Approved NPC NIO SF Recon Team Epsilon

[Colton Renfro]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

Intent: To create an elite Special Forces Reconconsece/ Sniper for the NIO

Image Credit: X

Role: Recon, Intel gathering, sniper and counter-sniper, as well elimination of high-value targets

Permissions: X

Links: N/A

GENERAL INFORMATION

Unit Name: New Imperial Order Special Forces Recon team epsilon

Affiliation: New Imperial Order

Classification: Reconnaissance, Black Ops

Description: a Special Forces unit comprised of scout snipers, and infiltration specialists in the NIO, hank picked for unique skills, receiving advanced and comprehensive training in their field. A great force multiplier, and an excellent source of real-time battlefield intelligence, their ability to capture or eliminate the enemy's command and control personal makes them a devastating force in any theater of opertions. They have a profound phycological impact on the enemy's moral as well as the morale of allied and friendly forces. They respected my other NIO troop although many troops outside believe the member of Recon Team Epsilon are pro exaggeration of their exploits and consider them to be cocky boarding on arrogant.


Unit emblem:

COMBAT INFORMATION:

Unit Size: Small

Unit Availability: Unique

Unit Experience: Elite.

Equipment: Storm Recon Mk. I, REC-DC/04 "Feverwasp" Particle Blaster Pistol, LS-1 Angry Owl Light Sniper Rifle, IL-25x Sniper Rifle, BH-Specter Slicer Vibroknife, Electric Eye Optics System, IL-99b Doppelganger Stealth Projector, ASE-X Imperial Monitor Droid, RDAGx Rapid Deployment Assault Gunship

Combat Function: Recon, stealth, infiltration, sniper and counter-sniper and intelligence gathering, high-value target location, and elimination. Provide detailed real-time battlefield intel to other units

Strengths: small, well trained, skilled, ruthlessly efficient, disciplined

Weaknesses: smug, better than you attitude, difficult to replace casualties

HISTORICAL INFORMATION

A newly formed unit to both aids in intelligence gathers and provide a force multiplier and physiological ware component to the NIO SF and armed forces. The unit formed out the realization that real-time battles intelligence, was critical for continued success in the battle, as well that well-trained Reconnaissance troops and snipers could inflect a lot dame booth in terms of the number of enemy forces killed, and the phycological effect he the remaining troops and their moral. The Members of the unit for chosen from other units for their unique skillset and underwent very grueling and excessive training only the top marksman, best scouts were chosen.

 

[The Mongrel]

Under Review Colton Renfro

We'll need to address a few different things before this submission is ready for approval.

• You have an image (the unit emblem), so you need to give us a link to where that image comes from under Image Credit.

• Under Permissions and Links, if you have nothing to put there, type N/A

• Under Affiliation, please provide a link to the New Imperial Order faction page

• Under Description, I would like to see more information. How are the best snipers and infiltrators chosen for the unit? What kind of tactics do they use? How are they perceived by other NIO units? Does their smug attitude make them unpopular?

• Under Equipment, you wrote nothing. Are the snipers going into battle naked and unarmed? If you want to go basic, you can just say "Stormtrooper Armor" and "Blaster Rifles", but if these are the best of the best, they should probably have some special gear. I'd talk with some other NIO writers about the kind of gear appropriate for an elite NIO unit.

• Under Historical Information, I'd like to see more information. The unit may be newly-formed, but why was it formed? Was it in response to a particular battle, or a weakness the NIO wanted to counter? Who formed it? Where did the troops for it come from? Were they specially trained, or recruited from existing units when their skills were recognized?

Broadly, I'd just like to see a little more work put into this. Let me know if you have any questions.

 

[Colton Renfro]

k I think I've addressed all the issues

 

[The Mongrel]

Still some things that need adjusting, Colton Renfro

• Your Image Credit link needs to go to the webpage you found the image on, not a direct link to the image itself. Otherwise I can't tell where it came from, because all I can see is the image.

• You didn't add anything to the Description. I'd like to see more than one sentence. Again, here are some things you could add:

How are the best snipers and infiltrators chosen for the unit? What kind of tactics do they use? How are they perceived by other NIO units? Does their smug attitude make them unpopular?

• There are a couple of typos you might want to fix.
  • Under Intent: "Reconconsece" should be spelled "Reconnaissance"
  • Under Classification: you typed "balck ops" instead of "Black Ops"

• Some of the Equipment you picked out is not stuff you are allowed to use unless you get permission. You cannot use "Closed-Market" equipment unless you are part of the faction it is affiliated with, or you get permission from the item's creator. If you get permission, you need to post proof in the Permissions section (screenshots or links to posts where you got permission). Otherwise, delete the items you don't have permission to use and type N/A in the permissions section.
  • The REC-DC/04 "Feverwasp" Particle Blaster Pistol is a Galactic Alliance weapon
  • The IL-25x Sniper Rifle is a Sith Empire weapon
  • The BH-Specter Slicer Vibroknife is closed-market, so you need the submitter's permission to use it
  • The IL-99b Doppelganger Stealth Projector is Sith Empire equipment

Historical Information looks fine now, so we're making progress.

 

[Colton Renfro]

I work on rest as for equipment here is a link to the list I got from X, I think might change some if not all the issues with the eqipment.

 

[The Mongrel]

Colton Renfro

Gotcha! Ok, please include a link to that Factory and Codex manifest in the Permissions section, just so I know.

 

[Colton Renfro]

done, I've worked on issues as well

 

[The Mongrel]

Okay, that works. Approved.