her head.
"Have your troops encircle the entrance while I lead a group of Jedi down the center. I'm sure I can get their attention." she said with confidence, as well as an understanding that the superior numbers of her group weren't as effective at the narrow entrance of the cave. At her words, soldiers began to spread and position themselves in a half circle around the entrance, but a safe distance away. The Jedi that were present would meanwhile follow Valery, who began her direct approach towards the cave.
"Jedi! They're here!" one of the defending imperial soldiers called out as a blade of purple plasma burst into existence, held by the woman leading the assault. From the jungle, Valery and a group of 10 Jedi stepped towards the defending troops, who moved behind their barricades and opened fire. But against the Jedi, the accuracy of the imperial troops wasn't as helpful as they hoped it would be.
Blaster bolts were redirected back towards the soldiers or deflected away to neutralize the threat, and slowly, the Jedi were getting closer to their opponents while Republic troops moved up and returned fire as well - the battle had begun.
Having a desire to minimize the casualties of the imperial forces, who were severely outnumbered, Valery would extend her left hand after she deflected a series of incoming bolts. She felt the Force flowing through her, and gathered the strength of its energy within her fingertips, before extending it outwards to grasp for their rifles. With a sudden tug and her hand balling into a fist, she pulled the weapons from their hands, and continued her path forward.
Without their weapons, and the Republic forces moving in, some of the imperial soldiers ran into the cave for help, while others raised their hands in surrender.
Because of this, Valery lowered her lightsaber down to her side, and gestured for the Republic officer to join her again. "Sergeant, take these soldiers away, and leave the rest to me. The Sith within the caves are best handled by the Jedi." Valery said as the Sergeant joined her. He dipped his head and began to guide his troops to restrain the imperial soldiers. "Signal us when the threat is taken care of, Master Jedi." he said.
Valery nodded and turned her eyes into the darkness of the caves. A soft sigh escaped her lips, and together with the other Jedi, she went inside to face the darkness within.
Chapter II: Confronting the darkness
"What do you think all this equipment is for?" the Zabrak Jedi Master asked after disengaging his lightsaber. He stood up from his crouched position, and casted a final glance at the Sith pureblood on the cold floor of the cave. With the 10 Jedi that went inside the caves, the two Sith Lords inside were rather quickly overwhelmed. But despite the dark taint they leave on the Galaxy, the Master hoped they would finally find peace. "I'm not sure, I expected this facility to store weapons, supplies, or something crucial to their war effort, considering how far behind their lines this place is." Valery said in response.
But looking around, they only saw strange devices - machines they had never seen before, and none of the Jedi had any idea what they were for with the exception of one device, which looked similar to some of the more advanced medical beds they had on-board medical stations. But unlike those, the patient could barely be seen inside this pod, and some of the systems linked up to it were very different in nature as well.
"It looks like a medical facility, but I've never seen any equipment like this before." the Zabrak Jedi said while he inspected the pod more closely. "Well, I'm sure the Republic engineers will be able to figure it out. Our task here is done, so we hold this position until reinforcements arrive." she said with a lack of interest in the devices. Understanding sophisticated technology wasn't a skill she possessed, so there were better ways to spend her time.
Valery would move away from the chamber of devices, and found herself a more quiet spot where she could reflect on what happened thus far, and keep herself focused through a routine of mental exercises. The Jedi who had fought alongside her knew her well, and gave her the time and space she needed. They took the time to rest after the intense fighting, and waited for new orders to arrive.
But while they expected new orders, after several hours of waiting something unexpected hit them all as a tremor through the Force. A great imminent darkness sent shivers down their spines, and caused all Jedi to rise up to their feet. "Did you feel that?" one Jedi asked while another stepped towards the door leading into their room. "We have company.." the Zabrak Master said as he felt the enemy approaching.
Having felt it too, Valery stepped into the room with the other Jedi and they quickly moved towards the entrance of the cave together to prepare. At this point, the sun had gone down and only the moon and stars above reflected light down to the jungles of Onderon. But the Keshian Master needed little light to see them moving through the jungle - her oranges eyes were able to see the heat produced by their bodies. The incoming group she spotted was much stronger than the forces that were defending the cave originally, and up in orbit she could see a Sith fleet dropping from hyperspace.
"We stand our ground here." Valery said, her voice calm and her exterior confident. "They're going to hit us hard but if we stand together, we can make it through this." she said, hoping to calm the nerves of those around her. But seeing the approaching threat, Valery knew they were going to be up all night, fighting off wave after wave of enemy attacks.
The first waves, the Jedi were able to push back without significant casualties but the enemy forces knew what they were doing, and were exhausting the valiant defenders gradually through sustained efforts. One-by-one, the Republic soldiers were taken out over the course of the night, until only the Jedi remained and it wouldn't be long until the first fell, as Sith joined the battle.
Throughout the night, the fierce fighting continued but as eventually only a handful of Jedi remained, Valery realized that this battle was over. They were exhausted, injured and only the Zabrak Master and herself had the mental strength to keep fighting. Thoughts of surrendering briefly crossed her mind, but she understood that it would likely lead to execution, so she dismissed the option and decided she had to step up as their leader.
"Move into the facility and stand back." Valery said as she glanced over her shoulder. Her words seemed to surprise the Zabrak, who had always stood beside her when things got tough. But the fierce, determined look in her eyes made him understand how serious she was, and he trusted her more than anybody else. He simply nodded his head, and guided the others back inside, while Valery moved towards the approaching group of Sith.
What exactly happened after they separated is knowledge only Valery holds within her memory, but from within the caves, the Jedi could feel the Force manifest itself to a far greater extent. Constant clashing of blades was then followed by a large explosion and after several minutes of intense fighting, everything went very quiet. The dark, corrupting presences that first left a taint on the jungle were gone but the Zabrak could feel the pain from his friend echo into his body through the Force.
Without second thought, he moved out of the facility and ran into the jungle, where he found her on the ground, surrounded by a few dark cloaked bodies. Her clothing was torn in several places, her body bruised and bleeding, and her eyes were closed while she fought to stay alive. The Zabrak kneeled down besides her with a frown covering his face, and balled his hands into fists.
The fight was over but at what cost, he wondered. The Imperial forces were still out there in great forces, and they had no clue whether or not this facility was even worth defending. But they all had their orders, and they followed them until the end.
But while many had lost their lives serving the Republic, there was still hope for his closest friend.
(Character commission I own)
Chapter III: Lost to time
Carrying the injured woman in his arms, the Zabrak Master rushes past the other Jedi, and through the facility until he reached the room filled with machines. Behind him, he could feel dark presences moving through the jungle, and directly towards him. He had no time to waste, and his eyes turned to the peculiar medical pod. He quickly made his way there to open it up and gently, he placed her inside and looked at her - she was in a great deal of pain, to an extent he had only seen once before. Normally, he'd never trust a device like this but she was going to die without immediate medical assistance, and there was no way he'd escape carrying her.
So the Zabrak Master was left with no choice - he was forced to place his trust in this machine.
"Hang in there, Valery." he said as he glanced at her one last time, before closing the pod.
He would watch as systems came online automatically, and her current medical state was displayed on one of the monitors linked up to it - it didn't look good. But luckily, the machine was designed to automatically take care of whoever was inside as well. Sounds of the pod sealing would swiftly be followed by various green lights blinking and moments later, the monitor showed that her biological signature was rapidly changing. He didn't understand what it meant, but he could feel her presence in the Force, extremely faint but slowly shifting to a stable state once again.
"May the Force be with you, my old friend. I will be back soon." he said with his infectious smile, as he placed his hand on the pod.
The Zabrak then removed the lightsaber from his belt and began to move through the facility again, first gathering the few other Jedi before heading for the exit into the jungle. He knew that if the Sith were to find Valery, she would be killed so in an attempt to keep her alive, he would turn to his mastery of the elements to collapse the cave behind him. leaving her trapped. With how faint her signature in the Force had become within that device, nobody would be able to sense her but he knew exactly where she was, and intended to bring help back to her, after making his escape.
With his friend on his mind, the Zabrak moved into the jungle at night and began his journey back towards the city of Iziz, unbeknownst of the ambush that was waiting for him between the tall trees and green flora of Onderon's jungle.
Trapped within a stasis chamber buried underneath layers of rock, dirt and metal, Valery Noble shifted away into a world of dreams she would never escape from alone. Throughout her life, she had always followed the will of the Force, and trusted it to guide her path. Once again, her destiny would be determined by its will, and only time would stand in the way of her awakening.