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Invincible-Class Heavy Battlecarrier



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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
STANDARD FEATURES
ADVANCED SYSTEMS
STRENGTHS
WEAKNESSES
DESCRIPTION

TBD


06/24/2021
  • Changed Affiliations
09/25/2022

 
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  • A Complete Restructuring of the Submission with major Changes for the Following :
    • OOC Information
    • Production Information
    • Technical Specifications
    • Standard & Advanced Features
    • Strengths & Weaknesses
    • Description
 
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Marlon Sularen Marlon Sularen

Update on this? I have to move the thread to the Archive soon according to the Factory policy. I can give you a few more days if you need them, until Sunday (2021.07.04), to make the necessary edits or indicate that you are asking for a few extra days for this.
 
T E R R A R I S - C O M M A N D
Factory Judge
Marlon Sularen Marlon Sularen

Same like with the other sub:
I still have concerns, the Molecural shield is very top level sheld on its own even without any other shields. So I recommend to change the defence rating to very high or replace this shield. Whichever case you choose (from my suggestions), the new weakness will not be needed and you can delete it if you want.
 

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