Approved NPC Twoozer

[Jaster Awaud]

Name: T3-72 or Twoozer

Loyalties: Jaster Awaud

Role: Tactical Droid for the 1st, 2nd, and 3rd Robotic Leagions of the United Trade Conglomerate

Age: 5 Years

Model: TA-3 Tactical Droid

Appearance: [X]

Personality: No Personality

Combat Function:
T3-72 is programmed with many combat moves from Awaud Clans database meaning it has more if not enough programming to defend against a Mandalorian Crusader. More detailed, Twoozer was mostly filled with self defense programs as possible. This included a series of hand to hand combat moves and weapons protocols. Though this was not enough to put the droid in harms way, but it made the droid capable of protecting itself if attached.

This training was downloaded by the UTC Viceroy Jaster Awaud, this was allowed so the droid could protect themselves because they are very expensive.

Notable Possessions: A UTC coat with a First Order patch over the UTC corporate patches.

History:
T3-72 or Twoozer was purchased with two other TA3 units. They were placed in charge of the Conglomerate military droid legion while both the Viceroy and the Chairwomen were both missing. The Conglomerate Board decided that the military couldn’t be without leadership and since the military were mostly droids, they decided that a droid should lead them. Twoozer was placed as the head of the Droid Military, Bravo and Omega were his subordinates.

When Viceroy Jaster Awaud returned, and was in his new body, the three droids were placed under his control. Jaster then turned them into his personal Generals, reprograming them with new combat orders. The whole new set of land combat procedures filled their memory storage with quite a bit more left over, thus Jaster was forced emplace the last of the combat procedure in place of their personality programing. This means that the three others didn’t have very deep personality, but their strategic capability was very well.

After the annexation by the First Oder their current role is to lead the 1st 2nd and 3rd droid legion on Conglomerate Prime, the home world of the United Trade Conglomerate.

Links:
http://starwarsrp.net/forum/2285-trade-conglomerate/
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/49081-jaster-of-the-awaud-clan/#entry734214

 

[Boethiah]

Under review.

 

[Boethiah]

[member="Jaster of Clan Awaud"]

To submit multiple NPC in one submission, you need to duplicate the templates for each and flesh them out.

With that said, after reading the submission a lot of what's written here is vague. It doesn't really describe these droids as NPC, but rather the functionality of the model of droid. What makes these droids different? How do they stand out apart from other droids of their model?

T3-72 is programmed with many combat moves from Awaud Clans database meaning it has more if not the same training as a Mandalorian Crusader. This training was downloaded by the UTC Viceroy Jaster Awaud, this was allowed so the droid could protect themselves because they are very expensive.

This is very vague, for example. What combat moves are these? I am sure not every Mandalorian Crusader fights the same, or uses the same techniques. Being more elaborate here in the combat function allows your submission to differentiate itself.

Please go into more specifics about each droid, please, and make sure you fill each out in its own template with its own history. These are individual NPC--they should have unique qualities and quirks befitting their histories.

 

[Jaster Awaud]

[member="Boethiah"]

Edited*

 

[Boethiah]

[member="Jaster of Clan Awaud"]

Approved, pending secondary.

[member="Silencia"]

 

[Quietus]

Approved