Approved NPC The TodHusars Corps

[Julius Haskler]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION

• Intent: To create a military branch for the imperial house in-exile of Anaxes
• Image Credit: Brian Matyas ; Mitchell Nolte [x] [x]
• Role: An offensive arm for House Haskler of Anaxes
• Permissions:
  • ApexTech [x]
  • Karovnogal Small Arms Workshop [x]
  • Corondex Arms [x]
  • Republic Engineering Corporation [x]
  • Iscariot Industries [x]
  • Technoid Manufactorum [x]
• Links: Found throughout submission
  
  
  

  
  HK-01 "Steelfist" Jumpsuit
  

  

  
  Parade uniform​
  
  GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Unit Name: Anaxes TodHusars Corps
  • Affiliation: House Haskler of Anaxes and by extension, New Imperial Order [x] [x]
  • Classification: Paratrooper infantry
  • Description: The TodHusars are clad in a pitch black suit, reinforced by an armoured chestplate and an enclosed helmet, and decorated by the Iron Fist rosette tipically worn on the right shoulder, the whole attire forming the HK-01 "Steelfist" Jumpsuit. The TodHusars serve as the fighting force of the anaxsi House, and are comprised of the most capable warriors the Hasklers can field. Trained since their youth to become brutal and highly motivated combattants, the TodHusars are also educated to perpetuate the imperial-anxasi culture, and as such have no discomfort in having company of anaxsi and imperial citizens. While training and fighting form the most of their life, the TodHusars know perfectly well they will retire one day and have the sacred mission of having children to perpetuate the anaxsi tradition.
  
  COMBAT INFORMATION:
  • Unit Size: Medium
  • Unit Availability: Uncommon
  • Unit Experience: Veteran
  • Equipment:
    • HK-01 "Steelfist" Jumpsuit [x]
    • SFR-58 Bozdugan Blaster Rifle [x]
    • REC-CBS/01 "Doombringer" Combat Scattergun [x]
    • CF6 Concussion Rifle [x]
    • IL-18a Disruptor Carbine [x]
    • LS-1 Angry Owl Light Sniper Rifle [x]
    • REC-RCG/01 "Reaper" Pattern Particle Beam Chainblaster [x]
    • ZXR-1 "Precision" Energy Sword [x]
    • ZW-001 iFrit Pattern Heated Vibroweapon [x]
    • Rhypalm [x]
  • Combat Function: The TodHusars are an elite force of aerotransported mechanised infantry. Their versatile combat abilities allow them to be deployed during ground operations, but they are commonly assigned to security duties aboard the Azure Hammer Command, and more rarely, to boarding parties during which said Azure Hammer Command is engaged. They are a unique force as they are comprised only of anaxsi exiled and imperials devoted to the Hasklers's cause.
    Outside of this capacity, the TodHusars are a rarity to see throughout the Empire, apart from diplomatic escort missions. Compared to the larger forces of the New Imperial Order, TodHusars are a rarity in New Imperial space. Outside of their niche aboard anaxsi vessels, these elite troops are barely found.
    Strengths:
    • Hardened Combattants : Bathed in the militaristic culture of the imperial-anaxsi exiles, the future soldiers begin training at a young age. Their regular training includes, but is not limited to tactical exercises, precision shooting drills, close-combat training, and parachute management. At the age of eight, they know how to deassemble and reassemble a standard blaster rifle. At the age of ten, they manage to take out a close-combat opponent, and by thirteen, they can accompany older TodHusars on the battlefield. After this age, their training continues for seven years and is pushed to high standards before they integrate the TodHusars Corps at the age of twenty.
    • Tactical Insertion : As per their nature, the TodHusars are specialised in parachuted operations, and are confident with the fact of jumping from heights to surprise the enemy by a fast deployment. Moreover, the anaxsi vessels provide tactical support in the form of light gunships and boarding crafts designed to carry the TodHusars safely across a space battle or a ground battlefield. As such, the TodHusars are able to insert themselves on a battlefield easily, avoiding the difficulties another, less-specialised unit would face.
    • Weaknesses:
    • Lightly Equipped : As an aerotransported unit, the TodHusars are unable to field heavy walkers or to have access to a plentiful of supplies. They rely on speed and surprise to overwhelm their enemy, supported on some occasions by AT-MPT Light Walkers [x]. The lack of supplies make them unfitted for attrition wars and motionless brawls. If the TodHusars cannot capitalise on speed and surprise to win a fight, then they will not be more effective than a lightly equipped militia unsuited for large scale engagements.
    • Hotheaded : It is a common trait for anaxsi soldiers to be overconfident or arrogant, because they embody the new military pride of the planet. However, the nature of the TodHusars Corps shape its members into impassioned warriors, sometimes crazed about the orbital insertions they experience. As such, the paratroopers of the Corps are likely to follow their emotions and pride over the tactical common sense, espcially in tense situations where many TodHusars adopt a rash and suicidal behaviour.
    
