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Approved Starship Vanguard Class Dreadnaught

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Sala'dine

Admiral of the Ghost Fleet
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
STANDARD FEATURES
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
TECHNICAL INFORMATION
STRENGTHS
  • Superior Protection: Designed using the Synthmesh, wintrium that as it ages continues to grow stronger and skylar which offers a form fitted compression material.
  • Self Repairing: Designed with the hypermembrane for protection but also the ability to repair itself over time with small damage being a few minutes to hours and sections of the suit being days.
  • Overly Engineered: Designed to give the jedi a powerful sense of control and protection.
  • Exotic Matter: Altered at the molecular level and force enhanced to be force enhanced to be highly protective.
  • Bonding: The trees are finicky and require a jedi to bond with them locking out others. The duel nature of the starfighters sees them using a dwarfed tree intentionally small and within the control systems. The pilot bonds with it as the ship interior is grown.
  • Duel structure: Designed two fold, the first is the exterior exoskeleton that gives the appearance of a standard ship or vehicle. The interior itself usually measuring in the module of the ship itself is techno-organic with the Choushin Uneti. Encased in the framework and superstructure of the exoskeleton for protection.
  • Advanced Systems: Designed with several notable systems installed on the shipsto improve their capabilities and turn the jedi into a needed operational fighter.
    • Saotome Advanced Tracking System: Designed to give hyperspace tracking capabilities to the ships systems.
    • Advanced Whammy Drive: Whammy Drives create an interdicition pulse that can trip the safeties of ships hyperdrives stalling them. They can't keep a fleet from jumping but for a moment those within range of the pulse can be stalled.
    • Saotome Car'das: Designed for micro jumps with high levels of precision and capabilities.
    • Cater Phalanx: Designed to strengthen the shielding of a squadron. A small team can bunch together and project a shield over themselves for additional protection.
    • Self Repairing: Designed like a Quellian ship the vessels hull is able to repair itself over time.
    • Advanced Hyperdrive: Designed with one of the fastest hyperdrives in the galaxy over developing itself to have speeds unmatched.
    • Saotome Rhion: For the more limited production ships, the Rhion can upgrade and repair a ship by grabbing materials and breaking them down.
    • Sasori Krampus: Located within the ship and allowing it to send jedi across the galaxy as needed. Different then the chain gateway in that it doesn't bring back.
    • Sasori Aterno System: Experimental and beneficial as it is able to move around and change the layout internally of the ship allowing it to alter with security breaches or when in danger.
    • Materia: Designed with the impressive materia for the ship allowing it to shift around and change the designs as needed.
    • Biot Compliments: Designed with several Sasori Biot Box's that handle the basic models and advanced models that can be brought out as needed and deployed.
    • Midi-chloroxian: A synthetic blood based off of human and able to allow the biots to use the force with intense training.
    • Sasori Adamentite Variant Strain E: Specialize Hull plating designed to absorb energy from turbolasers and cannons that strike the hull.
WEAKNESSES
  • Neural Net: THe neural net of the academy allows connecting and automating a number of systemsbut for a skilled hacker who can get itno the biocomputers can hack it and cause havoc.
  • Protective Qualities: Largely non protective in qualities as it doesn't fully adhere to the rules of physics. The metal looks dense and like it would be highly protective but it isn't.
  • Exotic Particles: Largely unknown and not seen in the galaxy before. It isn't invincible nor is it really strong but it reacts violently near dark and anti-matter which can disrupt and destroy it or even cause it to rupture and disintegrate.
  • Force Nullification: Composed of solidified energy from a pocket dimension. Within a force nullification field it becomes heavy. The molecular structure is super dense but able to skirt and not adhere to physics like gravity normally. Without the force to preform this it becomes almost impossibly heavy to lift.
  • Kyber crystals: Using the design of the finalizer and enhancing the power of the weapons with crystals gives the ships a secondary effect as the crystals used for weapons can be explosive if cracked.
  • Sleg: A powerful energy enhancer, the sleg absorbs and channels the excessive heat generated by the chassis of the speeder. Making them maintain a stronger level of power but also increases the chances that they could explode from the heat.
  • Hive Minded: A benefit in some ways allowing the ships to heal each others internal systems itself but it also means that they share pain. A strange effect is choushin ships can refuse to attack each other.
  • Organic: With the amnioid a skilled force user is able to properly stun and stop the functions in their tracks. As Satele Shan showed the fluid produced by the circuits can be manipulated and used to calm or disable the bodies for a time as long as there is concentration and knowledge of the fluid. Like a blood flow in the body it can be constricted and have build up of waste or gunk that damages the ship like a heart attack or even stroke.
  • Shared Pain: A danger and something felt from the onset and creation of them. The choushin share pain which can affect all of the ships from starfighters to capital ships.
  • Orissa: Designed with the Orissa that is a solid plate covered in drop pods reducing underside defenses and cannon.
  • Biological: The nature of the biot is living flesh and it is able to be infected with sickness or virus such as flesh eating sickness.
DESCRIPTION
Designed by Sala'dine for Viera Kisep Viera Kisep a long time ally and fellow Imperial. The Vanguard is in many ways a culmination of the work they have done redeveloping Imperial technologies to maintain order. With some heavy alterations as it is designed to give her a mobile base to train and maintain her soldiers. The size of it ancient Imperial standards but sleeker.. smoother and able to deploy ablative armor for additional protection and as a gift the highly experimental energy absorbing hull plating. Weapon wise it is meant to be a mixture of offense and defense but it has a range and utalizes the rotating design of the song of war allowing fastering firing and rapid cooling of the cannons. A massive hanger and trooper compliment that is able to be deployed from the ship. Extra care taken to mobile factories and bays within for developing her own equipment, repairing it and fighters. Fabricating and manufacturing. Internal security systems made so that the ship bonds to Viera and will respond to her thoughts more when she travels with it. A small compliment of the new generation munitions added as their advanced weapons division develops new means of combining older and newer technolgoies. The Second FLeet unveiling it to her with some of the additional features allowing it to operate with less crew then required.
 

