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WarMonger's Inc

Corporation Name WarMonger's Inc

Headquarters Coruscant

Locations Naboo and Nar Shadda

Operations Weapons manufacturing, Armor fabrication.

Rationale A weapons and armor manufacturing corporation created by Asaan Tyrel and then inherited by his only son Iziz upon his passing. Created originally for the purpose of supplying the galaxy with only the finest quality weapons and armor. Asaan left the company to his son hoping that Iziz would continue on with this fine tradition, As well as to make sure his son would always have something to remember him by.

Tier 2

Description originally created by Asaan Tyrel, To create the finest products in the galaxy. Handed over now to his son Iziz Tyrel, the corporation still holds the same mission. Though with Iziz now running things the company makes private and secret orders and their affiliations lay with whoever provides the most credits or on rare occasions rare tech items. Providing custom made weapons and armor to select customers and also offering several mass produced lines of product to the galaxy at large. The company Headquarters on Coruscant is where the mass production takes place. All research and development, As well as testing and custom builds are done at the smaller R&D facility on Naboo. Much of Iziz Tyrels time is spent in the facility on Naboo. The company's wealth continues to grow through all manner of transactions, Be it over fancy dinners at Tyrel's private estate on Naboo or through high stakes board meetings on Coruscant, Not to mention the occasional back alley off the record kind of deals that Iziz prefers to handle personally.

Subsidiaries None yet
 
Iziz Tyrel said:
Rationale A weapons, armor, and droid manufacturing corporation created by Asaan Tyrel and then inherited by his only son Iziz upon his passing. Created originally for the purpose of supplying the galaxy with only the finest quality weapons and armor and offering the best in state of the art droids and droid accessories.

Iziz Tyrel said:
Description originally created by Asaan Tyrel, To create the finest products in the galaxy. Handed over now to his son Iziz Tyrel, the corporation still holds the same mission. Though with Iziz now running things the company makes private and secret orders and their affiliations lay with whoever provides the most credits or on rare occasions rare tech items. Providing custom made weapons and armor, even Droids to select customers and also offering several mass produced lines of product to the galaxy at large.
Please expand upon the detail for both of these.



Iziz Tyrel said:
Operations Weapons manufacturing, Armor fabrication, Droid engineering.
A tier 2 company should only have two operations, or three very closely related operations. You can work towards a development thread to justify a third tier, too, if that is something you'd like to do.



Iziz Tyrel said:
Locations small shop on Naboo and holokiosks on Tatooine and Nar Shadda (dev thread if needed)
Please shorten this to Naboo, Tatooine, and Nar Shadda. As well a fifteen post development thread focusing on allocating funds would work to justify both the third operation and the extra locations.
 
Iziz Tyrel said:
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I updated the Rationale and Description. As well as removing droid manufacturing. Are they OK?
Yes, but as I mentioned before you should only have three locations, counting your HQ, without further development. You can choose to push for more with 10 posts, or you can reduce the amount to 3 (total), either way is fine.
 

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