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Approved Starship Warhammer-class Star Dreadnought

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Specialized Carrier Star Dreadnought
  • Length: 7,500m
  • Width: 10,000m
  • Height: 5,500m
  • Armament: Very Low
  • Defenses: Extreme
    • Bleeding Edge [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] Deflector Shields (Ray, Particle, and Concussion; Overlaid)
    • Reinforced [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] Ionic Shielding
    • Reinforced [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] Armour and Hull Plating
    • Advanced [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] Internal Autoblasters (Retractable Plating)
    • Reinforced [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] Internal, Retractable Bulkheads, Bunkers, and Shields (Interior Defence)
    • Extensive [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] EWAR, Electronic Countermeasures, Chaff, and Flare Launchers
  • Hangar Space: Extreme
    • 104 Squadrons
  • Hangar Allocations:
    • Starfighters:
      • Maximum: 94 Squadrons
      • Minimum: 10 Squadrons
    • Support Craft:
      • Maximum: 94 Squadrons
      • Minimum: 10 Squadrons
  • Maneuverability Rating: Low
  • Speed Rating: High
  • Hyperdrive Class: Average
STANDARD FEATURES
  • Standard [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] Damage Control and Hazard Systems
  • Standard [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] Life Support Systems
  • Standard [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] Navigational and Avionics Systems
  • Standard [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] Sensors and Targeting Systems
  • Standard [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] Communications Systems, Holonet Transceiver and Encryption/Decryption Networks with Military-Grade Keys
  • Standard [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] Environmental Control Systems
  • Standard [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] Tractor and Pressor Beams
  • Standard [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] Emergency Maneuvering Thrusters
  • Standard [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] Anti-Ion Emission Tracer (Anti-Hyperspace Tracking)
  • Standard [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] Relativistic and Shift Shielding
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
STRENGTHS
  • Shield Buster: The ax-head prow of the Warhammer was designed to brute-force open a gap in the defensive shield of a planet under siege by the Empire through a complex network of field disruptor technology built into the prow, thereby bypassing the main obstacle preventing the Empire's deployment of ground troops to the surface below. The field disruptors deactivated any part of the planetary shield they connected with, opening a gap long enough to force the front of the Warhammer to widen the gap.
  • Heavy Carrier: The Warhammer also possessed a series of interconnected hangar bays which, once a planetary shield had been breached, were situated close enough to the ax-head to deploy starfighters directly below the planetary shield. There was also a large enough gap running through the middle of the Warhammer to allow larger ships, such as frigates and cruisers, to travel through into the planet's atmosphere from the other side of the shield.
WEAKNESSES
  • No Dedicated Capital Ship Weaponry: While resplendent in anti-starfighter weapon emplacements, the Warhammer lacked the dedicated turbolaser batteries which could contend with capital ships like destroyers and battlecruisers. An escort fleet of capital ships was assembled to guard the Warhammer against enemy assaults for just that reason.
  • Low Maneuverability: The Warhammer's titanic bulk is unlike most other starships in the galaxy, and requires a great deal of propulsion to maneuver even in the vacuum of space. Smaller thrusters help align the dreadnought while transferring from open space to the upper atmosphere of a planet, where the majority of its combat operations take place.
DESCRIPTION

War requires innovation. The Empire's many campaigns across the galaxy have brought it into conflict with dozens upon dozens of systems that had resisted their overtures of annexation through force. Whenever a system planned to make a stand against the Empire, they often did so by raising a planetary shield to draw out the conflict into a protracted siege. As always, the Empire would eventually break through the planetary shield, but not after a great deal of time and effort had been expended in bringing it down through sheer brute strength.
Hence the development and creation of the Warhammer.
A massive dreadnought shaped like an ax-head, the Warhammer was made with one singular purpose in mind. To smash through a planetary shield and disgorge a mass amount of starfighters and dropships to the surface below. The narrower prow of the dreadnought gradually widened further back and was outfitted with a complex series of advanced field disruptor technology that could counteract the typically unmitigable shielding deployed around planets. Interconnecting hangar bays located in this region of the dreadnought could then launch a multitude of starfighters, bombers, troop transports, and vehicle transports the moment they slipped beneath the surface of the planetary shield.
The drawbacks of such a ship were inherent to its nature. It was large and required a great deal of power for propulsion in the high atmosphere, especially enough to keep it from crumbling under its own bulk and smashing into the planet's surface or the shield before it could breach it. Several engine banks located on the sides of the vessel counteracted the planet's gravity well by activating when the ship entered the atmosphere and pushed against the forces of gravity trying to pull the ship down. To accommodate all of the fuel and power generations such a feat would require, the Warhammer was only outfitted with anti-starfighter weaponry and had to rely on a dedicated escort for protection from larger ships.
The commander of the Warhammer was a female Besalisk known as Yan Grex who held the rank of Admirallis (Lord Admiral), whose stubborn and persistent dedication to carrying out military operations made her a perfect candidate to be put in command of such a vessel.
 
