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King Adas' Revenge

- - - - - Hedan Vaal Sith Empire Command Ship Heavy Carrier

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

PRODUCTION INFORMATION

  • Manufacturer: Sith-Imperial Corps of Engineers
  • Model: "King Adas' Revenge" - Secutor II-class Star Battlecruiser
  • Affiliation: Hedan Vaal | Sith Empire
  • Production: Unique
  • Material: 
    • Neutronium-Impregnated Impervium
    • Transparisteel

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS

STANDARD FEATURES

  • Communication Systems:
    • Communication Wave De-scrambler
    • Distortion field emitter
    • Encryption Module
    • Frequency Jammer
    • Holonet Transceiver
    • Hyperwave Transceiver
    • Ranger Transceiver
    • Subspace Transceiver
  • Environmental Systems:
    • Artificial Gravity
    • Brig
    • Distress Beacon
    • Infantry Drop Pods
    • Vehicle Drop Pods
    • Escape Pods
    • Environmental Converter
    • Inertial Damper
    • Infantry Barracks
    • Life Support
    • Backup Life Support
    • Medical Bay
    • Navigation System
    • Ray Shields
    • Secondary Bridge
    • Meditation Chamber
  • Propulsion Systems:
  • Sensor Systems:
    • Aural Sensor
    • Com-scan
    • Hyperwave Signal Interceptor
    • Life Form Indicator
    • Passive Sensor Array
    • Long-range Sensor
    • Light Detection and Ranging System
    • Electro Photo Receptor
    • Dedicated Energy Receptor
    • Sensor Dampener
    • Targeting Laser
    • Targeting Sensor
    • Tri-Tracker
    • Wide-range Sensor
  • Targetting Systems:
    • Targeting Computer
    • Targeting Laser
    • Targeting System
    • Macrolaser Tracker
    • Ranging Laser system
    • Imaging System
    • Combat Multi-view Display
    • Target-Aggressor Attack Resolution Software

ADVANCED SYSTEMS

Strengths:

  • Large hangar bay capable of holding starfighters, atmospheric vessels, and more.
  • Heavy defenses that can withstand an extended battle
  • Protection against shield penetrating weaponry

Weaknesses:

  • Outsped by many ships of it's designation
  • Large bridge tower an obvious target
  • Diatium array unable to protect against physical weapons

Description

 

The Secutor-class was a carrier ship utilized by the Imperial Navy, known to be one of the largest crafts in the navy. The Sith Empire has taken the design of the Secutor-class and have greatly improved upon it while keeping it's primary purpose in tact. Firstly, the design was greatly enlarged, making the ship a definite Battlecruiser while also allowing greater space for it's hangar. Unlike its predecessor, the Secutor-II boasts a great armament, much more than the previous incursion of the Secutor-class. Utilizing heavy turbolasers, ion cannons, and more, the Secutor-II has more than enough firepower to defend itself.

 

The main attraction of the Secutor-II, much like it's predecessor, is it's large hangar bays. The Secutor-II is capable of ferrying a heavy amount of starfighter squadrons while also being able to hold atmospheric vessels such as dropships, gunships and the like in it's harrier. Due to the large hangar bay, the ship's engine units are fairly basic as they decided to sacrifice speed for greater offensive power when designing the Secutor-II.

 

The defensive systems equipped on the Secutor-II make it one of the most impregnable ships in the Navy. This ship is outfitted with a thick impervium hull, a metal known for its near impenetrability. Just to further increase the strength of the hull, the impervium was impregnated with neutronium to increase the hulls ability to take hits. On top of that, several components were included in the construction that are aimed at improving the integrity of the hull to its greatest limits. 


Edited by Zahori Denko, 27 April 2018 - 07:10 AM.

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Under Review.



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Raiz Australis

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Zahori Denko

 

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Diatium Capacitance Array VT-Refraction Sensor

 

All of the above have their own weaknesses and strengths that come together to bring weaknesses and strengths to the overall project, add them to the overall strengths and weaknesses, perhaps in a subtitle to keep it less complicated.

 

Hangar:  High: 32​

 

For the class and size, your hanger would consist of around 29, as 33 is considered very high. So either bring it down to 29, or change it to very high.

 

Strengths: Large hangar bay capable of holding starfighters, atmospheric vessels, and more. Heavy defenses that can withstand an extended battle Weaknesses: Outsped by many ships of it's designation Large bridge tower an obvious target

 

I would appreciate a more detailed strengths and weaknesses, as of right now it lacks a lot of information and is subtly vague.



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Raiz Australis

 

So you just want me to copy and paste the already stated strengths and weaknesses of the linked systems to this one? Why?

 

Very High is 33 and High is 29. Every number between there is still considered High until it reaches 33. Those aren't hard numbers, they're just the minimum. That would make no sense if you couldnt have numbers in between them in your hangar.

 

I don't see how the strengths and weaknesses are vague at all. They're pretty specific honestly just don't have a lot of detail to them. I'm not sure what you mean by more detailed.


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Very High is 33 and High is 29. Every number between there is still considered High until it reaches 33. Those aren't hard numbers, they're just the minimum.

They are the maximum for that rating. Every number that exceeds those numbers are the next rating up. For example, 42 is the maximum amount of squadrons a 5000 meter battlecruiser can carry as it is the maximum for extreme on a 5000 meter battlecruiser.

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As for your strengths and weaknesses, the HIMS, Crystal gravfield trap, and the Diatium capacitance array should be listed and described in the strengths and weaknesses.


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Lily Kuhn Edits made


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Awesome. Pending Factory Mentor Review.

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Approved.


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