critique

its a small milestone as ive only started rping on here in dec. i haven't had my writing critiqued much. I am open to constructive criticism, comments and feedback on writing, character, plot, lore and whatever more. also this is definitely not a bit of publicity for our storyline cuz why not :3...

Heyo, so I finally made it to 500 posts, in full honesty probably should have reached this milestone much earlier... ...But hey better later than never, amiright? So to all the people who have written with Malum, and even to the people who haven't and either want too or just simply have read...

I'm nearing the 1k post mark for Braze give or take and I've more or less participated in 100 threads with him. I am opening the floor for critique and feed back. I feel like I've developed him in to a more complex character thus far and am interested in hearing other thoughts for the green...

Ijaat has been around here a while, and is one of my oldest RP characters, and my oldest Star Wars face period. I'd love to get feedback on him from you guys as to your thoughts on his journey, his shift from NFU to FU years ago, and overall critique of how I write him. Thanks for any advice!

Hey guys! Trying to make Milla's official Beskar'gam, and I was hoping everyone might be able to pitch in something, anything, really. I don't want this armor perfect at all, it's supposed to be unique or special, special to Milla. An example is it uses old-style Mandalorian features, and even...

Hello, I have been writing on and off for 4 years, and just would like some feedback. Matthew Locke Roads Untravled Leading the "Wise" Darth Arkanus / Dral the Broken The Day the World Stood Still Suffocating Sight Clubbers And there is more, these are just what I can find quickly.

Okay, so this character, when I first made her, I wasn't exactly sure where I was going with her but now that its been a while and I have been trying to work on her more I would like to know how I am doing with this character if anyone has the time.

So after roughly two years of writing as Yuroic, yes there was a couple short breaks during that, he has made Master rank! This is great and loved developing Yuroic as a character during this, seeing him change throughout the two years. Figure since he has reached Master Rank I'd see what...

My my, what a year it has been. I'll be honest and say I wasn't expecting to give my character here so many overhauls. But I think I've settled on something I like and has room to grow. The droid formally known as SYN, and SN-1411 before that was my introduction to the site. I choose two of my...

Hello all, I just want another persons opinion on my story telling and my ability to set a story up. I'll leave a link to some of my RP and you don't have to respond to them if you don't like, this post is only here for me to get some feedback on what people think. Thank you, Zev RP: Private...

I do this every so often, last time being after my return in August, and I've decided today is as good a time as any for another one of these threads. Roast me if you'd like, or give me any feedback/criticism/etc on any of my current characters or my performance as a writer.

Blah blah blah, writing. I've seen many of these and usually read them, but the majority of the writers I haven't personally threaded with. Although I have read some of them I don't feel like I'm qualified to give feedback due to my limited exposure. Any who.... Soooooooooooo, like the...

Hey guys! I've written Vrak for nearly two months now, have gone through about 30ish threads and RP'd with a dozen or so people. He's the first Sith I've worked hard at getting character dev with since Nemene and also the first Sith that I've properly written since my One Sith days with Darth...

Self explanatory. Been about a year, figured I'm due. Here's some threads. Peruse, and tell me what you think of the Kitty-Jedi. Training Related Threads To Meet a Knight Further Trainings Circle of Protection Action/Adventure Threads Lost in the Dark Drama(?) The Day the World Fell Apart...

It's been roughly six months since I created this character, and I thought now would be a good time to get some feedback. :)

Hello everyone, So I have been roleplaying on here for a couple of weeks. I am trying to just build up my character and what not but one day I wondered what other people might think of this character. Thus that is why I am here today, I was hoping people could possibly critique my character a...

Let me begin by stating that I know my history on this site, along with my behavior is one of a touchy subject. I understand that that alone may be the cause as to why my ideas (while sound), do not gain the traction they need; coupled with my constant jumping from idea to idea. I have in...

So I'm curious as to what any of you guys or gals have seen in Celiana that you love, hate, or would offer advice on...Wanna write a great character and constructive critique is key! For those of you I've RP'ed with I'm especially keen to hear what you peeps have to say... Thanks Loves! <(^.^)>

So I'm curious as to what any of you guys or gals have seen in Celiana that you love, hate, or would offer advice on...Wanna write a great character and constructive critique is key! For those of you I've RP'ed with I'm especially keen to hear what you peeps have to say... Thanks Loves! <(^.^)>

Flannigan Mcnash So its been awhile, for one reason or another I had pressing irl reasons for an absence, so when I returned I sat myself down and thought what made my character, what was good, what was bad. And I thought I'd put the scalpel in the SWRP communities hand. A New Critique Some of...