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Approved Starship YT-2000 Tachyon Rising (5.0 Update)

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION


Intent: To provide an update to Coren Starchaser’s personal freighter
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Canon Link: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/YT-2000_light_freighter
Restricted Missions: N/A
Primary Source: http://starwarsrp.net/topic/50871-yt-2000-tiburon/

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

Manufacturer: Corellian Engineering Corp (Construction), Starchaser Enterprises (Modifications)
Model: Modified YT-2000 Freighter (Tachyon Rising)
Affiliation: Coren Starchaser
Production: Unique
Material: Durasteel hull, Reinforced Alusteel frame, transparisteel viewports, electronics

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

Classification: Unique Light Freighter
Length: 29.4 meters
Width: 21.6 meters
Height: 9.6 meters
Armament: Moderate
· Dorsal mounted dual-laser cannon turret (automated or crewed)
· Ventral mounted dual-laser cannon turret (automated or crewed)
· 1 Forward facing ion cannon
· 2 Forward facing flextube missile launchers (3 warheads each)

Defenses: Moderate
· Redundant shield generator

Squadron Count: None: 1
Maneuverability Rating: Moderate
Speed Rating: High
Hyperdrive Class: Very Fast: 0.3
STANDARD FEATURES
Standard Ion Engines
Standard Life Support Systems
Standard Navigational Systems
Standard Repulsorlift Engines
Standard Sensor Array
Standard Targeting Systems
Can Enter Atmosphere and Land

ADVANCED SYSTEMS​

Smuggling Compartments
Advanced surround sound system
Advanced & highly modified hyperdrive
Advanced Ion Engines
Encrypted Communications Array
Silk Holdings Cap Drain Module
Silk Holdings Hyperspace Transit Module
Silk Holdings Countermeasure Module
StarMapper MkII

Strengths:

(+) Advanced Systems to improve scanning and hyperspace transit
(+) Advanced shielding system for additional protection

Weaknesses:

(-) Multitude of systems cause power outages and power shifts in the ship
(-) The multiple systems are able to cause kinks in other systems, slowing the internal computations in the shop down
(-) Older ship, hull has become a patchwork of repairs
(-) Stronger engines affect maneuverability negatively


Description: The Tachyon Rising started its life as a freighter used by Coren Starchaser and his father, who was a Jedi running from the former Sith Empire. While Coren's father was part of the ExplorCorps, he opted to use his own vessel and the pair quickly fell into gun and rum running alongside the missions granted by the Jedi. As the Sith rose to power, the Starchasers hid from their Jedi legacy, and the ship began making a name for itself in the local Corellian and core systems as a ship that got the job done.

When Coren's father was murdered by a Sith Inquisitor, the young man took the ship and moved away from the Force, working for a time with an Imperial warlord. When this Warlord began to lose himself in his quest for power, the ship found itself working with the Dawn Treader under Coren's direction when he was not flying fighter sorties, as a supply and courier ship. Several modifcations were made to it during this time, including the addition of an ion cannon, as well as upgrades to the engines.

During the time with the Imperial paramilitary group, the ship was not used for combat missions, as stated, working as the primary transport of the quartermaster. After Coren and Kelly were captured, and frozen in carbonite, the ship fell under the ownership of Jared Starchaser who kept it safe aboard the Dawn Treader in the Fringe Federation. When the pair were reawakened, he had the ship recommissioned, and made space worthy again, with the help of Iron Crown Enterprises.

Things being different between Coren and Kelly since the carbonite-and-Force induced amnesia, the former gifted the ship to protect his wife on her quests through the galaxy, and whenever the pair travel together, they use this ship as opposed to Coren's D5-Mantis.

After the death of Kelly Topol during the events of Netherworld, Coren Starchaser took the ship over as his primary vessel. Working with engineers in Fringe space and the Underground, he had began upgrades on the vessel, to allow himself to better explore the galaxy. This was followed by a contract with Azure Executive Intergalactic. Parts were purchased and installed, including the Silk Holdings Cap Drain Module, Countermeaure Module and Silkworm Package as well as the Iron Crown Enterprises Wild Space Kit. From here, he would take the vessel nearly everywhere he was going. [http://starwarsrp.ne...to-the-unknown/]

When Coren joined hte Galactic Alliance, the Tachyon Rising came with him. The vessel was continually upgraded, with a new hyperdrive installed, as well as updated maps, being the first upgrades. Following a trip to Csilla, the Tachyon Rising was given a maser turret, compliments, and as a shout out, to his roots within the Chiss community.

During his time in the Alliance, especially since he had left the Alliance, Coren put further modifications into the ship, including upgrading the power plant for the ship, and further personal customization. A personal hot rod in every sense of the word, the ship is nearly impossible to fly by anyone aside from Coren, as its systems are hardwired for his preferences and flight style.

During the time in the Unknown Regions, Coren Starchaser updated the ship with advanced scanning technology. The ship has been modified during his time using it, as is natural with these types of vessels. This ship has accompanied Coren since its cconstruction
 
Grand Admiral, First Order Central Command
[member="Coren Starchaser"]

Most of your weaknesses don't seem to have any actual impact. You mention slowing down computations, but how does that impact anything? Similarly, you mention the hull is a patchwork of repairs, but the ship still has a 'High' Defense rating. There's nothing particularly unbalanced about the ship, for a unique freighter it works out well enough, but if they're actual weaknesses the imapact for balance purposes should be elaborated on, and if they're just quirks they don't need to be listed under 'weaknesses' and can just be elaborated on in the description.
 
Grand Admiral, First Order Central Command
[member="Coren Starchaser"]

You're fine to keep the 'High' Rating if that's the case, but the weaknesses should have an actual impact, otherwise they're just fluff/quirks. Same reason we don't generally see something like 'Expensive' as a real weakness. That's all I'm getting at, there's no need to nerf anything.
 
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