Approved Tech Vulture Anti-craft Cannons

[Tragic Writer]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To create a free use starship weapon
• Image Source: Here
• Canon Link: N/A
• Permissions: N/A
• Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

• Manufacturer: Draconian Gun League
• Affiliation: Draconian Navy (Primary)
• Market Status: Open-Market
• Model: DX-Vulture Cannon
• Modularity: No
• Production: Minor
• Material: Duralloy, Ferroceramic, Thorilide,

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

• Classification: Starship laser cannon
• Size: Very Large
• Weight: Very Heavy
• Ammunition Type: Laser's, Missiles, Mass-drivers
• Ammunition Capacity:
  • Large: Power cells
  • Average: Kinetic Rounds
  • Small: Missiles
• Effective Range:
  • Personal: Lasers
  • Average: Kinetic Mass drivers
  • Long range: Missiles
• Rate of Fire:
  • High: Lasers
  • High: Kinetic Mass-drivers
  • Low: Missiles
• Damage Output: High
• Recoil: High

SPECIAL FEATURES

• 3 Different types of munitions
• Missiles are configurable

STRENGTHS

• High DMG
• High Munitions
• High Damage to Smaller craft

WEAKNESSES

• Low DMG To larger ships
• Large targets

DESCRIPTION
Due to both researching the Empire so far back as a base for most of their ships and doctrines, as well as certain failures to defend from smaller craft in early space wars, The draconians Have developed the need to defend there ships from smaller craft, as they proved to potential provide a significant amount of damage to larger ships if left alone.

Created as what some would consider "Overcompensation" toward the problem at hand, The Draconia crafters would rather be safe then sorry. However due to it's power consumption, and size, it is mostly only used on larger ships, Like battleships, or star destroyers

 

[Krass Wyms]

Hello, I'll be handling this.

Now to start you are 5 points over the balance and will need to adjust.

Production: Minor

Kyber Enhancements for Power cells for Better Cooling, and DMG

Looking at this and how bare bones it is and that draconian kyber is semi-unique. the maximum level you can have this is semi-unique.

Quick to kill small craft

PLease reword and remember the defender dictates damage. You can be stronger against small craft but definitive killing is a no.

DESCRIPTION
Created for larger ships for use of taking out annoying small craft, so larger ships don't always need escort ships

DESCRIPTION
(Describe some of the histories behind the submission. Give us some idea of how it might perform its function, what it excels against and what some limitations of it are. This is where you talk about your idea, flesh it out over at least a good-sized paragraph, and address some of the ways it might be used or abused. For especially powerful or ambitious submissions, a very thorough description is recommended.)

Again this is not even the bare minimun. Please add to it at least a paragraph.

 

[Tragic Writer]

Now to start you are 5 points over the balance and will need to adjust.

I think I adjusted correctly, don't really know how to read the graph for the points

Looking at this and how bare bones it is and that draconian kyber is semi-unique. the maximum level you can have this is semi-unique.

Got rid of draconian Kyber, and just made in regular Kyber like later Empire ships used

PLease reword and remember the defender dictates damage. You can be stronger against small craft but definitive killing is a no.

Reworded

Again this is not even the bare minimun. Please add to it at least a paragraph.

Hope I made it better

Krass Wyms

 

[Krass Wyms]

Tragic Writer

Draconion Steel

Production: Limited (One planet and its people ONLY)

The maximum production allowed using the steel makes this limited production

 

[Tragic Writer]

The maximum production allowed using the steel makes this limited production

Considering that the ONE planet that owns it, is making this product I did not think it would have been a big deal, But all right it's gone

Krass Wyms

 

[Krass Wyms]

Tragic Writer

It is a long standing factory rule on chaos

8. A submission cannot have a higher production rating than the submission used in its creation.

and I will point out another

Particularly rare or powerful special features will necessitate using a lower level of production, such as stealth or anti stealth technologies (for example: cloaking technology, personal cloaking devices, gemcutters, crystal grav traps, moon dust), or rare canon technologies (for example: Hyperwave Inertial Momentum Sustainers, etc) and their equivalents will only be permitted at Semi-Unique production.

Kyber enhanced turbolasers were rare and outside the finalizer almost exclusive to one group who has ong since been gone. The power potential of it is going to make the production semi-unique please.

 

[Tragic Writer]

I did not see those, I will try to follow them in the future

In the meantime I have gotten rid of all "Kyber enhancment" related things

Krass Wyms

 

[Krass Wyms]

Alright

Looks simple enough

Approved