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Darth Carnifex Darth Carnifex

Hello there, I am Vis and I will be reviewing this submission. As this is an SSD, it gets the royal treatment, and so we'll be doing this by the numbers.

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

Reviewer's Notes, "Out of Character Information":

Only one issue, please use this link: https://www.faustodesign.com/star-wars-force-awakens/ to replace the Reddit link now used in the "Image Credits" section. Otherwise, this section is solid.
 
Darth Carnifex Darth Carnifex

We'll move to the next section now:

PRODUCTION INFORMATION
Reviewer's Notes, "Production Information":

This section is golden. Nothing wrong here {Except you named it "Warhammer", just couldn't call it "Barry" could you? Nooooooo :p )
 
Darth Carnifex Darth Carnifex

Okay, rocking this. Onwards then!

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
  • Classification: Specialized Carrier Star Dreadnought
  • Length: 7,500m
  • Width: 10,000m
  • Height: 5,500m
  • Armament: Very Low
  • Defenses: Extreme
    • Bleeding Edge [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] Deflector Shields (Ray, Particle, and Concussion; Overlaid)
    • Reinforced [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] Ionic Shielding
    • Reinforced [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] Armour and Hull Plating
    • Advanced [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] Internal Autoblasters (Retractable Plating)
    • Reinforced [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] Internal, Retractable Bulkheads, Bunkers, and Shields (Interior Defence)
    • Extensive [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] EWAR, Electronic Countermeasures, Chaff, and Flare Launchers
  • Hangar Space: Extreme
    • 104 Squadrons
  • Hangar Allocations:
    • Starfighters:
      • Maximum: 94 Squadrons
      • Minimum: 10 Squadrons
    • Support Craft:
      • Maximum: 94 Squadrons
      • Minimum: 10 Squadrons
  • Maneuverability Rating: Low
  • Speed Rating: Low
  • Hyperdrive Class: Average
Reviewer's Notes, "Technical Information":

You just can't make anything that isn't scary, can you? Well, as much as this is scary, it's also two points low on the balance sheet, so feel free to make it scarier. Because you can. Otherwise, you're all sorts of good here.
 
Darth Carnifex Darth Carnifex

STANDARD FEATURES
  • Standard [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] Damage Control and Hazard Systems
  • Standard [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] Life Support Systems
  • Standard [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] Navigational and Avionics Systems
  • Standard [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] Sensors and Targeting Systems
  • Standard [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] Communications Systems, Holonet Transceiver and Encryption/Decryption Networks with Military-Grade Keys
  • Standard [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] Environmental Control Systems
  • Standard [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] Tractor and Pressor Beams
  • Standard [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] Emergency Maneuvering Thrusters
  • Standard [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] Anti-Ion Emission Tracer (Anti-Hyperspace Tracking)
  • Standard [Dreadnought-Class, Military-Grade] Relativistic and Shift Shielding
Reviewer's Notes, "Standard Features":

Okay, this is all good. You're just rocking this sub.
 
Darth Carnifex Darth Carnifex

ADVANCED SYSTEMS
Reviewer's Notes:

Okay, all good. Some nice tech in there.
 
