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Approved Starship Tvarka Class Frigate

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Darth Grimoire

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TVARKA CLASS FRIGATE
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Image Source: HERE + Photoshopping by moi
Affiliation: Grimoire's Sith Warband
Manufacturer: Santhe Corporation/Sienar Fleet Systems
Model: Tvarka Class Frigate
Modularity: N/A
Production: Unique
Material: Frigate

Length: 400 metres
Width: 250 metres
Height: 170 metres

Armament: 4

Defense: 10
Ablative Quadanium Steel
Double redundant Deflector Shield Generators

Hangar: 3

Special Features:

De-ionizer
Standard Navigational Systems
Standard Sensor Array
Standard Life Support Systems
HoloNet Transceiver
Advanced Targeting Systems

Maneuverability Rating: 11

Speed Rating: 9

Hyperdrive Class: 5

Strengths:
+ Fast Frigate
+ Minor Naval Conflict
+ Quick on the Escape

Weaknesses:
- Lightly Armoured
- Can't withstand a Major Naval Fight

Description:
In order to create a base for Grimoire's growing following as a Sith Warband, the Sith conducted a deal with Sith Lord Sirella Valkner and had her arrange the creation of Tvarka off of Old Sith Star Destroyer blueprints persevered in Sienar Fleet Systems archives. The shape was kept but the armament was updated to modern technologies.

The Tvarka (named by Sith Word for Order) is a "floating base" to house the Knights and Troopers of the Sith Warband in their coming conquest objectives. The frigate is designed to make quick entrances and quick exits, in order to avoid taxing naval engagements.

Development Thread: None

Intent: To make a "floating base" for Grimoire's Sith Warband until they establish a terrestrial base

Who Can Use This: Only Grimoire and her Warband

Primary Source: N/A
 

ADM. Reshmar

Directorate Officer Fleet Admiral SJC 3rd Fleet
RESEARCH REVIEW
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Star Wars Canon:
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Starwars Chaos:
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WITHOUT DEV THREADS
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WITH DEV THREADS
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SUGGESTIONS
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ADM. Reshmar

Directorate Officer Fleet Admiral SJC 3rd Fleet
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hey I will be judging this :)

so, This falls into the Frigate carrier range and as such would need a few edits.
since this has 3 squadrons it has to make up for this by having something to balance it out.

Normally a frigate carrier will have armament 4, Defense 10, Maneuvering 10 and speed 11 to make up for it having 3 squadrons.

you have way too much armament and defense and it is way to fast and maneuverable to carry 3 squadrons at 400 meters.

so for starters Matrix armor will require some development. since this is unique it will only be 10 posts.

also I get the fast frigate thing but generally speed and maneuvering will not go hand in hand. The mass of something this big at that speed makes it much more difficult to maneuver.
also you have armament as a weakness

so to balance this out at unique production
do the 10 posts for the matrix armor or use something else less durable. Ablative Quadanium Steel is a good choice and while not as durable as matrix it is close.
please change your manufacturer to "Santhe Corporation/Sienar Fleet Systems" and link it to the companies page. here
Make your Armament Rating 3 to match the standard for a lightly armored frigate carrier
Make maneuvering 11 to balance out the increased speed
 

Darth Grimoire

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Sorry about that, I spat this out late at night to get it going.

I have taken all your remarks in consideration for the edits. Let me know if this works better.
 
Grimoire said:
Defense: 10

Grimoire said:
Double redundant Deflector Shield Generators
I think, including the ablative exterior, that double redundant shielding would probably earn you closer to 14 or 15 defensive rating. No need for any development or anything, but if you are comfortable with raising it around there then feel free - what is included here warrants better defense.

If not let me know and it'll be approved regardless, either way the submission is ready for approval.
 
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