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Because I haven't written this guy that much and want to keep a personal record of my struggles with developing him, I'm going to provide my own feedback/list of issues to address. Then y'all can add yours in the replies, if you want.
I Can’t Figure Out How to Write a Seer Without Metagaming...
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
Intent: To craft a knife for future RP.
Image Source:
Canon Link: N/A
Permissions: N/A
Primary Source:
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
Manufacturer: Marcus Dinn
Affiliation:
Market Status: Closed-Market
Model: N/A
Modularity: No
Production: Unique
Material: Svolten...
KTF
Music
CORELLIAN SHIPYARDS
Aliases
Rail
Mar'cus'Rail
Class(es)
Marine
Assignment
222nd Nova Corps
94th Assault Company
"Tin Man Company"
Flagship
ANV Final Stand
Birthplace
Corellia
Age
Early 40s
Personality Traits
No Nonsense
Abrasive
Brooding
Education Traits
Military...
Alias
Knight of Old Tygerii, The Black Mask
Class(es)
General
Assassin
Warrior
Birthplace
Alderaan (Vengard & Alderaani Citizenship)
Age
Adult
Personality Traits
Brave
Ruthless
Cunning
Education Traits
Polygot
Lifestyle Traits
Blademaster
Commander Traits
Strategist
Rank(s)...
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
Intent:
To be used as a threads location, either mainly for gambling , business talks, or social threads with others.
This will be Marcus Carter base of operation as it houses his other side business venture, Private Detective.
The Family will also use the den for...
OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
Intent: A personal weapon for Marcus Carter
Image Source: Image Source
Canon Link: N/A
Permissions: N/A
Primary Source: Marchion Ro Padded Knuckles
PRODUCTION INFORMATION
Manufacturer: Arthakk
Affiliation: Marcus Carter
Market Status: Closed-Market
Model: N/A...
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//Accessing data file//.....
NAME: Marcus Tritum
PROFESSION: Businessman
SPECIES: Human
GENDER: Male
FORCE SENSITIVE: Yes
CAPABILITIES:
Corporate Tradecraft
Lightfoil Rake
Occult Studies
SUSCEPTIBILITIES:
Occult Studies
Overwhelming Avarice
A Really Nice Suit
APPEARANCE:
A human man of...
Initiating Dossier on Subject 921…
Marcus Tyvos, Wanderer, Warrior, and Listener…
Expelled by the Jedi for the collection of Sith relics, wanted by the Sith for the slaying of dark side disciples.
FACTION: None
RANK: Force Adept, Duelist, Mystic
SPECIES: Mirluka
AGE: 29
SEX: Male
HEIGHT...
CHARACTER BIOGRAPHY TEMPLATE
Marcus Bastion
NAME: Marcus Bastion
FACTION: New Imperial Order
RANK: Moff
SPECIES: Human
AGE: 36.
SEX: Male.
HEIGHT: 5’10”
WEIGHT: 75 kg
EYES: Blue
HAIR: Blonde
SKIN: Caucasian
FORCE SENSITIVE: No...
[member="Marcus Lok"] :: [member="Tytos Ardik"]
It had rained recently and the large puddle that had formed in the crack of the roads pavement reflected a blurry echo of the buildings and the colorful neon signs that surrounded it.
Not very far from the puddle, Jennifer, a twenty something...
Further On Up The Road
Alazair - [member="Leira Rhys"]
"Got on my dead man's suit and my smilin' skull ring
My lucky graveyard boots and song to sing
I got a song to sing, keep me out of the cold
And I'll meet you further on up the road."
- Song -
"Why the frak are we here again?"...
While the rain fell hard on the streets outside, thumping electrifying music boomed through the enormous makeshift club, once shipyard, as neon lights flashed across the tall walls of the once abandoned building as people shouted, cheered and danced.
A couple of weeks back there had been...
Y U T A N
The Heart of the Republic.
[member="Jack Sparrow"] :: [member="Marcus Itera"] :: [member="Dallen Thayne"] :: [member="Wrrlykam"]
(Just tagging you Jack so you know what is going on)
So far, everything had proceeded quite smoothly. The laundering services had been set up and all...
Just kidding.
(or am I?)
Sup, Chaos. To some of you old folks, I'm a familiar face in the fact that I've been writing on this great site for just over two years now. To the rest of ya, I'm just a young guy who likes to spend his free time making up characters and writing about them on the...