Feedback Combative Role-Play

[Braze Kai'el]

If anyone has any thoughts or feedback regarding my writing, particularly in terms of writing combat scenes as Braze, I invite you to share your constructive criticism here openly.

Please be polite and offer your critique in a way that helps me improve. What do you think I could do better overall in my writing? What aspects stood out to you and you liked? That way, I can work on incorporating those strengths more often.

Also, how do you think I could improve in collaborating with others? Your insights are truly appreciated!

 

[Ben Khal]

Don’t use terminology only experts would know. Your writing partners shouldn’t have to google your every other combat action just to know what it means. Using more commonly known/understood words will make things easier and more enjoyable in duels and war posting.

 

[Braze Kai'el]

Don’t use terminology only experts would know. Your writing partners shouldn’t have to google your every other combat action just to know what it means. Using more commonly known/understood words will make things easier and more enjoyable in duels and war posting.

I can work with this thank you.