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Edit: Forgot to add epic battle music
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=h33v6IYI9c4
Rhen Var, Citadel
Darth Abyss, newly named Lord of the Sith, stood with his back to the ancient statue of jedi master Ross Mysliwiec as snow began to fall down, his robe drifting in the cold winds of the frozen...
Shawken, Elevator of the Shawken Spire
Time was slowly running out for Abyss, death had began to crawl over his body, slow but undeniable. The dark side granted great power, but it always came with a price. Some fell to madness, others had their body's devoured by corruption, unable to contain...
Control Room
Mission Planning room
Armory
Server Room
Bedrooms
Name: Abyss Hideout
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Classification: Bunker
Location: Nar Shaddaa, below the lowest levels, under the moons surface
Affiliation: Darth Abyss
Description: Abyss hideout in itself is simple. A bunker, build...
Outside:
Entrance Hall:
Acolyte Rooms
Library
Lab
Armory
Name: The Abyss Academy
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Classification: Dark side Academy
Location: Malachor V, Near the remains of the Trayus Academy
Affiliation: Darth Abyss
Description: The Abyss Academy is a place for Darksiders of all...
So yeah I had one of these a while back, and got a ton of good advice, now I really would like to now if I improved as a writer, and if Abyss improved as a character.
Something that always made me feel bad on chaos was that as none native speaker my grammar, my spelling and especially the...
-Set the mood-
Nar Shaddaa - Slums
Darth Abyss and his men made their way through the dirt and decay that marked the slums of Nar Shaddaa. The smuggler moon wasn't known for being a place of wealth, order or as place that was particularly friendly to those who inhibited it. Poverty and hunger...
The air was frigid and tore like icy claws upon the flesh of those who dared walk the unknown moon. There was no life to be seen; no grass to collect frosted dew nor insects or reptilians to crawl beneath the barren salt dunes; even though the air was perfectly breathable, it was a barren land...
[member="Abyss"]
It was a cold night in Lessu as Zagara stepped back out onto the streets. The cold, but dry arid air of Ryloth blasted in her face once more - her red, leathery skin brushing it aside under the hood of her cloak. Behind her, another pub in ruins - another petty fight with...
Image source: http://hennal.deviantart.com/art/Leg-Prosthesis-Concepts-289586356
Intent: To replace the lower half of Abyss right leg after it was cut of
Development Thread: N/A
Manufacturer: Abyss
Model: N/A
Affiliation: Abyss
Modularity: No
Production: Unique
Material: Durasteel, Electric...