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Approved Location Xa Fel Defensive Ring

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To codify the Space Defenses and Facilities of Xa Fel for future RP
  • ​Image Credit: None
  • Canon: No
  • Links: The Corporate Protectorate
SETTING INFORMATION
  • Structure Name: The Xa Fel Defensive Ring
  • Classification: Orbital Network of Space Stations
  • Location: Xa Fel
  • Rotational Period: System standard (Xa Fel)
  • Orbital Period: 72 Standard Galactic Hours
  • Size: Large
  • Affiliation: The Corporate Protectorate
  • Population: Heavy
  • Demographics:
    The Demographics of the Ring are as follows
    Spacers
  • Soldiers
  • Sailors
  • Merchants
  • Humans
  • Rodians
  • Assorted other aliens
  • Anyone with a reason to be there


[*]Accessibility: It is accessible to Corporate Protectorate folks and their guests. It is guarded against foes.
[*]Description: At a Glance the Defense Ring appears to be a solid mass like ring. Upon getting closer one can determine that is is in fact multiple stations arrayed in a specific pattern and conjoined by magnetic railways to each.
POINTS OF INTEREST

Jast Defensive Net: This is a series of 6x Defensive platforms in orbit around the Equator of the Planet. Upon these platforms are Guns, Quarters, Soldiers, Star Fighters and many more amenities. This is the core part of the Ring, and serves as the greatest defensive measure.

SECURITY: MAXIMUM


  • Per Station;

  • 200 Turbo-lasers
  • 80 Heavy Mass Driver Cannons
  • 80 Heavy Launchers
  • 300 Quad lasers
  • Hangar: 8 Squadrons
  • Several Squadrons of Protectorate Troops
  • Deflector Shields
(Pulled from Above Link; Jast Defense Platform)

Mercantile Point: Mixed into the Ring is Mercantile Point. A Jast Trade Station that has many berths, cargo bays and serves as a economic hub for the system. The Station itself leaves its door open to any Traders. No good are restricted though they are taxed at a 10% of Profit flat tax.

SECURITY: Moderate

  • TCP troops
  • Mercenaries of various sort
  • Reinforced Cargo holds
Xa Fel Drive Yards: Two twin linked Jast Orbital shipyards pump out replacement ships for the Fleet, as well as parts. Thse help keep the force of the Protectorate full and ready.


SECURITY: Moderate

  • TCP troops
  • Mercenaries of various sort
  • Reinforced Cargo holds
  • Picket Fleets; Parked Vessels for Refit and Rearm
Xa Fel Support Platform: The Xa Fel Support Platform is a Jast Service Support Station linked to ring. Here food is grown in an agri dome for the planet and the fleet. It also sports additional Quarters, Trade Posts and many other amenities.


SECURITY: Moderate

  • TCP troops
  • Mercenaries of various sort
  • Reinforced Cargo holds
HISTORICAL INFORMATION

Upon the Capture of Xa Fel the first Prototype defensive ring was constructed. This one was balanced, suiting the many needs of the Protectorate in that region of space. The original plans serve as a benchmark from which to construct additional rings on additional Conquered Planets.
 
Hi, I'm the codex judge doing initial trainee review of your submission! I like what you have here. After some discussion with the team, I would like you to make these adjustments.

Switch out Astronomical Location Name: [ Name of the location. ] in favor of Structure Name: [ Name of the structure. ]
Then after points of interest add SECURITY [ Provide a Security Rating (choose from: None, Low, Medium, High, Maximum) and any specific security assets in list format. What defenses does this location have, including internal and perimeter defenses? Please note that the rating is relative to the type of location this is. Normal civilian structures have a different scope in security, compared to military bases. As such a civilian structure with a Maximum security rating is not on the same level as a military base with a Maximum rating. A civilian structure with a Maximum rating could be the seat of a planetary government, or the headquarters of an inter-galactic corporation. Private security, alarms, perhaps even a defensive shield, but they should not have entire armies within or enough armament to destroy a fleet above. Please link relevant tech/equipment to the SW wiki article or Factory-approved submission. ]
It's a unique kind of location and I think it's quite clever, since it's somewhere between an astronomical body, since it's an artificial planetary ring, and a single station, since there's more than one. Once these are added in and elaborated, I will do another look over and things should be good to go!

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