Eternal Father
Whatcha think of muh only character?
Lay it on thick, you slags.
Lay it on thick, you slags.
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A day with your character
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The Red of Sinner
Battle Sister
[member="Darth Vornskr"]
Youre da jello
Im the girl poken it
Youre da jello
Im the girl poken it
The Red of Sinner
Battle Sister
Whatcha think Romeo Sin and all his Sinness
Also let thy eyes burn
Also let thy eyes burn
Alask Diruno
The Wind In Your Face
what anime is that from?The Shadow King said:
The Red of Sinner
Battle Sister
[member="Alask Diruno"]
*Shrugs*
I randomly found it
*Shrugs*
I randomly found it
L Admin
No more individual "how do you feel about my character" threads. Use your character creation threads, please.
Gherron Dragovalor
Space dad
So you move them all to my thread because..... [member="Tefka"]
Alexandra Feanor
The Lady in Silver/Grey Historian
So i did this a long long time ago where i asked what people thought of my characters and even my writing abilities and myself as a person on the board. So here i am again to ask the community what they think of myself and my characters.
Note: Please provide constructive criticism if there is something that you view me as doing wrong and do please keep this on topic, this is a learning experience for me.
My Characters include
ODdly this was combined with another thread...
Note: Please provide constructive criticism if there is something that you view me as doing wrong and do please keep this on topic, this is a learning experience for me.
My Characters include
- Solan Charr: Dark Jedi that links up with the Rebel Alliance and is working at trying to establish a front against the Sith. Shows mercy and kindness to anyone (Or hits on them if female) Unless they do one of two things which are Harming the Innocent or the Defenseless. OR partakes in slavery.
- Alexandra Faenor: Force User Master and Historian of the Order of the Grey. She has taught Sith, Jedi, and neutral over the course of the last year and lived primarily on Alderaan until she was forced to move due in part to the vongforming of the planet. Soon after arriving in the Mandalorians territory to aid against the Sith but was threatened by the Granddaughter of Ember Rekali to leave or be blown to bits.
- Brianne Zambrano: Genetically altered clone of Alexandra, she serves as Balaya Zambrano's daughter in an effort to teach balaya a lesson and try and turn her towards a lighter path.
- Yusan Fenn: Formerly Echani Warrior and Senator, branded a traitor three times before finally dying in his madness as he let Carliah Dakrone kill him. After which he was brought back as a guard for Carliah and now serves to protect her.
- Glyph: Sixteen year old Rogue Force user, Serves as a Guard for the Naboo Queen. Currently linking up to help rescue Felicity Mason.
- Thalia Rist: Princess of Onderon... thats it
- Alexander Sannes: My Newest character, Echani Noble at the age of nineteen, he is a few days old so nothing major happened yet with him.
ODdly this was combined with another thread...
Alexandra Feanor
The Lady in Silver/Grey Historian
[member="Tefka"]
OH... wait why?
OH... wait why?
Alexandra Feanor
The Lady in Silver/Grey Historian
And now i just saw why...
Eternal Father
I guess that little tagline under General Discussions, "Talk about anything here!" isn't actually true.
Hrm.
Who'da thunk.
Hrm.
Who'da thunk.
Alexandra Feanor
The Lady in Silver/Grey Historian
[member="Darth Vornskr"]
Apparently
Apparently
Darth Ferus
Wanderer
So.. It seems the old thread was deleted, and I'm a bit lost as to why.. But before this gets off topic!
Feedback! On all of myself. Mostly, my duels.
The original thread was about Krest, but I worded that wrong. I want feedback on how I fight with Krest, how I describe things on him.
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/45857-tournament-of-the-blade-round-one-krest-vs-meanken/?view=getnewpost is a good example of a thread I'm looking for some feedback on.
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/46333-gba-fatty-alt-vs-krest/ is another! What do you lot think of the duels I've done, whether just reading or participating against myself?
Feedback! On all of myself. Mostly, my duels.
The original thread was about Krest, but I worded that wrong. I want feedback on how I fight with Krest, how I describe things on him.
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/45857-tournament-of-the-blade-round-one-krest-vs-meanken/?view=getnewpost is a good example of a thread I'm looking for some feedback on.
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/46333-gba-fatty-alt-vs-krest/ is another! What do you lot think of the duels I've done, whether just reading or participating against myself?
Gherron Dragovalor
Space dad
Yeah, Tef put them all in one of my threads because he doesn't want these threads around [member="Krest"]
Darth Ferus
Wanderer
[member="Gherron Vael"]
... What thread?
... What thread?
Gherron Dragovalor
Space dad
http://starwarsrp.net/topic/48101-a-day-with-your-character/
[member="Krest"]
[member="Krest"]
Darth Ferus
Wanderer
[member="Gherron Vael"]
That thread has nothing to do with constructive criticism on the writing of ones character.
The move makes no sense.
That thread has nothing to do with constructive criticism on the writing of ones character.
The move makes no sense.
Gherron Dragovalor
Space dad
Exactly my point. At least archive them, then mention those that put up the threads so they don't do so again, and there's no confusion. [member="Krest"]
Darth Ferus
Wanderer
[member="Tefka"]
Getting feedback is how writers grow.
Getting feedback is how writers grow.
L Admin
Get feedback on your bios.Krest said: