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Approved Starship Turbulent-Class Pocket Star Destroyer | FDS Adjudicator

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Marlon Sularen

Warlord of the Empire
Marlon Sularen
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
STANDARD FEATURES
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
STRENGTHS
  • Heavy Armament | The FDS Adjudicator is equipped with a Vast amount of Heavy Weaponry allowing it to square off against larger ships and numerically-superior foes.
  • Strong Defenses & Shielding | The FDS Adjudicator is equipped with a Strong and Versatile Defensive System allowing it to defend itself from attacks from enemy starfighter squadrons and larger enemy warships
  • Shield Force Multipliers | The FDS Adjudicator features Shield Force Multipliers which grants the Warship increased protection from Alpha Strikes and Nova Flares from both hostile Warships and enemy Starfighter Squadrons respectively
  • Cloaking Device | The FDS Adjudicator is equipped with a Stygian Cloaking Device enabling it to slip in and out of entire star systems undetected and allowing it to conduct surprise attacks and hit-and-run strikes against hostile forces.
  • SLAM Drive | The FDS Adjudicator is outfitted with a SLAM Drive designed to provide bursts of acceleration needed for pursuit and ramming scenarios.
WEAKNESSES
  • Low Mobility | When the SLAM Drive is not utilized , the FDS Adjudicator is plagued with Low Speed and Maneuverability , a common trait shared by most Triangular Star Destroyers of Imperial Design
  • Vulnerable Rear Section | Just like most Star Destroyers of Imperial Design , the FDS Adjudicator lacks any defenses to adequately cover it's Rear Engines rendering it vulnerable to Hostile Starfighter Squadrons and Capital Ships
  • Stealth Systems | Despite the advantages of having a Cloaking Device , the FDS Adjudicator is unable to utilize it's Offensive Weaponry or even travel through Hyperspace while it's Cloaking Device is active.
  • Shield Force Multipliers | While the FDS Adjudicator's Shield Force Multipliers gives it increased protection against concentrated attacks on a single portion of the Ship , the usage of the Shield Force Multipliers weakens the shields of the portion of the Ship not under heavy fire not to mention that the Shield Force Multipliers are useless if the attack is not concentrated in a single area.
  • SLAM Drive | Despite the advantages of the SLAM Drive , utilizing it will cause a large decrease of the FDS Adjudicator's Maneuverability and Weapon Power.
DESCRIPTION
After securing the Loyalty of the Pro-Imperialist Mercenary known as Kenth Berik and his Adjudicators Mercenary Company , Grand Overseer Marlon Sularen sought to award the Mercenary by strengthening his Small Mercenary Army with new military equipment in order to further integrate Berik and the Adjudicators into the Final Dawn. Thus to begin such endeavor , Sularen began works on a new Flagship for Kenth Berik to replace the older MS Judicator II and provide the Mercenary with his a Mobile Base of Operations for the Adjudicators outside of Carida.

This flagship came in the form of a Turbulent-Class Pocket Star Destroyer acquired from the Open-Market and modified accordingly by SularenCo, one of the main contributors to the Mawite War Effort, under the direct oversight of Sularen himself. These modifications included the addition of more Offensive and Defensive Weaponry as well as various Countermeasures and installing the common Three-layer Shielding System present on most recently-designed Final Dawn Warships along with the Shield Force Multipliers. In addition to these basic modifications , the Pocket Star Destroyer was fitted with Advanced Systems such Stealth Systems and HIMS along with advanced internal defense systems and internal protection systems.

Now dubbed the FDS Adjudicator , this modified Turbulent-Class Pocket Star Destroyer is more deadlier on the Battlefield that it's normal counterparts. Capable of challenging larger Star Destroyer-sized Vessels and withstanding attacks from swarms of Starfighters and numerous vessels at one , in addition to it's ability to slip in and out of systems undetected with it's Cloaking Device and the SLAM Drive that provides the FDS Adjudicator with the ability to catch up with smaller and faster vessels and ram larger ones without taking as much damage , the ideal Flagship for a person like Kenth Berik.
 
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Martin Draigo

GDI CEO
Martin Draigo
Character Bio
Marlon Sularen said:



itai6Sb.jpeg

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create a Shiney new Flagship for Kenth Berik Kenth Berik
  • Image Source: Here
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: Here | Here | Here
  • Primary Source: N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
STANDARD FEATURES
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
STRENGTHS
  • Heavy Armament | The FDS Judicator is equipped with a Vast amount of Heavy Weaponry allowing it to square off against larger ships and numerically-superior foes.
  • Strong Defenses & Shielding | The FDS Judicator is equipped with a Strong and Versatile Defensive System allowing it to defend itself from attacks from enemy starfighter squadrons and larger enemy warships
  • Shield Force Multipliers | The FDS Judicator features Shield Force Multipliers which grants the Warship increased protection from Alpha Strikes and Nova Flares from both hostile Warships and enemy Starfighter Squadrons respectively
  • Cloaking Device | The FDS Judicator is equipped with a Cloaking Device enabling it to slip in and out of entire star systems undetected making it an ideal ship for surprise ambushes and hit-and-run strikes against hostile forces
  • SLAM Drive | The FDS Judicator is outfitted with a SLAM Drive designed to provide bursts of acceleration needed for pursuit and ramming scenarios.
WEAKNESSES
  • Low Mobility | When the SLAM Drive is not utilized , the FDS Judicator is plagued with Low Speed and Maneuverability , a common trait shared by most Triangular Star Destroyers of Imperial Design
  • Vulnerable Rear Section | Just like most Star Destroyers of Imperial Design , the FDS Judicator lacks any defenses to adequately cover it's Rear Engines rendering it vulnerable to Hostile Starfighter Squadrons and Capital Ships
  • Stealth Systems | Despite the advantages of having a Cloaking Device , the FDS Judicator is unable to utilize it's Offensive Weaponry or even traval through Hyperspace while it's Cloaking Device is active.
  • Shield Force Multipliers | While the FDS Judicator's Shield Force Multipliers gives it increased protection against concentrated attacks on a single portion of the Ship , the usage of the Shield Force Multipliers weakens the shields of the portion of the Ship not under heavy fire not to mention that the Shield Force Multipliers are useless if the attack is not concentrated in a single area.
  • SLAM Drive | Despite the advantages of the SLAM Drive , utilizing it will cause a large decrease of the FDS Judicator's Maneuverability and Weapon Power.
DESCRIPTION
After securing the Loyalty of the Pro-Imperialist Mercenary known as Kenth Berik and his Adjudicators Mercenary Company , Grand Overseer Marlon Sularen sought to award the Mercenary by strengthening his Small Mercenary Army with new military equipment in order to further integrate Berik and the Adjudicators into the Final Dawn. Thus to begin such endeavour , Sularen began works on a new Flagship for Kenth Berik to replace the older MS Judicator II and provide the Mercenary with his a Mobile Base of Operations for the Adjudicators outside of Carida.

This flagship came in the form of a Turbulent-Class Pocket Star Destroyer acquired from the Open-Market and modified accordingly by SularenCo, one of the main contributors to the Mawite War Effor, under the direct oversight of Sularen himself. These modifications included the addition of more Offensive and Defensive Weaponry as well as various Countermeasures and installing the common Three-layer Shielding System present on most recently-designed Final Dawn Warships along with the Shield Force Multipliers. In addition to these basic modifications , the Pocket Star Destroyer was fitted with Advanced Systems such Stealth Systems and HIMS along with advanced internal defense systems and internal protection systems.

Now dubbed the FDS Adjudicator , this modified Turbulent-Class Pocket Star Destroyer is more deadlier on the Battlefield that it's normal counterparts. Capable of challenging larger Star Destroyer-sized Vessels and withstanding attacks from swarms of Starfighters and numerous vessels at one , in addition to it's ability to slip in and out of systems undetected with it's Cloaking Device and the SLAM Drive that provides the FDS Adjudicator with the ability to catch up with smaller and faster vessels and ram larger ones without taking as much damage , the ideal Flagship for a person like Kenth Berik.
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As always, stellar job. That said, there are a few issues that will need to be addressed prior to approval.

OOC Information:
  • Permissions: Big issue here - I do not see any permissions for the modification of the Turbulent --class Pocket Star Destroyer. Please procure and link permissions here. This submission will remain pending until this is done.
  • Primary Source: Please list the Turbulent --class Pocket Star Destroyer as the primary source of this submission, since you are effectively modifying this submission to make a more unique variant.
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Strengths:
  • Please specifically list the Stygium Cloaking Device within your entry for the cloaking device system, as well as a reference to the ship utilizing a combination of cloaking technology and sensor jammers to provide further clarity for later reference.
 
