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Sawa Ike

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Name: Pandamonia

 

Image Source: From Dusk Till Dawn 3 The hangman's Daughter

 

Classification: Abandoned Temple

 

Location: Gromas 16

 

Affiliation: Sawa Ike

 

Description:

Public Area: An old structure that has long since been buried in the sands from disuse. Restored initially in the upper levels and serving as a desert cantina for travelings to come and see. The outer stone has been worked on and fixed up for it to remain standing and the older structure slowly excavated on the planet to open it up for the ones who own it and work there. The initial entryway is leads into the main public area with the patrons being tracked if they have weapons scanned for. With privacy screens in the room so others can have their own conversation and a ceuling mounted internal security defense system. From cameras to observe and record to a beam weapon that can target trouble making patrons. On the ceiling of the bar area and able to have coverage of it. Security bouncers cover the rest of the area such as the bar and stage.

 

Private Area: Secured behind heavier doors and covering the bulk of the structure. The private sections consist of rooms and standard storage in the upper areas and the lower it goes the more offices they have for the higher ups int he business. With stone and metal walls made to be strong from quakes, doors that can seal and a standard environmental system to aid in cleaning the air with vents going outside. Security beams for intruders are situated at the best angles in the halls like cameras for maximum coverage with the least amount. The main office where Sawa resides is a large room with black and white marble walls, a security beam for handling problems that might arise in her office and bouncers regularly patrol outside of the security office. The security office is mainly a room with dozen's of monitors being used by a team to cover the public and private areas.

 

History:

IC:

Not much is known about the abandoned temple itself before it was bought and made into a bar. Offering the miners of Gromas working in the phrik mines. Presenting a place that they are able to spend their hard earned credits after days of working in the mines. Presenting the finest in spirits and entertainment that can be gotten that far out in the outer rim. Regulations that could come from the proximity to the Silver Jedi who while presenting a problem to the less inclined to speak out it is still unknown. Sawa is the silent partner who is usually down in the office not seen in public. With all of the work that the others do tending to the bar, getting bands and offering a place where bounty hunters can come and find a board with special jobs.

Unknown IC:

 

Intent: To create a small place where Sawa has disappeared to.

 

Links:

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Weapons detection system

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Darth Pyrrhus

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Under review


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Darth Pyrrhus

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Sawa Ike

 

I understand this location is split into two parts; one that is open and public knowledge and one that is the opposite. However only one of those is mentioned in the description. I want you to add in another paragraph describing the private area, as this really is the submission's point of interest. 

 

Internal security systems like automated lasers and combat droids that can defend coming out of the walls serve to ensure she doesn't have to enforce as the management the rules she has put down.

I want you to provide links to any sort of fixed defences that this location has in place. I also want to see them numbered.  

 

Sawa is the silent partner who is usually down in the office not seen in pulic.

Small typo, I think you mean 'public'.

 

Thanks


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Sawa Ike

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Darth Pyrrhus edited the description and links for numbers



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Darth Pyrrhus

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Sawa Ike

 

That'll do for me! 

 

Approved, pending secondary

 

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Zeradias Mant

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