Approved NPC VSF Coyotes

[Vulpesen]

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[SIZE=9pt]OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION[/SIZE]

• [SIZE=9pt]Intent[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: Due to the VSF’s position as a security/mercenary company, its products aren’t so much the weapons it uses, but rather the people that carry the weapons. For this reason, the Coyote is to act as something that people can order for their security/mercenary needs while also offering a nice reference for when VSF’s snipers are mentioned in a thread.[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]Image[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Credit: [/SIZE]https://www.deviantart.com/jarrodowen/art/Fragged-Empire-Palantor-Assassin-611444631
• [SIZE=9pt]Role[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: Often sent as an overwatch unit, the Vitae sniper works to remove high profile targets quietly and efficiently.[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]Links[/SIZE]: [SIZE=9pt]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/58721-coyote-sniper-rifle/?hl=vitae[/SIZE] [SIZE=9pt]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/116183-vitae-security-forces/[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt], [/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/125933-ghost-stealth-armour/#entry1748434, [/SIZE]http://starwarsrp.net/topic/128711-mirdirmorut/?p=1792762(N-4 Authorization), http://starwarsrp.net/topic/122183-locke-and-key-mechanics/?p=1845143 (Authorization for Armor)

[SIZE=9pt]​GENERAL INFORMATION[/SIZE]

• [SIZE=9pt]Unit[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt] Name: VSF Coyote[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]Affiliation[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: Vitae Security Forces, Veradune[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]Classification[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: Stealth and Sniper[/SIZE]
• Equipment: Coyote Sniper Rifle, VSF Fennec, SV Medkit, N-4 Probe Droid, Vibroknife, 3 Fox-Claw Mines, 2 fragmentation grenades, Ghost Stealth Armor

[SIZE=9pt]​[/SIZE]COMBAT INFORMATION

• [SIZE=9pt]Availability[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: Uncommon[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]Deployment[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: Minor[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]Strengths[/SIZE]
  [SIZE=9pt]Near silent elimination of hostiles[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]Long Range engagements[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]Trained to sit patiently in wait for their targets[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]Light Loadout makes it easy to find a position on the battlefield[/SIZE]

[*][SIZE=9pt]Weaknesses[/SIZE]:

• [SIZE=9pt]Not much use in close quarters[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]Not made for shooting large amounts of enemies[/SIZE]
• [SIZE=9pt]Lightly armored[/SIZE]

[*][SIZE=9pt]Description[/SIZE][SIZE=9pt]: Trained to survive in even the harsh wilds of Veradune, the VSF Coyote excels in patience and marksmanship, acting as the overwatch and snipers for VSF Troops. While not deployed in large numbers, they are one of the core troops that VSF offers for customers and its personal defense. Originally trained for use in the Vitae Alliance, much of their equipment is taken from the remains of the now fallen major faction. Their use of verpine technology in their rifles makes the Coyote's attack both lethal and silent, making them great battlefield assassins.[/SIZE]

 

[Arekk]

Under review.

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[Arekk]

Image Credit: https://vignette.wik...=20180602183224

The image does not match the one in the spoiler. Please credit this properly.

Affiliation: Vitae Security Forces, Veradune

Link the appropiate submission/article for Veradune.

Equipment: Coyote Sniper Rifle, VSF Fennec, SV Medkit, N-4 Probe Droid, Vibroknife, 3 Fox-Claw Mines, 2 fragmentation grenades, Ghost Stealth Armor

The N-4 Probe Droid and the Ghost Stealth Armor are Closed-Market items, so I need you to provide proof of purchase from the marketplace.

COMBAT INFORMATION

• Availability: [ Choose from the following: Common, Uncommon, Rare, Unique. How many of this unit are there? Availability reflects a broad idea of how many of these units exist. Common are the main backbone units of the army using mainly mass produced items. Uncommon are unusual or less common units sometimes using minor production items. Rare are specialized units using limited production items. Unique are one off variants of the other types and have special features that makes them one of a kind. More powerful units are not as common, and specific named units are unique.]
• Deployment: [ Choose from the following: Mass, Minor, Limited. Originally referred to as "Strength," this reflects a general idea of how many of these NPCs are deployed at once as part of this unit. Mass units are deployed in larger numbers, like Stormtroopers. Minor units see more restricted deployment size, like Shadowtroopers. Limited units often appear in very small numbers, like the Imperial Royal Guard. More powerful units tend to have a lower strength designation and availability.]
• Strengths & Weaknesses: [What are the combat strengths and weaknesses of this unit? You may describe them as a list or in paragraph form.]
• Description: [Please describe your unit, how they came about, any special features, their training, and their tactical and/or functional application. This must be at least a paragraph in length.]

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[Vulpesen]

I don't know what broke, but it was one helluva time formatting the fix. Anyways, all should be done.

 

[Arekk]

Approved, pending secondary.

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[Kuzo]

[member="Vulpesen"]

Approved