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Approved Species Dalatross

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Emberlene's Daughter, The Jedi Generalist
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OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
GENERAL INFORMATION
  • Name: Dalatross
  • Designation: Sentient
  • Origins:
  • Average Lifespan: 240 Years
  • Estimated Population: Inter-Planetary
  • Description: Shifting in form and looks, the Dala are living gos forms able to survive in most environments. Having evolved a means to hold themselves into a more cohesive form. WIth hair and body tone able to shift at will and an almost invisible presence in mosts awareness the species serve as scouts and spies able to go in and gather information before returning to others.
PHYSICAL INFORMATION
  • Breathes: Type IV and below
  • Average Height of Adults: 2m
  • Average Length of Adults: N/A
  • Skin color: Skin color is able to be shifted to their liking
  • Hair color: Hair color is able to be shifted to their liking
  • Distinctions:
    • Gas/Solid body
  • Races: N/A
  • Force Sensitivity: Rare
Strengths:
  • Density Shifting: Unlike the Filar Nitzan the Dala are able to solidify their bodies and interact physically. They can go into a gas or humanoid form but take on different difficulties.
  • Appearance Shifting: Mental abilities that function to scan surface thoughts and create the species appearance to something familiar. Similar to a Mind-witch with the ability to form a small psychic bond but without the absorbing and powerful illusions to feed on... and additionally the Diathim for appearing as something appealing to other species.
  • Filar Strengths: A species standard in their gaseous form. Standard melee weapons are highly ineffective but energy based weapons that release a charge can interact with them.
Weaknesses:
  • Expansion: The Dala as gaseous and able to change their own density but lack the control of species like the Filar Nitzan to keep and shape themselves as a gas when in wind or a breeze.
  • Density Shifting: Their bodies while in a humanoid form are solid and able to be dismembered. They don't have to breath with lungs or have blood but the small electrical impulses that spark almost invisibly through the gas form and allows them to solidify are focused in the brain.
    Damaging the brain when solidified, energy blasters, fire, cold can harm or kill the Dala
  • Dismembers limbs will revert them to a gaseous form that can slowly return to the body but will take effort and concentration.
  • Cold: The cold, mostly below freezing can solidify and kill them when they are in their gaseous forms. They can survive for a time if warmed up but longer then twenty minutes usually results in permanent injury to them.
  • Filar Weakness: A standard weakness of the species is energy in their gaseous form.
CULTURE
  • Diet: The do not necessarily eat food as much as pollution and carbon emissions from vehicles like speeders. In the event that artificial emissions cannot be found. Natural ones can be sought out like methane in caves or other natural gasses. Without a form of substance they will eventually die.
  • Communication: Verbal
  • Technology level: Below Galactic Standard
  • Religion/Beliefs:
    • As a species their culture is simple mostly. They are not so primitive that they have none but they are also not materialistic to the point they have many things. Art and worship or traditions are not a general part of their species in exchange they are very solitary. Focused on letting themselves find their own little run off they can live in for their lifespan. They honor their cousins if they ever encounter them and regard the more industrial worlds where the skies are filled with pollution as highly important. Compared to many of the other things the Dalatross are curious and willing to share what they might observe about other species with people. THey have over the years developed relations with a number of the jedi as their world came under attack at different times from different forces. Raxus being no lnger a haven which saw them moved to other worlds. As a benefit among places like Atrisia whihc they could clean up pollution in the atmosphere and in the event of biological attacks they could prevent airborne attacks absorbing the sickness.
  • General behavior:
    • With Each other:Among themselves and with their cousins the Delatross are neutral. They interact and communicate but it is a large planet and they can usually stay by themselves instead of being with each other. SOmetimes they will seek each other ut to mate and reproduce some of their species for the next generation but they can be alone for a couple decades with no real problems.

      With Outsiders: They are careful, being a species that doesn't really seek to conquer except in ways maybe of making more polluted planets... but they have observed the species will do that for them as a natural part of expansion and progress. With their low numbers and general lack or technological aptitude, they have no ships that are their own nor weapons they could use without losing when they shift to move around quickly. They will either try to scare them away or understand what the visitors are doing by using the force to appear to them as something similar to themselves.

      The Force: They can use the force somewhat, some skills are not really able to be used but general skills like mind tricks a species trait can be used. With concentration they can for a short time making their shape solidified for interacting on a larger scale with the environment. Usually punching or kicking to fend off an attacker THis brings more inherent dangers as their heads become the main source of their life and piercing or severing it from the body can kill them. In regards to other skills in the force their general skills and regards to it is as something there connection all living things and they believe deeply in the living force itself.
HISTORICAL INFORMATION
Born on the Filar homeworld originally but slowly over time they drifted off as a separate line of the species. The landscape of the planet changing when it was discovered and visited creating sections of the world for their use. Slowly over time the species changing and adapting to the region for what they could live in.

THe more industrial areas over the enturies giving rise to them as more of the Filar moved away leaving the Dala behind to work and live. The two lines continued to evolve down their paths cross breeding for a time in areas where both lives but most of the hybrids were unable to make additional offspring.

Never achieving dominance and never really making them seem to different the species coul;d live in the same areas cross habitating.. Looking on worlds for new things to escape the others whom they found strange for not being able to take semi solid forms like they could. A natural disagreement between the two gas forms but it wasn't a battle. Neither side had the technology to really harm the other.

So they drifted going onto ships that visited the worlds and finding nourishment as well as interest in their emissions as the pollution it gave off was like candy for them. Eventually finding their place on different worlds . Some hearing rumors and leaving messages for each other to follow to what was considered a holy world where pollution and everything was made for them.

