@[member="Kitt Solo"] @[member="Rave Merrill"]
As the two young High Councilors match came to an end, Na'Varro jogged over from his spar with Adair to give them his thoughts. They were here to hear what he had to say, after all. From what he had seen, they both had considerable amounts of toughness and skill, yet there was still some work to be done.
"Good spar, guys. I've been watching with interest." He smiled. "From what I saw, this turned into a brawl pretty quick. Brawling ... well, it's more useful for some people than others. You're both slender and have a bit of length to you ... I think you both need to work on maintaining distance. Momentum is great, granted, but you both left yourself open to getting knocked the feth out on a couple of occasions."
"Kitt, early on you followed a jab with a step in on your right follow by a right cross. If Merrill had been smarter she'd have blasted you with a right straight while you were still moving your feet. Also ... never lead with a right hook unless the guy you're trying to hit doesn't know it's coming. Without that coffee flinging, Merrill could have cracked you with a quick jab and had you seeing stars. But as the spar went on, you started looking pretty good out there. That knee counter was perfect, I don't know how the heck it didn't land. And you showed some toughness. Nice work."
"Merrill ... you missed a few golden opportunities for counter right hands, which are seriously underrated. I saw a lot of inventive stuff from you, which is nice. But shifting low and striking at the legs with the hands ... not great application in my opinion, unless you want to eat a knee to the face. And you almost did, I don't know how you managed to push that knee aside, but you did. You're as tough as woodpecker lips as well. If this is how High Councilors fight, then I think the Fringe is in good hands."
"I put you two together because I think you can both benefit from the same fighting style. Neither of you are ever going to have true knockout power, what you both having going for you is length, toughness and volume of attacks. Get out there, put your hands on your opponent, stay in the pocket while maintaining distance, use more head movement, take a few hits, let them expend their energy, then drag them into deep water and finish them off. And throw more kicks, please. Kicks are good for not letting your opponent to get on the inside. This close-quarters brawling won't work for either of you in the long run."
Alen smiled, hoping they'd both take what he had to say on board. He'd been around the block in regards to this sort of thing. His smile turned to Kitt, taking a different turn. We're going to have to work on your ground game - he sent telepathically, and then winked. With that, he turned back to Adair and their own spar.
"Good job, guys." He called over his shoulder. "We'll work on weapons soon."
OOC: In my opinion, that knee counter from Kitt should have ended that one early, I was just asleep while it happened otherwise I would have called it. Good to see you guys getting into it though!