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Factory Denied Volleyball Shield

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To create a retribution shield
  • Image Source: (Please link to where you found the image, or to the original artist if possible. TinEye or Google Image Search can help.)
  • Canon Link:
  • Permissions: (Please link any Marketplace purchase approvals or other permissions to use other Writer’s submissions as part of the submission)
  • Primary Source: (Please link and cite the sources which you are modifying for your use in your submission.)
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
  • Manufacturer: Whimsy
  • Affiliation:
  • Model: VB017
  • Modularity: (Can components of this submission be swapped out for other components? Is it especially easy to modify? For most submissions, put 'No'.)
  • Production: The scale is Unique (Only One Character), Semi-Unique (A single small unit, squad, or squadron), Limited (Only one small group of characters. IE: A Single Minor Faction, Company, or Group within a faction.), Minor (Large groups of characters. (IE: A Single Major Faction, a few companies, or groups.), Mass-Produced. (Anyone.) Characters refer to NPCs & PCs.)
  • Material:
    • Shield Components
    • Generators
    • Batteries
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: (Anti-Blaster, Anti-Ballistic, Multipurpose, Other)
  • Weight: (Please choose a weight between Extreme, Very Heavy, Heavy, Average, Light, Very Light and Weightless.)
  • Resistances: (For each category choose from: None, Very Low, Low, Average, High, Very High, Extreme. Ratings of High, Very High, and Extreme will need to be added as strengths with elaboration.) Resistance Ratings Extreme will require the submission to be Semi-Unique. This Resistance Rating is considered very strong and are usually dealing with unique items that should be restricted to Player Characters only.
    • Energy: (And other Blaster type weapons) How much protection does the armor provide against this type of damage?
    • Kinetic: How much protection does the armor provide against this type of damage?
    • Lightsabers: How much protection does the armor provide against this type of damage?
    • Other: How much protection does the armor provide against this type of damage? (Examples: Sonic, EMP/ION, Elemental. You must disclose each specific type that applies to this submission with its own rating.)
SPECIAL FEATURES
  • The Volleyball Shield - Based on the Retribution Feedback Shieldbut scaled up so that it could protect half a small planet, the Volleyball Shield deflect most forms of damage (add list) back at its shooters in the form of _______. The shield includes these features:
    • lorem ipsum
  • The Volleyball Shield Generators
    • lorem ipsum
  • The Volleyball Shield Batteries
    • lorem ipsum
STRENGTHS
  • (Provide, in list format, a minimum of 1 strength of this submission.)
WEAKNESSES
  • The shields can only be up for a limited amount of time. Due to the size and scale of everything this shield is meant to cover, it can suck up the energy needed to power a large city in a matter of two to three hours.
  • Batteries exist to help cope with that, but these are extreme limited as each only adds up to an hour and a half worth of running time.
DESCRIPTION
(Describe some of the histories behind the submission. Give us some idea of how it might perform its function, what it excels against and what some limitations of it are. This is where you talk about your idea, flesh it out over at least a good-sized paragraph, and address some of the ways it might be used or abused. For especially powerful or ambitious submissions, a very thorough description is recommended.)
 
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Scherezade deWinter Scherezade deWinter

What is the status of this submission? As per the rules of pre-factory, which can be found here, each submission may only be in the pre-factory for a month, a period of time which you have exceeded.

Please let me know if you intend to complete this submission, or if you would prefer I move it to the archives, from where you can have the submission pulled at a later date.
 
Scherezade deWinter Scherezade deWinter

What's the status on this submission? You previously stated you were working on it, but there haven't been any changes made.

If you have no plans to finalize it soon I can archive the submission for you until you're ready to come back to working on it and sending it for final judgement.
 
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