Ravenfire

King of Pumpkins
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Sala'dine Sala'dine

Hi there, I'm going to be reviewing this submission today.

So let's begin

First off, talk me through why this submission has both ship and droid submission components to it? Does it turn into a droid or is something else going on that I've missed on my initial read through.

Second, I don't see trees in this submission nor is it a starfighter and yet below is one of your strengths, could you please clarify?
  • Bonding: The trees are finicky and require a jedi to bond with them locking out others. The duel nature of the starfighters sees them using a dwarfed tree intentionally small and within the control systems. The pilot bonds with it as the ship interior is grown.
Third, you've named the submission itself the vanguard class dreadnaught but its model name is bioconstruct, why is this?

Forth, what is a Choushin? You classify this submission as one in your ship Classification but as far as I am aware this has never been a class of star wars ship not am I aware of any Choushin creature or the like? Do you have a link so that I can know what a Choushin is?

Fifth, Duel Structure strength, is this meant to suggest this ship can be both a ship and a droid/creature?

Sixth, so Midi-chloroxians allows the ship to access the force? How is a ship able to use the force exactly?

Lastly, Biological: The nature of the biot is living flesh and it is able to be infected with sickness or virus such as flesh eating sickness. Again is this a ship or a droid masquerading as a ship?
 

Sala'dine

Admiral of the Ghost Fleet
Ravenfire Ravenfire

First off, talk me through why this submission has both ship and droid submission components to it? Does it turn into a droid or is something else going on that I've missed on my initial read through.
Yes the ship is a biot droid that is also a ship.

Second, I don't see trees in this submission nor is it a starfighter and yet below is one of your strengths, could you please clarify?
  • Bonding: The trees are finicky and require a jedi to bond with them locking out others. The duel nature of the starfighters sees them using a dwarfed tree intentionally small and within the control systems. The pilot bonds with it as the ship interior is grown.
Copy/paste termplate but the ship itself is a tree. the Choushin were made like Jurei ship... they grow from seeds and bond with their captains.

Third, you've named the submission itself the vanguard class dreadnaught but its model name is bioconstruct, why is this?
Yes Bioconstruct is its classification, it is a bio-engineered droid in ship form.

Forth, what is a Choushin? You classify this submission as one in your ship Classification but as far as I am aware this has never been a class of star wars ship not am I aware of any Choushin creature or the like? Do you have a link so that I can know what a Choushin is?
Living tree ships that grow sapling ships. Experimental Choushin Biot Ship

Fifth, Duel Structure strength, is this meant to suggest this ship can be both a ship and a droid/creature?
Yes it is above.

Sixth, so Midi-chloroxians allows the ship to access the force? How is a ship able to use the force exactly?
THe biot can as part of their bond with the captain being able to shore thoughts and impressions. Makes it so the vessel doesn't respond to boarders as an extra security measure.

Lastly, Biological: The nature of the biot is living flesh and it is able to be infected with sickness or virus such as flesh eating sickness. Again is this a ship or a droid masquerading as a ship?
Both the choushin ships are both droid and ship.
 

Ravenfire

King of Pumpkins
Moderator
Sala'dine Sala'dine

Okay sorry for the long time away, got busy.

Alright so its similar it sounds to like Yuuzhan Vong ships with them being bio ships and so sure the ship could technically allow the captain to use it as a force battery.

So just to clarify before I push on with it being a bio engineered droid being a ship, it cannot turn itself just into a flat out droid at any point correct? It can't just Voltron itself into a droid? or parts of the ship opening up to be arms, legs and whatever? I think thats where I am probably getting confused and a clarification on it would help me judge this properly.
 
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