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Martin Draigo

GDI CEO
Martin Draigo
Character Bio
Marlon Sularen said:



itai6Sb.jpeg

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create a Shiney new Flagship for Kenth Berik Kenth Berik
  • Image Source: Here
  • Canon Link: N/A
  • Permissions: Here | Here | Here
  • Primary Source: N/A
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
STANDARD FEATURES
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
STRENGTHS
  • Heavy Armament | The FDS Judicator is equipped with a Vast amount of Heavy Weaponry allowing it to square off against larger ships and numerically-superior foes.
  • Strong Defenses & Shielding | The FDS Judicator is equipped with a Strong and Versatile Defensive System allowing it to defend itself from attacks from enemy starfighter squadrons and larger enemy warships
  • Shield Force Multipliers | The FDS Judicator features Shield Force Multipliers which grants the Warship increased protection from Alpha Strikes and Nova Flares from both hostile Warships and enemy Starfighter Squadrons respectively
  • Cloaking Device | The FDS Judicator is equipped with a Cloaking Device enabling it to slip in and out of entire star systems undetected making it an ideal ship for surprise ambushes and hit-and-run strikes against hostile forces
  • SLAM Drive | The FDS Judicator is outfitted with a SLAM Drive designed to provide bursts of acceleration needed for pursuit and ramming scenarios.
WEAKNESSES
  • Low Mobility | When the SLAM Drive is not utilized , the FDS Judicator is plagued with Low Speed and Maneuverability , a common trait shared by most Triangular Star Destroyers of Imperial Design
  • Vulnerable Rear Section | Just like most Star Destroyers of Imperial Design , the FDS Judicator lacks any defenses to adequately cover it's Rear Engines rendering it vulnerable to Hostile Starfighter Squadrons and Capital Ships
  • Stealth Systems | Despite the advantages of having a Cloaking Device , the FDS Judicator is unable to utilize it's Offensive Weaponry or even traval through Hyperspace while it's Cloaking Device is active.
  • Shield Force Multipliers | While the FDS Judicator's Shield Force Multipliers gives it increased protection against concentrated attacks on a single portion of the Ship , the usage of the Shield Force Multipliers weakens the shields of the portion of the Ship not under heavy fire not to mention that the Shield Force Multipliers are useless if the attack is not concentrated in a single area.
  • SLAM Drive | Despite the advantages of the SLAM Drive , utilizing it will cause a large decrease of the FDS Judicator's Maneuverability and Weapon Power.
DESCRIPTION
After securing the Loyalty of the Pro-Imperialist Mercenary known as Kenth Berik and his Adjudicators Mercenary Company , Grand Overseer Marlon Sularen sought to award the Mercenary by strengthening his Small Mercenary Army with new military equipment in order to further integrate Berik and the Adjudicators into the Final Dawn. Thus to begin such endeavour , Sularen began works on a new Flagship for Kenth Berik to replace the older MS Judicator II and provide the Mercenary with his a Mobile Base of Operations for the Adjudicators outside of Carida.

This flagship came in the form of a Turbulent-Class Pocket Star Destroyer acquired from the Open-Market and modified accordingly by SularenCo, one of the main contributors to the Mawite War Effor, under the direct oversight of Sularen himself. These modifications included the addition of more Offensive and Defensive Weaponry as well as various Countermeasures and installing the common Three-layer Shielding System present on most recently-designed Final Dawn Warships along with the Shield Force Multipliers. In addition to these basic modifications , the Pocket Star Destroyer was fitted with Advanced Systems such Stealth Systems and HIMS along with advanced internal defense systems and internal protection systems.

Now dubbed the FDS Adjudicator , this modified Turbulent-Class Pocket Star Destroyer is more deadlier on the Battlefield that it's normal counterparts. Capable of challenging larger Star Destroyer-sized Vessels and withstanding attacks from swarms of Starfighters and numerous vessels at one , in addition to it's ability to slip in and out of systems undetected with it's Cloaking Device and the SLAM Drive that provides the FDS Adjudicator with the ability to catch up with smaller and faster vessels and ram larger ones without taking as much damage , the ideal Flagship for a person like Kenth Berik.
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Hey! It's been about a week. What's your status on this? Marlon Sularen Marlon Sularen
 
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