Approved NPC Ubbal Dusat

[Laphisto]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: N/A
• Image Credit:N/A
• Role: a Villian/ Antagonist to be defeated/ cause a roadblock for the crew of the Lilaste Order
• Permissions: Purchased via vault

• Links: N/A

PHYSICAL INFORMATION

• Age: 34
• Force Sensitivity: None
• Species: Tunroth
• Appearance: he wears tattered clothes almost tribal in design. with several Humanoid Skulls adorned on his belt

SOCIAL INFORMATION

• Name: Ubbal Dusat
• Loyalties: Himself as the Ruler of the Dusate Pirates
• Wealth: Moderate
• Notable Possessions: the Kavast[his ship]. and several Lightsabers and various Bladed Weapons
• Skills: outstanding strength, melee weapon Specialist, Strategic Mind
• Languages: Basic and Base Species language
• Personality: Bold brash and Headstrong

COMBAT INFORMATION

• Weapon of Choice: he wields an old Fashioned Halberd or any bladed weapon
• Combat Function: he is a moving tank, throwing around the common soldier as if they were paper. he is bulky and hard to kill
• Force Abilities (Force Users Only): N/A

Strengths:

• Wall of muscle - when it comes to power they obviously forgot about this fella when they calculated the stat pool
• void born - born on his ship he is an expert

Weaknesses:

• Bull-headed - due to his aggressive Nature, he never budges on things, no matter how wrong he is
• war born - he was born and raised into battle, if something not on fire or being shot at he will change that

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Ubbal was born in the void of space aboard his ship the Kavast. he is a fifth Generation Pirate, and after defeating his father and killing him in single-hand combat he took control of the Kavast and the small Pirate fleet. which contains[ 5 carrack MK II and 4 Trench class Corvettes ]. he leads his crew pillaging and collecting protection money from the Kalinda, Roldalna, M'haeli, and the Ropagi II systems ruling over the Planets with an iron fist.

 

[Judah Lesan]

Laphisto

[APPROVED]

 

[Srina Talon]

Laphisto This submission was pulled due to a few issues. Iris Arani will be with you momentarily. Thank you for your patience.

 

[Iris Arani]

As I posted in the Ubbals Fleet, the ships you have linked aren't open market and thus need permissions! Please reference that post, as these two subs go hand in hand. If you have any questions, feel free to ask! In either this thread or the other.

Laphisto

 

[Laphisto]

@iris I purchased the ships on the factory market and assumed it was alright that way apologies

 

[Laphisto]

Iris Arani ( the @ didn't work)

 

[Iris Arani]

@iris I purchased the ships on the factory market and assumed it was alright that way apologies

That is alright, but you have to link the purchase under the permissions portion of the sub. Once you link that, all that's left to handle is the faction issue and you'll be good to go!

Laphisto

 

[Laphisto]

Iris Arani unsure how to do that to be honest, would it be a link to my inventory?

 

[Iris Arani]

Just click on the transaction log and take screen shots of the transactions! Then you can put those in the permission section as a hyperlink or just an image.

Laphisto

 

[Laphisto]

Iris Arani thank you for your help, all issues should be fixed

 

[Iris Arani]

Fantastic! I just realized however that the skill section is empty. Once that's filled though this will be good to go! Then we can focus on the fleet sub.

 

[Laphisto]

Iris Arani apologize! hopefully that's fixed for real now

 

[Iris Arani]

Awesome!

Approved, pending approval.

 

[Srina Talon]

Laphisto | Iris Arani

The permissions are fine now, however, this submission has a little confusion about sizing.

• Loyalties: Himself

He's an antagonist to the Lilaste Order per the intent but not part of them. This NPC doesn't have any linked affiliation with a minor/major faction or company that would allow him to use a Combat Ship over 500m. I see mention of a fleet in the Historical Information as well. Individuals cannot field a fleet at all. Please link a minor/major faction or company that would facilitate this, or, remove mention of any fleet and utilize a personal ship of the appropriate size according to the table above.

The Kravast is 800m. An individual can only utilize a Combat Ship of 500m.

Please tag me when you've updated the submission.

 

[Laphisto]

Srina Talon hopefully this fixes things

 

[Srina Talon]

Laphisto

That works. (Approved]