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I am huge on feedback. When it comes to writing, I only see things the way I happen to see them. It's hard to see angles of how I write that others might simply because it doesn't occur to me. That's why I make these kinds of threads, get new perspective and generally improve my writing further...

Long has the Rimward Trade League stood as a bastion against the Sith encroachment towards the Galactic Core - but long has its stability been under threat. Both internal strife combined with consistent probing tests of Rimward Defenses has culminated in a total war esque strike against numerous...

Little Minos Run Hyperlane 900 ABY Following the Assembly meeting, the nomination for who would lead the campaign against the threat of the Kathol Resistance became known. In contrast to the singular leadership often found in Sith systems, it was decided by merit or by infighting that the...

THE STORY SO FAR Founded by Joran Olan as a bastion of the New Jedi Order within the Outer Rim and Scar Worlds, the Eadu Enclave seeks to rebuild a region of space devastated by war. Across dozens of worlds, the innocent cry out for aid, and the Jedi of the Eadu Enclave shall answer. Lurking...

Long has the Rimward Trade League stood as a bastion against the Sith encroachment towards the Galactic Core - but long has its stability been under threat. Both internal strife combined with consistent probing tests of Rimward Defenses has culminated in a total war esque strike against numerous...

Jutrand The Empire reels from the death of Darth Ophidia and the root-burning purges that followed. A thousand names expunged from every book in the Sith Order, as every home was filled with the image of their now total Emperor. Darth Empyrean, the great successor, had destroyed the Warlord...

Ma’ar Shaddam An ancient and rocky world, one renowned for the quality of its ore and the smiths that work it, has come under the ever-growing gaze of the Sith Order, and in turn the Enclave. Where one sees conquest, another sees reclamation. While remote, the planet serves as one of the...

The Fall of the Tsis’kaar had come from two of their own; the Heirs Apparent, the Little Snakes. Marr and Haxim cut the head off the snake in the death of Darth Ophidia - ending the venomous coup attempt by her ilk. Now, fractured into multiple parts, the Tsis’kaar reels from the destruction of...

Fitz walked down the ramp of his old, rusty ship and stepped down onto the elevated landing platform. He slowly looked around. The scenery of The City In The Clouds was covered in a thick fog, muddying up the view, hiding countless beautiful presidiums, fountains and buildings, the tallest of...

Planet: Mala Base: Artorius-Beta Time: 1800 LST Cato walked into the barracks with a heavily exasperated expression. Sweat soaked through his grey shirt, making portions of it black. He tossed it aside to his bunk and sat on one of the metal chairs with a heavy, exaggerated fall, letting its...

902 ABY Murakami Initiative Amidst the tumult of a galaxy at war, the specter of the dark side looms ever larger. Embroiled in the divisive clutches of Darth Ophidia's civil war, the Ouroboros Crisis of the Sith Order rages on. The Emperor and his followers, Darth Empyrean's Eternalist Sith...

902 ABY SITH HOLY SPACE KORRIBAN Backlit by Horuset, Korriban's blood-red sun, the planet loomed large in the inky expanse of Kainite Holy World space. Seven moons encircled the world on their own orbital paths, casting eerie shadows down upon Korriban’s surface. Space thick with an imminent...

The Estate was quiet, as it usually was this time of night. In an odd sort of way it was soothing, like a balm had been cast over her heart as she sat in complete silence, marr-red eyes fixed on the lightsaber that rested just a few feet away from her. Her eyes traced across every inch of the...

A Not So Soft Underbelly Location: Arcadia-N-30, Aries District Thread Status: Open to Sith Order Tags: Alina Tremiru The hustle and bustle of the outer District of Arcadia-N-30 was a fun yet dangerous distraction to some, and a stark reminder of the dangers of the world to most others...

He hadn't made any kind of trouble. None at all. Dominick let out a sigh as he walked through the halls of the Jedi Temple, hands calmly behind his back. Some.. Misunderstandings almost got him kicked out. How was he supposed to know that man was actually a Jedi Master? It was unheard of for...

Hey. I've had quite the month, or at least, quite the beginning of the month. Rapid fire posts, threads that were popping, and the general enjoyment of writing with talented writers. But, recently, it's felt like all that dried up. All that writing I was enjoying, every thread, just stopped...

Current Outfit Denon District Seven Hilal's heart was thumping so hard and so loud that it was hard to breathe. It had been that way since she landed on Denon. As Hilal left the spaceport, she tried to calm her nerves buy listening to some music but it did little to help. Today was the day...

It's been a while since I last made one of these. I used to have a habit of tossing out at least one a month, just because I like getting feedback. And y'know, being told how great and awesome I am. Both are good. So yeah. Let me know what you like, what you don't, what you think I can improve...

In most cases, one could find a sith in the depths of a catacomb or in the shadows of a private room when they were deep in thought, ruminating on the nature of the dark side. Yet no matter how hard one looked, they would not find Wake Nayne in such a place. Instead, search for the highest peak...

Intent: To enhance the training of Briana Sal-Soren's Padawan's Image Credit: Barrier of Blades Reference, Falling Avalanche Reference, Fluid Riposte Reference Canon: Yes, Form V Permissions: N/A Links: N/A Media Name: A Guide to Form V Format: Holobook Distribution: Semi-Unique [ Available...