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Sister Kaza

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Thiavi

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

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  • Intent: To create a villain for an upcoming thread, to be killed off or spared by the end at the player's discretion.
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  • Role: Witch, Marauder and general villain of the story.
  • Links: N\A

PHYSICAL INFORMATION

  • Age: 28
  • Force Sensitivity: Master
  • Species: Zabrak(Dathomirian)
  • Appearance: Tall and thin, with pale white skin that contrasts with various blackened tattoos, white hair kept in braids wrapped with red cloth under her bone like, pointed crown and cowl. she often wears red robes that have been decorated with primitive armor and metals.

SOCIAL INFORMATION

  • Name: Tali Kaza
  • Loyalties: Dathomir, and Herself.
  • Wealth: A witch has no need of wealth
  • Notable Possessions: Stolen Astro class LX Freighter[/url], And a pair of Lightsabers.
  • Skills: Dathomiri witchcraft,
  • Resurrecting the undead
  • Force Grip
  • Sith Alchemy
  • Personality: Sister Kaza is impatient, Wrathful, and overconfident, a dangerous combination indeed.
  • She desires to prove herself worthy of leading her people, and will stop at nothing to achieve that goal.

 

COMBAT INFORMATION

  • Weapon of Choice: A pair of lightsabers.
  • Combat Function: Dualist\Commander

Strengths:

  • Darksider: Kaza was born and raised on dathomir, surrounded by the dark side since birth and trained in it's use since she could first walk.
  • Fast learner: Kaza learns quickly, it's how she's come this far in so little time after all.

Weaknesses:

  • Impatient: She wants something, and she wants it now. This line of thinking can lead to rash decisions where patience and caution is advised.
  • Overconfidence: Kaza has in inflated ego brought on by her ability to learn things quickly.

HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Sister Tali Kaza was born on dathomir 28 years ago, being raised and trained as a nightsister. Every physical and magical skill that she has been taught, she learned quickly, more so than her sisters, leading her to rise among the sisters at an early age. She has done many things, Tame rancors, attend meetings in the sith empire, hunt for ancient artifacts, kill jedi. In more recent times, the mother of her sisterhood has fallen ill, and may soon die, It was Kaza who suggested herself to become the next nightmother, feeling betrayed when her peers said that she was not ready.

Kaza stole a series of ancient texts and learned the art of necromancy, and aims to prove them wrong by spreading terror in the name of the nightsisters, and raising an army of undead to do her bidding. She has fled with a stolen freighter filled with the stolen bodies of long dead nightsisters.


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Elpsis Kerrigan-Alcori

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Thiavi

 

Hello there, I shall be reviewing this submission. If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to ask.

 

First of all, I like the picture.

 

Species: Zabrak(Dathomirian)

 

 

I need a hyperlink for this.

 

Regarding Strengths and Weaknesses, I would suggest expanding on Weaknesses a bit. Overconfidence and Impatience are good character flaws, but could you add a combat-based weakness? Say a specific type of weapon she is not skilled in (per the description, she is a duellist, so maybe she is not as proficient with ranged weapons?) or Force techniques she is not good at/vulnerable to?

 

Since she is so immersed in the dark side, maybe Light-based techniques such as Force Light are very harmful to her. If she were to be deprived of the Force, would she still be an effective combatant or weakened by this? These are suggestions for a possible option.

 

If you like, you could expand on Combat Function. Per the description, she is a duellist. So are there any specific lightsabre forms she is particularly skilled in or is she more of an all-rounder? It says she is a Commander, does this mean she has the training to command large forces like a General would or she is more of a tactical leader heading small units? Another option would be to add some details regarding her Force use in combat. These are just suggestions, but could help expand on the character since she is a Master and supposed to play an antagonist role for another character.


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Elpsis Kerrigan-Alcori

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Thiavi

 

Hi there. Just checking how you are going with my post above as it's been nearly a week.


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Elpsis Kerrigan-Alcori

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Thiavi

 

Status on this?


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Elpsis Kerrigan-Alcori

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Thiavi

 

Archiving for inactivity. Post here to have it returned to precodex.


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