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Approved Species The Ungulloi

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The Ungulloi
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
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  • Intent: To provide a new species for the Bryn'adûl through the update of an older submission.
  • Image Credit: X [Couldn't find a direct link, but here is a link to the artist]
  • Canon: N/A
  • Permissions: N/A
  • Links: [Embedded]
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Name: The Ungulloi
  • Designation: Sentient
  • Origins: Traedaris
  • Average Lifespan: Fifty years
  • Estimated Population: Planetary
  • Description: They are a race of anthropoidal creatures, thick gravely skin compliments carapace covered arms and legs. They are cunning, cowardly and sometimes lazy. However equally industrial and incredibly talented with ionic and sonic creations as well as stea and coal based proto-industrial technologies. They are broad, with long arms and a slim torso, bulky spaced out legs and small bulbous heads.
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Breathes: Type II
  • Average Height of Adults: 1.6m
  • Average Length of Adults: N/A
  • Skin colour: Black, pale blue, grey, brown, light brown
  • Hair colour: N/A
  • Distinctions: Their skin is like a soft wrinkly leather, thick with crab-like plating over the top-sides of the majority of their limbs with small bone protrusions from various parts of their stocky bodies. They have three digit claw like fingers and two short stubby legs with long arms that reach their ankles, able to walk bipedally with them. The Ungulloi, due to the nature of their hostile planet typically development into adulthood in a matter of months.
  • Races: N/A
  • Force Sensitivity: Low
Strengths:
  • Intelligent: The Ungulloi may not look it, but they are indeed intelligent. They have a knack for industrialism and engineering.
  • Tribal: Per the societal conditions of their world pre-assimilations from the Bryn, the Ungulloi retain strong pack mentality as they move as droves. If left unintended, they will simply gather en-masse. They are dangerous in numbers.
  • Bred Quick: The Ungulloi reproduce in the hundreds daily, growing into physical and mental adulthood inside of a year.
  • Unassuming: It is easy to underestimate this race, given their impish looks.
  • Raw Instinct: They can use their two large armoured wrists to bash things or use their arms to assist their movement.
  • Physiology: They are roughly as strong as average male.
Weaknesses:
  • Unimaginative: They are, tactically unimaginative.
  • Stocky Squatter: They aren't flexible and are particularly slow when waddling upright.
  • Cowardly: Without leadership, the Ungulloi, especially the younger ones can let their inherent instinct of flight and no fight kick in, causing a 'strategic' retreat.
CULTURE
  • Diet: Herbivore
  • Communication: Draelvasier
  • Technology level: Proto-Industrial
  • Religion/Beliefs: Following their induction into the Bryn'adûl in 864ABY, the Ungulloi were re-educated and indoctrinated into the belief system of the Draelvasier, hating in the weakness of the Galaxy and conforming to their tenants and cultural standards.
  • General behaviour: They can be defined by three traits; cowardly, industrial and cunning. They are sometimes social, even with other species but they are also very vicious in combative terms; baring teeth and snarling like the little cretins that they are.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
When the Bryn'adûl arrived, their scouting parties performed surveillance activities in secret under the new directive of the Chieftain himself. Upon arrival, Tathra Khaeus and his larger group had annoyed a native creature that preyed on the Ungulloi; it made the small natives aware of the stalking, massive red beings when the Chieftain was forced to cut down the beast.

Thus began the introduction of the two species. In the Ungulloi, the Draelvasier saw the mirror of themselves, whilst drastically different biologically, they were a species persevering against the odds.
 
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Submission Name: Ungulloi
Link to Submission: Ungulloi
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex: Wanna edit

Submission Name: The Drurgul
Link to Submission: The Drurgul
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex: Wanna edit
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skin, bone, and arrogance
Tathra Khaeus Tathra Khaeus - thank you for your patience as I reviewed your submission. I found it very interesting :) My only required edit is that for 'Force Sensitivity' this should reflect one of the options from the template. From your description it seems like this would either fall either in 'Rare' or 'Low' but I leave it up to your discretion and I've excerpted the guidance from the template below for your convenience.
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Please tag me when you're ready for re-review. Thanks!
 
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