Work In Progress Vondom Radd | Kingdom of Onderon

[CETCOM]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To create a Proxy Figurehead for the Final Dawn on Onderon
• Image Credit: Here
• Role:
  
  • Regent of Onderon [Officially]
  • The Head of House Radd [Officially]
  • Final Dawn Collaborator [Secretly]
• Permissions: [Please link any Marketplace purchase or similar approvals to use other Writers' content as part of this submission.]
• Links: [ Provide links to any relevant threads, characters, companies, locations, etc here. Canon or otherwise. Especially obscure references, or events important to the submission.]

PHYSICAL INFORMATION

• Age: 64
• Force Sensitivity: Non-Force User
• Species: Onderonian [Human]
• Appearance: [ Describe the NPC. Height and build? Any distinguishing marks? Do they show their age? What do they usually wear? ]

SOCIAL INFORMATION

• Name: [ Also worth including: aliases, nicknames, ranks, titles, etc. ]
• Loyalties: [ Faction affiliation? Is he an NPC companion for a certain character? Is she part of a specific military unit? Only themselves? Link any relevant characters, faction pages, or groups. ]
• Wealth: [ How wealthy are they? Where does that wealth come from? Are they stakeholders in existing corporations? If so, link to them. ]
• Notable Possessions: [ Describe or link any notable possessions they might own. Please link any relevant factory submissions or uncommon canon links. ]
• Skills: [ What skills does this NPC have? Are they a pilot, a farmer, a mechanic? Do they paint or knit in their free time? For Force users if they have any special abilities that are rare list them here. Be reasonable. ]
• Languages: [ What languages do they know? For example, it's very common to know Basic and Huttese, and many droids know binary droidspeak. Please provide links for any unusual languages. ]
• Personality: [ Describe the NPC's personality. Acerbic? Friendly? Ditzy? Annoyingly calm and superior? What about mannerisms or habits? ]

COMBAT INFORMATION

• Weapon of Choice: [ Military blaster rifle? Toy lightsaber? Bioweapons? Wits? Charm? The Force? Please provide links to any relevant factory submissions or uncommon canon links. ]
• Combat Function: [ Combat is difficult to avoid -- after all, this is Chaos. Should your NPC wind up in combat, what would they be good at? How would they work alongside you, or would they be a liability? Remember: An NPC is weaker than a PC of an equivalent level, and will not match them in power, skills, or abilities. ]
• Force Abilities (Force Users Only): [If your NPC is a Force User, please list their Force abilities, especially unusual or rare ones.]

Strengths:

• [ Provide, in list format, some strengths of this submission. 2 recommended. ]

Weaknesses:

• [ Provide, in list format, some weaknesses of this submission. 2 recommended. ]

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
[ Include a description of the NPC's history here. ]

 

[CETCOM]

Scherezade deWinter

This is ready for judgement

 

[Scherezade deWinter]

CETCOM Submission moved to live judging (NPC Creation) per OP request.

 

[Elpsis Kerrigan]

• AT-DV

Per the Factory submission, this vehicle has the following Affiliation:

• Affiliation: HCLI

That means that this is only usable by that group. So you'll need to provide permission from the submitter that shows they have allowed you to use this vehicle. This can be done by linking an approved marketplace purchase or providing a screenshot of a Discord or pm convo.

This would go in the Permission field.

Permissions: [Please link any Marketplace purchase or similar approvals to use other Writers’ content as part of this submission.]

• Affiliation:
  • Garm Ki-Sapan
  • Salient Interstellar
  • Sularen Association

These must be hyperlinked.


CETCOM

 

[CETCOM]

Elpsis Kerrigan

Made the necessary modifications

 

[Elpsis Kerrigan]

CETCOM

Approved.

 

[Srina Talon]

Submission Name: Agent 66 | Salient Interstellar
Link to Submission: Here
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex: Bring this Submission up to date.

Submission Name: Judgement Troopers
Link to Submission: Here
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex: To Bring this Submission up to Date

Submission Name: 142nd Legion | Salient Interstellar
Link to Submission: Here
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex: To add some changes to this Submission

Submission Name: Neo-Imperial Filibuster | Salient Interstellar
Link to Submission: Here
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex: To add some Changes to this Submission

Don't forget to include a list of changes and remember to tag Codex Staff when you're ready for live judging.

 

[John Locke]

CETCOM

What is the status of this submission?

If I don't hear from you regarding this in the next few days this submission will be archived for inactivity. If you wish to have it restored from the archives you may make a request in the submission modifications thread.

 

[CETCOM]

Andromeda Malvern

This is ready for Live Judging

 

[Andromeda Malvern]

CETCOM - Submission moved to live judging per OP's request.

 

[John Locke]

CETCOM

Denied per codex ban.

You may request this submission be pulled from the archives via the Second Chance thread once your ban has run its course.

 

[Srina Talon]

Link to Thread In Question: Here
Reason for the 2nd Chance: Never got the chance to actually get the submission judged and would like to make use of it instead of simply creating a new submission

Link to Thread In Question: Here
Reason for the 2nd Chance: Never got the chance to actually get the submission judged and would like to make use of it instead of simply creating a new submission

Link to Thread In Question: Here
Reason for the 2nd Chance: Never got the chance to actually get the submission judged and would like to make use of it instead of simply creating a new submission

Link to Thread In Question: Here
Reason for the 2nd Chance: Never got the chance to actually get the submission judged and would like to make use of it instead of simply creating a new submission

 

[CETCOM]

This is ready for Judgement

 

[Allyson Locke]

Under review.

 

[Allyson Locke]

Don't forget to include a list of changes and remember to tag Codex Staff when you're ready for live judging.

Please follow what this post was requesting when you first made the request to have it removed to make edits. CETCOM also post it in a NEW post responding to mine.

 

[CETCOM]

Allyson Locke

Ah Sorry about that. Regarding the Changes the most Notable ones are in Equipment , Description and in Historical Information

 

[Allyson Locke]

The weaknesses are poor and lackluster, but in this case, I don't see them posing any problems for now. Approved.

 

[Srina Talon]

Submission Name: Special Security Stormtrooper | Tantamount Interstellar
Link to Submission : Here
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex : To modify and Update the Submission.

Submission Name : Bloodstone Group | Sularen Association
Link to Submission : Here
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex : To Modify and update the Submission

Submission Name : Crimson Linings | Sularen Association
Link to Submission : Here
Reason for Moving to Pre-Codex : To Modify and update the Submission

Don't forget to include a list of changes. You can tag a member of Codex Staff or use the "Ready for Judgement" tag when you're good to go. Be sure to update this template background to something more readable.

 

[Srina Talon]

CETCOM

Still working on this? If I don't hear anything back in a few days it will be archived due to inactivity.

If that happens and you need it moved back to Pre-Codex please make your request in the Submission Modification Forum.

 

[CETCOM]

CETCOM

Still working on this? If I don't hear anything back in a few days it will be archived due to inactivity.

If that happens and you need it moved back to Pre-Codex please make your request in the Submission Modification Forum.

Yep still working on this and the other Codex Subs you mentioned me.