Xyhn Clan Beskar'gam Regalia

[Nyxie]

(An Armor from Dragon's Prophet)​

Intent: Xyhn-Tuhros' species is naturally fragile-bodied and her human morph is even more so, so a Beskar robe is more of a necessity than an an addition.
Development Thread: None
Manufacturer:

• Akiit Xyhn NPCs
• The Crystal Heart Workshop

Model: Xyhn Clan Regalia
Affiliation: @Xyhn-Tuhros
Modularity: Slightly adjustable to fit different sizes/bodies, female only.
Production: Unique (2)
Material: Carbonized Beskar, Carbonized Beskar Mesh, Trace Cryastium/Cobalt Alloys
Description: Xyhn-Tuhros needed armor in his/her fragile human form, thus s/he looked to his/her new brethren for assistance. With the help of akiit smiths, a light mesh was able to be made for a pair of robes (one as a backup) to be tailored. The material is a basic intermediate carbonized beskar alloy designed for maximum flexibility and ease of burden without sacrificing strength, while the trace metal blends give it its two-toned blue color and shimmer. Back on Crystalsong, the item was given a light alchemic treatment and finished at the Crystal Heart by its fellow anti-colonist proprietor. The process involved continuous imbuement of the material over an alchemic forge, meditation by the Crystal Heart altar and final fitment preparations to seal its power, however mild.
Classification: Multipurpose
Weight: 8.5 kg.
Quality:
(Coverage not reflected in Quality)

• Class 5 (Five) [robe, underwear, stockings]
• Class 7 (Seven) [right hip, breasts, feet, heels, fingers]

Other Feature(s):

• Highly lightsaber and blaster resistant
• Extremely durable, yet flexible
• Reactive Cloth Crushgaunts w/ Solid Claws
• Alchemized for slight Force focus, but induces stress whenever damaged
  This con Does stack
• ​Stress effects fade after two hours from last hit

 

[Popo]

[member="Xyhn-Tuhros"]
Alright, let's get started.

First off, I'd like to see more description on just what this armor is, how exactly it's made (specifically the alchemical treatment), and what the weaknesses are.

Second, there's no company called "the Mandalorians". If this is hand made, that's fine. If you've hired someone to make it, that's fine, too. A company? Awesome. If it's not made by you, you need to tag the PC or company that made it. If it's an NPC, state as much, please.

Also, in light of having no activity within the Mandalorian faction and that you have only recently defected to the Mandalorians, I'm going to ask you to do a thread to acquire the beskar. Talk to the Mandalorian leader, [member="Gilamar Skirata"], to set that up and make him aware that you've recently joined if you have not done so already.

Moving on, in light of the armor classes you've listed and the... lack of coverage the armor/dress gives as well as the nature of Beskar Armorweave which is somewhat weaker than actual beskar plating, though not by a leap and bound, I'm going to ask to drop the armor classes each by one. This reflects the lack of coverage and bare skin left unprotected as well as the general nature of beskar armorweave which is normally less resilient than regular beskar and far more prone to impact damage.

Lastly, please explain Solid Beskar Crushgaunts. From the image given the hand coverings look more like ornate hand jewelry or maybe a slashing weapon at best.

@ me when done and we'll move right along

 

[Nyxie]

First off, I'd like to see more description on just what this armor is, how exactly it's made (specifically the alchemical treatment), and what the weaknesses are.

It's as plain as it is written. Slight focus boost, stress-causer when frayed. Nothing more.

Second, there's no company called "the Mandalorians". If this is hand made, that's fine. If you've hired someone to make it, that's fine, too. A company? Awesome. If it's not made by you, you need to tag the PC or company that made it. If it's an NPC, state as much, please.

Clan NPC's, I'd presume.

Also, in light of having no activity within the Mandalorian faction and that you have only recently defected to the Mandalorians, I'm going to ask you to do a thread to acquire the beskar.

I didn't defect, this character was always a Mandalorian, and I've already started getting involved. You may have this alt confused with someone else.
Edit: I also kinda feel like that's unfair as everyone else gets theirs free as listed and don't get special treatment.

Lastly, please explain Solid Beskar Crushgaunts. From the image given the hand coverings look more like ornate hand jewelry or maybe a slashing weapon at best.

Juuust a pretty picture is all. They're mesh crushgaunts with claws. Again, it's as simple as it sounds.

[member="Popo"] - Working on edits now.

 

[Popo]

[member="Xyhn-Tuhros"]

It's as plain as it is written. Slight focus boost, stress-causer when frayed. Nothing more.

Mkay. I'm assuming a Force focus. If so, go ahead and specify (I know, it's pretty much obvious, but some people will probably miss it or not notice it. Redundancy is a virtue)

Clan NPC's, I'd presume.

Mkay, go ahead and put that in place of "The Mandalorians", please.

I didn't defect, this character was always a Mandalorian, and I've already started getting involved. You may have this alt confused with someone else. Edit: I also kinda feel like that's unfair as everyone else gets theirs free as listed and don't get special treatment.

Perhaps my use of the word "defect" was incorrect, but I cannot see any canon thread wherein this character has aided or RPed with the Mandalorian faction itself. Because of this I'm going to require a mining thread which you'll need to speak with Gilamar Skirata about for specifics. If you don't want to do a mining thread, there is currently a Mandalorian dominion going on of Togoria that is ongoing that could use another active writer to help out. Really, your choice here. Mining thread or helping out with the faction.

As for "special treatment", we try to keep an eye out for Mandos that aren't active within the Mandalorian faction who want Beskar and tell them the same thing I've told you. Also, efforts are being made within the Mandalorian faction to possibly limit the beskar to mid-high ranking characters, though that is something you would need to speak directly to the Admin/Mand'alor, Gilamar Skirata, about as I know very little of that or even if it is currently in place within the faction.

If perhaps I've missed a Mandalorian Faction thread or a thread involving the Mandalorians within the faction that you've RPed with/helped out/etc., go ahead and link me and we'll see what happens.

Juuust a pretty picture is all. They're mesh crushgaunts with claws. Again, it's as simple as it sounds.

Mkay. I'm a liiiiittle hesitant about mesh being used as the Wookieepedia page on Crushgaunts states that they're made of "reactive cloth" made out of "micronized beskar" but that's just me being me, I think. Just keep in mind they augment the user's strength by a flat amount (ie. the stronger you are, the more powerful the crushgaunts) and that they only work on the hands, not the full arm.

 

[Nyxie]

[member="Popo"] - I'll help with the dominion, then. Win win. I'll PM you when that's done.

As for the gaunts, reactive cloth/micronized beskar/mesh sound like more or less the same thing, no? I'll just change it to "reactive beskar cloth" if that eliminates confusion.

 

[Popo]

[member="Xyhn-Tuhros"]
Honestly, the 'gaunts are fine, I'm just being nitpicky is all lol I do that on occasion.

Don't worry about PMing me (my inbox has been filling up quickly lately for some reason). Just link the thread and @ me and I'll take a look

 

[Popo]

[member="Xyhn-Tuhros"]
I've been transferred from tech to starships and will be unable to judge this further. Please PM or tag [member="Rasho the Hutt"] when everything is ready.

 

[Ashin Varanin]

[member="Xyhn-Tuhros"] - What is the status of this submission?

 

[Saera Willamina Savan]

[member="Rasho the Hutt"] - Work In Progress.

 

[Ashin Varanin]

Tag me when your dev thread is complete.

 

[Ashin Varanin]

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