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Approved Location Ayenor

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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
  • Intent: To provide a city to host The Resolute's main base of operations
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  • Canon: N/A
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SETTING INFORMATION
  • City Name: Ayenor
  • Classification: Metropolis
  • Location: Eriadu
  • Demographics: 72% Human | 28% Other | Population 857,000~
  • Affiliation: The Resolute
  • Wealth: Medium, Wealth is somewhat high due to it being such an industrial area. Jobs are filled and high-paying.
  • Stability: High, stability is high. Propaganda is everywhere in the city which makes the residents highly dedicated and loyal to The Resolute. Crime is practically nonexistent due to the high-paying work that exists.
DESCRIPTION

An industrial city rising against the grey skies of Eriadu, Ayenor stands as the center of manufacturing for the Western Region of the planet. The city itself is a hub of activity, with blinking lights and walls that make the lights dance and appear to shine brighter. Common buildings and businesses are small to medium in height, allowing factories to rise as metal monoliths above the surrounding landscape. In the center of Ayenor is the area known as the Hub. The Hub is the city's downtown area. It is full of shops and hardware stores full of just about any tool a person could need. The Hub is also where most of the city's trade deals are made and carried out.

Above all factories within the city is the Eraidu Manufacturing Corporation Headquarters. There, all production begins and ends. All products are conceived, planned, designed, and sent out to various factories around the planet for production. Beyond the Headquarters, there is a seemingly endless skyline of buildings that is only visibly disrupted once you reach the outskirts of town, where minor factories lay scattered.

Beyond the factories lies Ayenor Keep, the main base of operations for The Resolute. It is heavily guarded. Though, no citizens dare to venture that far out.
The Resolute colonized the dying city and stabilized it, bringing it back to life, as if a switch was turned on and all electricity suddenly worked once more. In Ayenor, The Resolute operate and manage day to day life, ensuring that jobs are filled and demands are met all while continuing with their own agenda.

Despite its grey, monotonous feel, Ayenor is buzzing with activity and production. A beacon of industrial might that causes inhabitants to flock to the area, in hopes of climbing the social ladder.

POINTS OF INTEREST

AYENOR KEEP
Ayenor Keep is the main base of operations for The Resolute. It's located on the outskirts of Ayenor, however close enough to keep control. Ayenor Keep is a giant tower of lights, windows, and rooms. No citizen is allowed in. Most Resolute troops are stationed here.

AYENOR INDUSTRIAL HUB
The Ayenor Manufacturing Hub is a building of staff designed to make sure every citizen has a job in the city's booming industrial economy. All citizens are required to go here, and be given a job that suits them.

AYENOR PEAK
Who know such a polluted city, could have such a beautiful view? On the west side of the city, is a giant ridge that peaks high over many of the buildings. Looking down from it, you will see a beautiful light-filled view of the city.

SECURITY - HIGH

[*]Combat Forces
  • 70 Walker Crewers
  • 85 TIE Fighter Pilots
  • 1200 Legionnaires
  • 300 Perimeter Support Troops (Including Ayenor patrol units)
  • 200 Internal Security Troops
  • 65 Scout Troops

[*]Vehicle Complement


HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Ayenor started off as one of the biggest industrial cities in the Eriadu system, with many companies and buildings being created/moved to the city due to how large and suitable its terrain was for manufacturing. When the civil war on Eriadu happened, it brought bad business, violence, and outrage in the city. The industrial aspect of the city was destroyed as nearly everyone moved away. It became a ghost city.

Darth Aegis then discovered the dead city in his search for an operations base city for his faction The Resolute. He began making changes to the city's environment, to make it more suitable, and slowly business climbed and more people moved back.
 
[member="Darth Aegis"]

I dig the idea behind it, but we will need to tweak this a bit before I can put a stamp on this.

The large parts:
  • You are currently missing the historical information field from the template. Please add that in and fill it out.
  • You currently have description and point of interest merged. I get why you did it, but we need to separate these two fields. This is done for increased overview so people can easily take a look and see what is going on in this location. Please split the two fields and make a list of the points of interests this city has, you can add small text blurps next to them to flesh them out more.
Tag me once this is done and I will review it again.
 
[member="Darth Aegis"]

Right now you have security listed as 'high', but it's only protected by generic troops. Is there anything else in your mind that this is protected by that makes you call it a 'high' rating? Weapons emplacements, etc?
 
[member="Irajah Ven"]

Went ahead and completely changed the security section, as I feel I didn't flesh it out enough. There are now vehicle emplacements, defensive objects, and combat forces.
 
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