Critique Snowstrider

[Lief]

So, I'm always pretty hesitant to put up things like this... But I figured why not go for it.

I've had Mysa now for just over a year, though it's only been the past few months that I've really focused her as a main character instead of someone I just wrote on occasion.

Recently there's been quite a lot of things happening to and around her which have begun to shape her into her own person, for better or for worse.

Anyways, I'm just wondering what Chaos thought of her - what I'm doing right, what I'm doing wrong, with her as a character.

Hides in a corner​

 

[Théodred Heavenshield]

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That is how I see you.. ​

 

[Coci Heavenshield]

Needs more furrrr....

Well since I have had the pleasure of writing with Mysa I think I can say something here. Even though you already know my thoughts.

She has been true to her circumstances, the events that had/has influences her life have played a part on her development as a character as it would happen if reality. The growth from someone that did not understand her reason for existence, or rather how that came about, to been thrown into a family she did not know and developing relationships with said family had taken time, which it would, to something more strong and involved in a large story arc. She is still young and has lots to experience yet and I can't wait to see what happens to Mysa.

There is only Up for Mysa, however, if she was to .. <_< turn. Rest assured a certain someone (me) would hunt her down, and drag her back by the ear, kicking and screaming, to the light.

 

[Lief]

[member="Théo Vhalorious"]​

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[member="Coci Heavenshield"]​

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No darkness, worry not. Saving that for another person... I do hope you don't hunt him down with an intent to kill... *whistles innocently*​

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<3 you Master​

 

[Thrand Hearthfire]

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You are perfect just the way you are, little one. :wub:​

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[member="Mysa Snowstrider"]​