Starship Review Phantom-class Shuttle

[Gat Tambor]

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: Create a stealth transport shuttle.
• Image Source:
  • Col Price | Artstation
• Canon Link: --
• Permissions: --
• Primary Source: --

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Technoid Manufactorum
• Affiliation:
  • Closed-Market
  • New Imperial Order
• Model: TXS RIST-01A 60 'Phantom'
• Production: Minor
• Material:
  • Composite Hull
    • 'Cuora' Pattern Plating
    • Impervium
    • Matrix Armor
    • CP90 Durasteel
    • Laminanium
    • Durasteel
  • Alusteel Skeleton
  • Quadanium Solar Panel Wings
  • Faraday Cage Components
  • Electronic Components
  • Computing Components

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Shuttle Transport
  • Length: 45 meters
  • Width: 36 meters
  • Height: 24 meters
• Armament: Low
  • Rapid-Fire Heavy Laser Cannons [x6]
  • Missile Launchers [x4]​
    • Proton Torpedoes
    • Brilliant Missiles
    • Disruptor Torpedo
    • Mag-Pulse Warheads
    • Advanced Concussion Missile
• Defenses: Average
  • Composite Hull
  • Deflector Shielding
  • Particle Shielding
  • Ray Shielding
  • Ion Shielding
  • Electronic Countermeasures Suite
  • Jen'dosta System [x5]
  • Missile Deactivation Transmitter
• Squadron Count: Very Low
  • 4
• Maneuverability Rating: High
• Speed Rating: Very High
• Hyperdrive Class: Fast

STANDARD FEATURES

• Passenger Capacity - 60
• C-3A Mercury Class Communications Suite
• LS-132 Terra Life Support Systems
• STS-84 Artemis Class Targeting & Sensor System

ADVANCED SYSTEMS

• IE-10 Event Horizon Ion Drives
• Nightshadow Coating
• C-31a Dog Fight Inertial Compensator
• Laser Reflective Armor
• 'Powerslave' Droid Brain loaded with Tempest A.I
• AR-0B Damage Reduction Armor Component
• Anti-Ion Emission Tracers
• Shroud
• Armament Duplicators

STRENGTHS

• Bump In The Night: Engineered with neckbreaking levels of speed and maneuverability whilst accommodating a suit of stealth and sensor systems engineered with the purpose of inserting troops behind enemy lines. Though of course it has been over the course of its service life been adapted as a wider scale shuttle for New Imperial Order military and bureaucratic personnel.

WEAKNESSES

• Offense Is The Best Defense: The RIST Phantom relies almost entirely on its stealth systems and maneuverability to guide it through dangerous situations, possessing meager defense systems to counter possible threats whilst all of its offensive capabilities lie in a forward facing arc.

DESCRIPTION
Commissioned by the Lord Colonel Wirm'Nael'Armiir of the Sith Imperial Armed Forces for use by Sith-Imperial Purge Commandos the Rapid Insertion Stealth Transport in order to deploy small numbers of elite units behind enemy lines for long periods of time whilst providing the means of a quick and undetected entry and escape in-between.

Spoiler: Edit Log

4/26/2020
edited name and format
added special and standard features, changed materials defenses and armament lists
ratings, strengths and weaknesses all the same

 

[Gat Tambor]

Runi Verin Lemme get this tossed into factory boss

 

[Runi Verin]

Gat Tambor

• Cloaking Capability (Visible spectrum and scanners.)

Almost a clean sweep on this one. Unfortunately, Cloaks are a restricted material and can only be included in submissions with a production rating of 'Semi-Unique' or below.

 

[Gat Tambor]

Runi Verin I mean I can't really argue that ; swapped out the outright cloaking with heat/sensory dampening armor overlay if that helps any.

 

[Runi Verin]

Gat Tambor

Works for me and will skirt this along to an approval.

Approved.

 

[John Locke]

PRE-FACTORY TEMPLATE
Submission Name: RIST Phantom
Link to Submission: X
Reason for Pre-Factory Request: Add some stuff and fix formatting.

Submission moved as per OP request. Please include a list of changes when you tag a member of factory staff to move the submission back to live judgement.

 

[Gat Tambor]

Avo Move it up

 

[Listib Hibin]

Stealth Shuttles, always cool to see. We have a few issues though...


NECESSARY CHANGES!

Squadron Count:
Very Low ; 3

[None: 1 | Very Low: 4 | Low: 8 | Average: 12 | High: 16 | Very High: 20 | Extreme: 24 ]
The number of ships in the Squadron Count is wrong. At Very Low, it is 4. Please change.

Hyperdrive Class: Fast

[Very Slow: 10 | Average: 2 | Very Fast: 0.5]
Need to know how Fast it really is. If it has a hyperdrive rating of One, it is just Average. That would also leave you with a free rating point to put somewhere else.


Let me know when you make the necessary changes and we will go from there!
Gat Tambor

 

[Listib Hibin]

Gat Tambor

Status of this submission?

 

[Listib Hibin]

Gat Tambor

Archiving for inactivity. If you want this moved back to active judging, you can do so from the Submission Modification Requests.

 

[John Locke]

PRE-FACTORY TEMPLATE
Submission Name: Phantom Class Shuttle
Link to Submission: https://www.starwarsrp.net/threads/phantom-class-shuttle.134765/
Reason for Pre-Factory Request: Didnt make edits in time/tag didnt ping me

Moved to pre-factory per OP request.

Please tag a member of factory staff when ready to move back to live judgement.

 

[John Locke]

Gat Tambor

What is the status of this submission?

 

[Gat Tambor]

WILL finish SOON John Locke

 

[Gat Tambor]

John Locke ready for factory!

 

[Gir Quee]

Gat Tambor , I'll be your judge for this submission.

The C-31a Inertial Compensator and 'Cuora' anti-disruptor submissions appear to be closed market subs that weren't created by you. Can you please place a link in the 'permissions' field that shows that you have permission to use these submissions?

• Hyperdrive Class: Fast

This rating is actually fine, but the hyperdrive section of the small craft template itself has changed into two separate fields.

Nightshadow Coating

Laser Reflective Armor

https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Laser-reflective_armor

How do these two work together, since they're both designed to be the outside layer?

 

[Gat Tambor]

Gir Quee go ahead and archive this, gonna come back to the concept or make a better version later sorry for wasting your time