900 Posts in, How's my driving?

[Ardgal Raxis]

What's up, guys?

Ardgal passed 900 posts last night, to be honest I never would have thought he would have made it that far, let alone had the amazing opportunities for story that he has. At best I had hoped for a dark, brooding character who would focus on being a soulless man who didn't fit in really anywhere. You know the old deal. "Life is pain" and all that.

I want to get some feedback on him, so please, tell me what you think. I am going to link a few threads to show his progression (BTW, that means they are in order along his time line) from what he was to who he is now, feel free to read some of them/all of them, or if you've just wrote with me before under this face ya know.... feel free to just drop a line.

I want to know this:

• What do you think of Ardgal's storyline? Is he progressing organically? What do you think about his personality--is it internally consistent?
• Does he portray the struggle well? I want Ardgal to be the personification of the struggle of man and machine, what is morality? What is humanity? What is it to be alive? Does he strike you as any of these? Or am I just shooting smoke up my own butt?
• How is my writing? Do you see room for improvement? Do you see ways that I can portray excellence better? Am I lacking in any way you can see here?

Thanks for your time, please don't hold back here, if you have an honest critique here that you can give about his character or my writing, fire away. Thank you very much for your time and reading my stuff, so here, have a cookie.

Cheers.

Spoiler

A Colony Rising
The Next Generation
Song of Exile
E iā mākou i Ka Hale
A Cluster In Turmoil
Recognition for a Job well done (Ongoing, and very vital to his story, we are 40+ posts in)
Lost in Space
Securing a Doctor
Reconquista