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Approved NPC Voice of Wrath - Rive

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION



  • | Intent | To submit a subordinate that leads the Sith Empire's armies under the command of [member="Kor Vexen"].
  • ​| Image Credit | Source
  • | Role | Imperial Legion Commander - Lieutenant General
  • | Links | N/A
PHYSICAL INFORMATION



  • | Age | ~4,000
  • | Force Sensitivity | Knight
  • | Species | Gen'Dai
  • | Appearance |
Rive is a male Gen'dai that stands at over two and a half meters tall, with a bulky upper body. The muscle cords that make up his body range from light to dark red. There are a number of scars on his face that are indicative of the numerous battles he has been in. Rive is clad in durasteel armor with a simple undersuit to conceal and retain his humanoid form.

SOCIAL INFORMATION



  • | Name | Rive
  • | Loyalties | [member="Kor Vexen"] / The Red Legion
  • | Wealth |
Gen'dai do not care much for material wealth and Rive does not care for it either. He will take whatever he wants by force if necessary if he needs something. Few species would say no to a Gen'dai wielding a large vibrosword to begin with.
  • | Notable Possessions |
​Rive wears a set of thick durasteel armor that is in segments, allowing for his physiology to stretch and extend out. In addition to this he wields a large vibrosword as his preferred weapon that he can use to cleave enemies in two.
  • | Skills |
​Melee Combat [Armed/Unarmed] / Accelerated Adaptive Regeneration / Battle Precognition
  • | Personality |
​Rive is vicious and merciless, with a bloodthirst that is difficult to quell once he gets going. He is difficult to be around and is the farthest thing when it comes to being social. He is arrogant and brutish with a penchant for defying authority, especially when it comes to being told what to do by those he views as inferior. There is only one thing that interests Rive and it is bloodshed; wanton, indiscriminate bloodshed. He is the type of person you do not want to be in the same room as for an extended period of time; or any length of time for that matter..

COMBAT INFORMATION



  • | Weapon of Choice |
Rive likes to wield a large Phrik vibrosword and cut through the enemy's frontline like a Sith, with the brutality and relentlessness of a barbaric savage. He takes great pleasure in cleaving through his enemies and cutting them down like a butcher.
  • | Combat Function |
​Rive is a commander of the Red Legion, and typically is at the forefront of the battle where he thrives best. His area of expertise is striking fear and despair into enemies when they see their comrades cleaved in two with blood, limbs and guts flying everywhere as Rive tears his enemies apart.

Strengths |
  • [ Tear them Asunder ] | Rive's near berserker like behavior on the battlefield makes him a fearsome force of nature, not one to be confronted by. He s relentless and merciless in his pursuit of blood and is capable of cleaving entire companies down on his own, growing even more ferocious the more injuries he sustains in battle.
  • [ What Doesn't Kill Me, Makes Me Stronger ] | Rive possesses an accelerated healing factor, even by Gen'dai standards, allowing him to regenerate and grow lost/severed limbs with frightening speeds. There is also some adaptive quality in his genetic makeup that allows him to grow resistant and calloused to whatever forms of damage he takes ie hardening his muscle cords to deflect kinetic damage or become increasingly more resistant to elements.
Weaknesses |
  • [ Loose Cannon ] | Many know to keep their distance from Rive once he has begun his rage filled rampage. It is not uncommon for friendlies in addition to enemies fall before Rive as he is hardly able to distinguish friend from foe. He will rip and tear apart anyone in his way. Though his berserker like behavior on the battlefield make him a powerful asset, it only furthers his descent into madness via accelerated psychosis.
  • [ Descent unto Madness ] | Though Rive's regenerative abilities are superior to most Gen'dai, it comes at the cost of his own sanity. Each encounter that brings him closer to the brink of 'death' where he would suffer injuries that would be considered fatal to most species such as decapitation or any form of severe damage to his head pushes his mental limits. This further throws Rive into a rage induced monster that will require extensive measures to keep down until his mind regresses into a more clear state.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION




Rive is the elder of two Gen'dai brothers, serving as a commander of the Sith Imperial Legion. Rive, with his fellow brother Guile spent much of their existence in peaceful isolation for many, many centuries. They were hermits that sought to help and educate the younger species that came across them though this would take a turn for the worse as the years passed by. Being the older of the two Gen'dai, Rive was the first to begin experiencing the effects of psychosis that his species was prone to, having grown tired of the peaceful life they lived, and forcing his younger brother to follow in his steps. Where Rive chose action, Guile chose logic and thus was constantly balancing out with his more level headed brother when a poor course of action was taken.

Eventually the two would part ways, and Rive would travel amongst the stars, seeking to sate his growing bloodlust. He grew as a nightmarish legend amongst the stars, traveling to planets to wreak chaos and leave a trail of bodies in his wake. Though he was not very bright, he began to get creative with his murderous methods, seeking new ways to bring pain and agony upon his victims, and yet he continued to want more. Despite having gone separate ways from his brother, the two shared a bond that allowed Rive to find his way back to his brother Guile, who had since fallen in line with the Sith in pursuit of knowledge. Reunited, Rive sought to understand why his brother Guile had chosen the path of submission, having immediately grown to dislike the Anzati Sith that his brother deigned to follow.

In open defiance, Rive attempted to turn on Kor Vexen and add to his list of victims that he would have torn apart. It was a fierce battle for Rive, though it did not seem to be much of a challenge to the superior skill and combat prowess of Vexen, who continued to cut Rive down again and again. At some point, Rive had completely lost himself to his bloodlust and thus required containment which was of little issue to the Anzati Sith who was a master of Force Stasis. Though Vexen was not too particularly interested with Rive as he was Guile, he still saw potential in the Gen'dai and offered him a position as a commander in his Legion. Once Rive had returned to a sane mental state, he too bent the knee and serves as Vexen's subordinate.
 
[member="Kor Vexen"]

A really really solid well put together submission.

Once again, my only question is, do you have a submission for the Red Legion? If so could you please add it to the links for this submission.
 
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As per the Pre-Codex rules, linked here, a submission only remains in the Pre-Codex for about month. This submission has been present for a little longer than that.

Please let Codex Staff know if you intend to complete this submission when you have a moment. Otherwise, if we don't hear anything, we will archive the submission for inactivity. You can always reach out to Codex Staff to have it placed back in Pre-Codex when you're ready/have time.
 
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