critique

So I've written Sean for a few days now. He's a character I've wanted to write for a while now but, I never quite felt like I was ready for it until now. He's participated in a few threads now, what do you think? From Threads to Bio, nothings off limits.

It's been roughly a half year now since I started writing Safiriel, and I'm certain theres quite a gap between her first days and her current form. What i'd like to know is, what do you think of her progression so far? Also, how have I personally, as a Writer, improved? Or worsened my habits...

So, I've written Kurt for a while now, nearly a thousand posts and with plenty of people having both read him in thread and participated in them with him. I was wondering what people thought of him, if they had any advice or thoughts on the character as a whole. As a note on my own thoughts on...

Been awhile since I've done one of these. Might as well, I guess. What do you think of Nyx? Is she the best, is she the worst? Is there a certain aspect of her personality that makes you want to choke her? Be honest, I'm searching for feedback on her character, and even the writing style itself...

Alright... I've been kind of avoiding this forum like the plague... but figured it was time to stick my nose in here. I've been writing both of these characters for a while now. Anija I have had for almost two years here, and about seven years overall. Mirshko I have been writing for about 8...

So I've been playing Elizabeth for a few weeks now. Shes gone through tons of changes and overhauls, both in character and in writing style and I wondered what you all thought of her? Spare nothing please. I personally believe I've come a long way with her since her original incarnation as silly...

I'd love to know what you all like and dislike about Ghost, Please, Go ahead and let it rp (Oh also any negative comments will be reported, No flames or trolls But have fun posts whatever you want) {That was a joke btw}

Hi Chaos. I recently made my submission for Jon's recent treasure hunt. I spent a while creating this and I was wondering if anyone had read it yet? I'd like some feedback or critique on my writing, please. You can read it in this thread, at the bottom (recent post) ->...

Alright, so I plan on doing a fairly long dev thread (30 or so posts), set in the Old Republic era. I would like people to read what I have so far, and tell me what's wrong with the writing; too long, too short, not detailed, etc. I need this to be the best work I've done so far, so don't hold...

I've had the character for less than a year now, and threaded her even less, but I'd like to know what everyone thinks regardless. Good or bad, I'd like to hear everybody's thoughts on my only really successful Jedi character. I mean, she managed to convince [member="Connor Harrison"] to train...

Because bandwagon, :P __ Critique Requested: Rebuilding ___ I'd like to request anyone brave enough to critique this single post. Nothing major, just tell me how it impacted you. The Feelz. :D