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Val'Kar War Beast

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This is my first species creation so go easy on me please


Image/credit: http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2014/014/9/4/colossal_kaiju_combat___jinjizu_by_kaijusamurai-d728yf7.jpg

Name:Val'Karric

Designation: Non Sentient
Homeworld: Echidna http://starwarsrp.net/topic/21168-echidna/
Language: None
Average height of adults: 90 Meters (When standing straight)
Skin color: Grey
Hair color: Black
Breathes: Standard life supporting oxygen atmospheres

Strengths

Force Dead: Born on the world of echidna from Yuuzhan Vong Shapers the Val'Karric is force dead like any other creature shaped by the Yuuzhan Vong. However physical force attacks such as lightning can still affect it and hurt it.

Scales and thick fur: The fur covering this creature is easily three plus meters thick leaving it fully capable of withstanding all forms of small arms blaster fire (IE hand held rifles for standard infantry) As well as being able to sustain prolonged light saber attack until the hair is burnt from the body leaving only the scales that cover its back and chest. The scales themselves while resistant to small arms fire can be penetrated by plasma and other types of high velocity explosives with prolonged use. (IE Artillery and turbo lasers)

Size and strength: The Val'Karric is massive and is fully capable of destroying buildings and leveling them with relative ease provided that they are either smaller than him or slightly bigger. Most people on the ground it wouldn't see as a threat due to its massive size. This creature is made for the soul purpose of destruction and will go at any length not limiting its strength to preserve energy to achieve its goal.

Relentless: not knowing pain or death the surge coral in its brain makes the creature a puppet to the commands of the horde. It will not stop until it is killed. The creature will follow the orders it is given until death ensues. Not stopping, not quitting, and never surrendering until it has met its match in battle.


Weaknesses

High velocity explosives: Being pelted by turbo lasers will pretty much kill anything in this galaxy including this creature. Orbital strikes, nukes, and prolonged fire from turbo lasers will take down this creature.

Short life span: being shaped for one time shock drops the Kaiju has a life span of thirty galactic standard years. It was meant to be created and dropped to wreck havoc not procreate and exist in the galaxy as its own species, while more than one exists these creatures are not meant to live for long periods of time.

One set mind: Being controlled by the surge coral in its head the creature can only be given one to two tasks at a time, it can not multi task to save its own life. The reason being as the creature is non sentient and not meant to think on its own free will the creature at hand can not engage multiple opponents in fights. Whether those opponents be a turbo laser tower or ship flying above head it can only focus on so much at once due to its diminished brain capacity

Bad eyes: Being based from the DNA of the Val'Kar species the Val'Karric shares most of the species weaknesses being its eyes are not very sharp and at times have trouble seeing things at far distances.

Yammosk handler: If the Yammosk controlling the creature is destroyed the beast will lose control and attack anything and everything that it sees friend or foe the creature will destroy anything until it is put down.


Distinctions: The Val'Karric are giant wolf like Kaiju shaped from the DNA of the Val'Kar
Average life span: 25 to 30 years
Races: None
Diet: Carnivorous, large amounts of meat. IE Droid Breakers, Banthas, Nerfs.
Communication: None

Culture: The Val'Karric have no culture however when grouped with others they do not show aggression or fight with one another due to the mind control they are under.

Technology level: None

General behavior: Cold and emotionless when not being used as a weapon of war the Val'Karric do not fight one another. They stay in the spot they are designated to. They eat, sleep, drink, and exercise when told to. The surge coral coating their brains will not allow them to be hostile towards one another so long as their Yammosk is controlling them.

History: Born under the permission of the supreme overlord dredge, these creatures are designed to be the first of many to make their appearances upon this galaxy. They are soulless force dead war machines that only know destruction in their short life time. Their history is short and basic, upon seeing what the species of the Val'kar were capable of Dredge tasked his shapers to create a beast capable of destruction unlike the galaxy had ever witnessed. These beasts do not have much to history about them due to their new creation into this galaxy. But they will go down in history as the first contact of monsters the horde plans upon unleashing on this galaxy.

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Intent:To create a war beast bigger and stronger than anything the known galaxy has seen. The creation of these beasts are for a massive story arc that the horde wishes to begin and will more than likely still be used after it is finished. The intent here is to build an enemy for other factions and players to fight and have fun beating. Not to create a god like monster that trumps everything. These creatures are set to destroy and die for fun RP and a breathe of fresh air to the never ending standard wars and force battles.

http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Yorik-Kul
http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Yammosk
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/17454-valkar/
 

Valik

Professor of Alchemy
Now, I'm in the middle of studying for an exam tonight so I can't go in depth, but I'll give you a brief touch that you'll need to address. While we do not take previous entries as precendent, the only entry of this scale that's been approved in the past was the Akure Leviathan, an event prize that had a dev thread afterwards and is barely half as large as this beast(The article has sadly only been partially restored since the wipe, but it's worth a read in any case). In order for me to even consider approving this I'm going to need an extensive dev thread(preferably threads) at or exceeding the quality required of a Star Destroyer. Furthermore, I cannot in good health approve a population of these things, I can only approve one at a time per development you or the horde put in.

@me after you've completed development and made your edits. If you wish to go more in depth with me on editing issues than feel free to PM me or talk with me on skype one day, but I'll be out of commission for larger discussion until at least tomorrow.

@[member="Supreme Overlord Dredge"]
 
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