I would appreciate a critique and some feedback on this character before I post it as such. thanks.
NAME: X-063 “Kenny”
FACTION: not yet
RANK: none, currently
SPECIES: human, Cyborg
AGE: 18 in appearance, in reality, about 300
SEX: male/cyborg
HEIGHT: 6’4”
WEIGHT: 300lbs
EYES: red (were green but due to experiments they changed)
HAIR: grey low cut.
SKIN: (face) tan Caucasian. (rest of body) grey and black light Durasteel.
FORCE SENSITIVE: yes untrained
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STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES (Required: 2 Weaknesses Minimum) :
+/+ Super strong: his cybernetics allows him to lift normally impossible weights for a human. He can single handedly lift 400lbs. he can power thru saber block and pars with ease.
+/+ Force user: being able to use the force can help him control himself + is better at combat with a saber and can predict his enemies moves before they make them (with 45% accuracy)
+/- Part computer: Due to imperial experiments, he is part computer giving him better knowledge and faster thinking/reflexes plus unique force abilities. But being part computer he can be hacked and used to cause harm to his friends
+/- Skilled at combat: his combat skill are amplified be both the force and the cybernetics.
-/- Rage Attacks: will spontaneously burst into uncontrollable attacks of rage that can hurt/kill anyone around while he watches helpless.
-/- Cyborg: due to him being a cyborg he must recharge every 3 days for 12 hours strait
-/- Insanity: he suffers from partial insanity due to the imperial experiments, hearing voices in his head and seeing things that aren’t real. It’s hard for him to tell reality from insanity.
APPEARANCE: standing at six foot four inches he wears only a dark brown cloak becase of his mostly cybernetic body. Most of the cyber tech was graphed to his bones causing him to have unnatural armor of light Durasteel(can take a beating, 8 heavy blaster shots), sometimes seen wearing a helmet also made of Durasteel with a full face transparent plasteel.
BIOGRAPHY:
He doesn’t remember much from his old life, only bits and pieces. When he was 10 he was stolen by imperial scientists for his ability to use the force. When he turned 18 the horror started, it started with his hands first. The horribly painful surgery that graphed machine to bone replacing muscle and skin and replacing it with metal and wires. They continued for months until only his heart, lungs and head (plus other vital organs) remained. He tried to rebel, fight and escape but his body was not his own any more, the scientists controlled and suppressed any unwanted actions. Towards the fall of the empire they placed him in suspended animation until they needed him, that time never came. Years later (300 years) the lab where he was started to fall apart and loss power and an emergency procedure woke him. He awoke….
SHIP: none
Gear:
Green staff lightsaber
Dark brown cap
KILLS:
none
BOUNTIES COLLECTED:
none.
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ROLE-PLAYS:
Post the links and the titles to all of your characters Role-Plays. To make things easier, post the link and name here as soon as you enter the Role-Play thread.
NAME: X-063 “Kenny”
FACTION: not yet
RANK: none, currently
SPECIES: human, Cyborg
AGE: 18 in appearance, in reality, about 300
SEX: male/cyborg
HEIGHT: 6’4”
WEIGHT: 300lbs
EYES: red (were green but due to experiments they changed)
HAIR: grey low cut.
SKIN: (face) tan Caucasian. (rest of body) grey and black light Durasteel.
FORCE SENSITIVE: yes untrained
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STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES (Required: 2 Weaknesses Minimum) :
+/+ Super strong: his cybernetics allows him to lift normally impossible weights for a human. He can single handedly lift 400lbs. he can power thru saber block and pars with ease.
+/+ Force user: being able to use the force can help him control himself + is better at combat with a saber and can predict his enemies moves before they make them (with 45% accuracy)
+/- Part computer: Due to imperial experiments, he is part computer giving him better knowledge and faster thinking/reflexes plus unique force abilities. But being part computer he can be hacked and used to cause harm to his friends
+/- Skilled at combat: his combat skill are amplified be both the force and the cybernetics.
-/- Rage Attacks: will spontaneously burst into uncontrollable attacks of rage that can hurt/kill anyone around while he watches helpless.
-/- Cyborg: due to him being a cyborg he must recharge every 3 days for 12 hours strait
-/- Insanity: he suffers from partial insanity due to the imperial experiments, hearing voices in his head and seeing things that aren’t real. It’s hard for him to tell reality from insanity.
APPEARANCE: standing at six foot four inches he wears only a dark brown cloak becase of his mostly cybernetic body. Most of the cyber tech was graphed to his bones causing him to have unnatural armor of light Durasteel(can take a beating, 8 heavy blaster shots), sometimes seen wearing a helmet also made of Durasteel with a full face transparent plasteel.
BIOGRAPHY:
He doesn’t remember much from his old life, only bits and pieces. When he was 10 he was stolen by imperial scientists for his ability to use the force. When he turned 18 the horror started, it started with his hands first. The horribly painful surgery that graphed machine to bone replacing muscle and skin and replacing it with metal and wires. They continued for months until only his heart, lungs and head (plus other vital organs) remained. He tried to rebel, fight and escape but his body was not his own any more, the scientists controlled and suppressed any unwanted actions. Towards the fall of the empire they placed him in suspended animation until they needed him, that time never came. Years later (300 years) the lab where he was started to fall apart and loss power and an emergency procedure woke him. He awoke….
SHIP: none
Gear:
Green staff lightsaber
Dark brown cap
KILLS:
none
BOUNTIES COLLECTED:
none.
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ROLE-PLAYS:
Post the links and the titles to all of your characters Role-Plays. To make things easier, post the link and name here as soon as you enter the Role-Play thread.
