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So, technically it was last week, the 16th, but I thought I'd throw this up regardless.
This isn't a question of individual characters, this is me asking y'all to critique or praise me as a writer overall.
Hit me with your best shot.
Liorra had stormed out of Oyubaat, and practically out of Keldabe.
She went where she always went to that rocky outcropping.
Manda help her, she wasn't sure she was doing this right. The new tattoos that had been inked on Yavin felt hot, burning hot. Kryze ancestors apparently not completely...
The Structure of the One Sith
The One Sith structure is purely based on power; nothing else is recognized. Territory and influence are what you can hold.
For example, A Sith Lord can have 50 apprentices or none—an army beside them or a single weapon.
The Kethenites, or Keepers of the Sith...
Urienz Tyrael
Unknown Regions
It was quite rare for Onrai to be fortunate enough to have a true precognitive moment. Certainly there was much she knew, particularly about things forbidden to most in the past and in the present, but the future, fickle as it was, still remained elusive. She had...
Before the Dark Empire's Subjugation of Tython
He followed behind Onrai, their steps echoing in the nearly empty halls. He didn't know what, specifically, had brought this on; after all he knew that they were a creature of the dark, of potential corruption. Yet, at the same time, unlike with...
The Outer Rim
Written as Kei Raxis' Clone
Tags - Revna (Darth Strosius to Observe)
For weeks, he hadn't slept.
Every time he had tried to finally get some sleep, he had what he could only describe as visions. They started as crystal clear memories of the day he was created, of the day he came...
Location: Jedi Temple, Coruscant
The moment Voli placed her foot on the Temple steps she can feel her stomach churn as it was being squeezed by a Sarlacc tentacle. Did she really make the right choice? Running from her parents in order to learn how to better harness her Force powers? Voli...
Taking guidance from Ashin Cardé Varanin and this thread, its time for another bit of the Force to be brought forward.
This one from Witches of Dathomir. Some may have found this ritual in stolen books of knowledge from the Witches, or holocrons of those who have stolen the knowledge, or been...
Ship: The Red Night
Weapons:
Tag: Amani Serys
It was early in the morning on New Cov, and like most days, Gatz was meditating in the gardens.
Or, rather, he was trying to meditate. For a man with a mind constantly at war with itself, self-reflection was a thing of conflict, not a thing of...
Coruscant / Underworld / Night
Death was so final. One day they were. They next day they weren’t. There was no do overs. There was no time for goodbyes. There was no time for speaking ones mind to the one that had so wronged you. There was no reconciliation. There was no more embrace. There was...
OBJECTIVE: One Last Time: The resignation of Caoimhe Crannach
Location:Coruscant
Allies: Andien Gale
Enemies:
Neutral:
Equipment:Equipment In Bio
Song: One Last Time
She entered the building calmly. She was in her old Galidraani officers uniform. It was a strong statement of her purpose here...
Location: Eshan, clubbing district
Outfit: This
Tags: Shan Pavond | Ko Vuto | Jonyna Si | Ryana mina | Thania Petrui | Corazona von Ascania | Felix Faraday | Ceri Fraissi | Open
Lily had taken some time to return back to Eshan. A break from the events that had occurred not too long ago. She was...
Tala walked through the underworld, her red hair covered by a drab green scarf and a metal eyemask. Her military boots squeaked as she marched in her military-style pants and shirt. As the red-headed humanoid looked up, watching people of various species go about that day. She couldn't help but...
Greetings! I’ve had the itch to write more lately, and so far it’s all been about Imperial Inquisitors especially with the Ahsoka series coming I’ve had an itch to always write a classic Imperial villain force user. One that is especially loyal to the ideals of Palpatine. His story begins being...
Ceth climbed up the stairs to the Jedi Temple jamming his head bobbing back and forth jamming to the music blaring in his ear pods. He always imagined himself going in front of a crowd of tens of millions of people to rock out. However, Ceth did not want to be a rockstar nah a rockstar is cool...