    HISTORICAL INFORMATION
    Founded when the imperial-anasxi left Anaxes, the TodHusars Corps quickly grew in an effective fighting force capable of defending the assets of the noble house. After the Hasklers were officially backed by the New Imperial Order, the TodHusars managed to keep their independance but opened the recruitement to motivated imperials soldiers, devoted to the anaxsi's cause. Assigned to the protection of the Azure Hammer Command, the TodHusars shined during skirmishes against the Sith Empire, bringing some Force Users to their knees. After having made a reputation as a merciless fighting force, the TodHusars were reorganised into two regiments, in the Anaxsi Exiled Division roster force.
    Since Gallius Orcana has taken command of the Azure Hammer Command, the TodHusars have accompanied him on the battlefield of Serenno, proving time and again their worth in the eyes of elite units such as the CompForce or the Stossjägers.

 

[Judah Lesan]

Julius Haskler

This is a very good looking submission, however there are a couple of things to address quickly before I can approve this.

Image Credit | Your first image credit is a direct link to the image, not the source of the image. Direct links cannot be accepted as a credit. If you need help tracking down the original, or an applicable image credit let me know. If you cannot we will have to swap it out for something else.

Permissions | Your permissions need a little help. When I click on the link, with the exception of the Iscariot Industries I am taken to the first page and not the actual permission. What I cannot tell from this is whether you personally have permission to use these weapons, or that you are referencing weapons that the NIO has permission to use. Please link directly to the post which contains the actual permission please.

Also to note. This weapon here:

• EWR-52 "Purge" Flamethrower [x]

Was created by Sith Imperial Research and Development and is affiliated with The Sith Empire. Your permissions do not seem to extend to this weapon. While the writer who made it does own ApexTech, this flame thrower is not on the list of weapons available. You will need to either provide proof of permission to use this item, or you will need to remove it.

Once these couple of things are sorted out, we should be good to go! Tag me when you get it all sorted, and I will look over it again.

 

[Julius Haskler]

Hey there Judah Lesan . Thank you very much for your review.

I edited the credit link of the first image in order to lead to the reddit thread where I found the image. I hope it can count as a viable credit.

Concerning the permissions, I updated every link that did not lead to a page where the contractors were mentioned. As such, I updated the Karovnogal link in order for it to lead to the parent company where the conractors are precised. The only exception for this is the Corondex Arms link. I didn't find a page where the permissions were listed, and so didn't edit the link. To answer your interrogation, yes I used the companies NIO had a contract with, and no I didn't use any company I have a contract with because I don't have any contracts with any company.

Finally, I asked my FO about the flamethrower. From what I understood, the submission was edited to allow NIO to use it, however I didn't find anything that expressly allowed NIO to use it. I don't know if I have permission to use it, but I didn't remove it from my submission yet, hoping you could help me sort this out.

I hope everything else is in order !

 

[Judah Lesan]

Finally, I asked my FO about the flamethrower. From what I understood, the submission was edited to allow NIO to use it, however I didn't find anything that expressly allowed NIO to use it.

Julius Haskler

I did not see that the submission was edited to reflect NIO permissions as well. As such you will have to have to be able to prove you have permission from the writer to use it, or you will need to remove it. I would make your faction owner aware that sub has not been edited so that he can either get the proper permissions or remove it from their faction manifest as well to avoid future misunderstandings here.

I will let you decide what you would like to do, whether you want to pursue getting that permission or remove it from the submission. Tag me once you‘ve gotten situated, and we can get this approved.

 

[Julius Haskler]

Judah Lesan

Updated the submission to remove the flamethrower posing problem. I'll talk with my FO about that problem, and the future Dalness Manufacturings will create a copy of the EWR-52 for replacement !

Everything else is good I think, the TodHUsars are ready for approval

 

[Judah Lesan]

Julius Haskler

looks good here!

[APPROVED]