Darth Carnifex Darth Carnifex

STRENGTHS
  • Shield Buster: The ax-head prow of the Warhammer was designed to brute-force open a gap in the defensive shield of a planet under siege by the Empire, thereby bypassing the main obstacle preventing the Empire's deployment of ground troops to the surface below.
  • Heavy Carrier: The Warhammer also possessed a series of interconnected hangar bays which, once a planetary shield had been breached, were situated close enough to the ax-head to deploy starfighters directly below the planetary shield. There was also a large enough gap running through the middle of the Warhammer to allow larger ships, such as frigates and cruisers, to travel through into the planet's atmosphere.
Reviewer's Notes, "Strengths":

Okay, here's a hiccup: You describe the prow as being able to brute-force open a gap in planetary shields. Could you please expand on the how's and why's here? I just want enough to details to speak to how this would work, and what limitations might exist, etc. Only a few lines are needed, just a bit more clarity and explanation would be great, please.

The second strength, from reading it, basically means this ship is like a wide drinking straw, pushed through the lid of a cup and creating an artificial and temporary conduit through to the surface? Like a bangalore torpedo a little? Does this gap running through the center means ships outside can flow through, or are you speaking about ships already inside the ship? Just a bit more clarity here might help prevent any misunderstandings.

Thanks, and when you have made your edits, please tag me back and we can wrap this up! Looking forward to it, and again, thank you.
 
Darth Carnifex Darth Carnifex

Thank you very much! Looks great! Moving on, then......Tally Ho!

WEAKNESSES
  • No Dedicated Capital Ship Weaponry: While resplendent in anti-starfighter weapon emplacements, the Warhammer lacked the dedicated turbolaser batteries which could contend with capital ships like destroyers and battlecruisers. An escort fleet of capital ships was assembled to guard the Warhammer against enemy assaults for just that reason.
  • Low Maneuverability: The Warhammer's titanic bulk is unlike most other starships in the galaxy, and requires a great deal of propulsion to maneuver even in the vacuum of space. Smaller thrusters help align the dreadnought while transferring from open space to the upper atmosphere of a planet, where the majority of its combat operations take place.
DESCRIPTION

War requires innovation. The Empire's many campaigns across the galaxy have brought it into conflict with dozens upon dozens of systems that had resisted their overtures of annexation through force. Whenever a system planned to make a stand against the Empire, they often did so by raising a planetary shield to draw out the conflict into a protracted siege. As always, the Empire would eventually break through the planetary shield, but not after a great deal of time and effort had been expended in bringing it down through sheer brute strength.

Hence the development and creation of the Warhammer.

A massive dreadnought shaped like an ax-head, the Warhammer was made with one singular purpose in mind. To smash through a planetary shield and disgorge a mass amount of starfighters and dropships to the surface below. The narrower prow of the dreadnought gradually widened further back and was outfitted with a complex series of advanced field disruptor technology that could counteract the typically unmitigable shielding deployed around planets. Interconnecting hangar bays located in this region of the dreadnought could then launch a multitude of starfighters, bombers, troop transports, and vehicle transports the moment they slipped beneath the surface of the planetary shield.

The drawbacks of such a ship were inherent to its nature. It was large and required a great deal of power for propulsion in the high atmosphere, especially enough to keep it from crumbling under its own bulk and smashing into the planet's surface or the shield before it could breach it. Several engine banks located on the sides of the vessel counteracted the planet's gravity well by activating when the ship entered the atmosphere and pushed against the forces of gravity trying to pull the ship down. To accommodate all of the fuel and power generations such a feat would require, the Warhammer was only outfitted with anti-starfighter weaponry and had to rely on a dedicated escort for protection from larger ships.

The commander of the Warhammer was a female Besalisk known as Yan Grex who held the rank of Admirallis (Lord Admiral), whose stubborn and persistent dedication to carrying out military operations made her a perfect candidate to be put in command of such a vessel.

Reviewer's Notes, "Weaknesses & Description":

These are solid.

Well Sir, you have yourself a planetary breacher! Nicely done!

APPROVED PENDING SECONDARY REVIEW

John Locke John Locke
 

I love this concept, an SSD designed with one purpose only, the breaking of enemy planetary shields. That said, there is just one thing that jumps out at me that we'll need to take care of before I can approve this submission.

Armament
Your link to the Point-Defense Quad Concussion Missile Emplacements takes us to an Imgur link, not to a Chaos or Canon link on Wookie. Please could you provide a link to the actual weapon here?​
If you wish to keep the image as well you will need to provide an image credit for it.​
 
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