That led them to Raxus where they could set up within the worlds many polluted piles of runoff. Hovering over it and appearing to the jawa's or salvagers who came there as ghosts to scare them away from their homes. There wasn't many of them but they could reproduce well enough but to just a finite amount on the world using the pollution to feed their young.

THe years piled more and more onto the world and continued to pollute the world. It wasn't in trouble to them but others tried to at times clean it up either to get to what was under all of the junk and trash or to just try and pick through the remains of what was there. It gave a few things and ideas for them while they acted like ghosts from the ships haunting them to scare things away.

More centuries passed and they found a way to settle onto the world making it their home as they saw jedi arrive and sith, some built things, some tried to settle it but all left eventually. Soon enough they were met by others who worked on the world and had a respect for the stuff there making themselves known to begin at least learning about some of the other cultures within the galaxy.

Over thew year Raxus changed hands many times among the sith, the jedi and other groups. The jedi offering and helping relocate as groups like the Bryn and the sith came to the world and would endanger not just it but all of the species on the planet. It went a long way and they found themselves on ships traveling to other parts of the galaxy.

Some settled on Atrisia aiding them with their efforts to get pollution out of the environment, airborne dangers from sith attacks and other problems across the commonwealth allowed some of the Dala to have work which allowed for biodomes that could house them and the rest of their species. SOme of them go around the galaxy sending credits back to build and maintain the biodomes of their people.
 
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Nyx

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Alright.
A few things I notice immediately.



Matsu Ike said:
The Force: They can use the force somewhat, some skills are not really able to be used but general skills like mind tricks a species trait can be used. With concentration they can go from soft to solid making their shape solidified for interacting on a larger scale with the environment. Their general skills and regards to it is as something there connection all living things and they believe deeply in the living force itself.
Does this mean that they use the Force to change their shape into semi-solid?



Matsu Ike said:
Diet: The do not necessarily eat food as much as pollution and carbon emissions from vehicles like speeders/
What happens when they don't receive pollution and carbon emissions for an extended time? Do they die?
 
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yes they can die and I edited that a little.

The force technique soft to solid is a way for force users of the matukai to create a natural body armor for a short time. THey can already change their density to be semi solid and interact but a gust of air punching you in the face is not very intimidating... but if for a brief second their punch can feel like a punch then people might think twice.
 

Nyx

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Reading that entry, it doesn't seem like that would apply to gaseous forms, just soft tissue like flesh. I don't really mind if they use the Force to very briefly solidify, but soft to solid is not the technique that would do it.



Matsu Ike said:
Density Shifting: Their bodies while in a humanoid form are solid and able to be dismembered. They don't have to breath with lungs or have blood but the small electrical impulses that spark almost invisibly through the gas form and allows them to solidify are focused in the brain.
What happens to a dismembered limb if cut off while solid? Does it stay solid, does it poof into nonexistence, does it turn back into gas? And if it does turn back into gas, is it possible for a Dalatross to reabsorb it somehow?

And is there any way to kill them while not solid or frozen?
 
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[member="The Black Hat"] edited with more clarification for dismemberment and ways to damage them. Their weaknesses are on par with the Filar for ways to hurt a gas minus the energy diffusion because it doesn't really explain it. Easier to just make a hole to let things pass through it. THeir dismembered limbs do become gas again and if comparing I would say a polydroxol level of healing. Where it can heal itself but with focus and its own energy. To much damage and it will need to find a place to rest and find pollution or emissions. Also changed and clarified more the ability to solidify for attacking.
 

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Okay.
One last thing.
You mention that the Dalatross and the Filar began as the same species, but the Dalatross split off.
What exactly caused the change in evolution and abilities, as the two species are vastly different, now.
 
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No but a genetic variation/mutation in the material they have that was bred into the species and overtime got some numbers as there isn't a whole lot of them but the gene/trait could be recessive in the filar and it takes two carriers to make a Dala
 
Matsu Ike said:
Breathes: Does not breath but thrives in polluted and toxic environments
Got my biologist hackles up a bit :). So when we use the term breath, we are actually using a laymens term for two different things, used interchangeably. Physiological respiration (you breathing right now through your lungs) and cellular respiration (your cells taking bits of that air, breaking down ATP into ADP, and uses those bits to carry off the surplus of electrons). Just for knowledge, the reason our cells use oxygen is because the return on energy is the highest. But cells have been known to use things all the way down to sulfur, thus sulfur reducing bacteria, but I digress...

Everything respires. It's how cells break down glucose or the other compounds that they have consumed or produced through chemical processes. So unless you can provide me a good reason for why these creatures are cut off from the concept of gas exchange (which can be aerobic or in this case, anaerobic), please remove this portion and fill it with the appropriate atmospheric type or medium (heavily polluted, I could see type 3 or maybe, just maybe, type 4).


Matsu Ike said:
No but a genetic variation/mutation in the material they have that was bred into the species and overtime got some numbers as there isn't a whole lot of them but the gene/trait could be recessive in the filar and it takes two carriers to make a Dala
This isn't speciation, this is simply a mutation in the genotype that has the capability to express the phenotype differently. Think of it like ears, all these different shapes and sizes, caused by culminationof genes and the expression of codominant or recessive traits. As such, in the description, I'm gonna need something more than space magic for what has caused the split between these guys and the Filar (look up speciation for some good ideas on that). The reason that this is important is because it will prove the necessity of this species, as opposed to the Filar, which was a fairly unique and underplayed species as is and in itself, still qualifies for your intent.

So, a few additional questions:

-You state that this species is susceptible to energy damage while in solid form. What about gas form? One of the particular weaknesses of Filan was that, in being invincible against melee attacks, is that they were susceptible to energy attacks (assuming they didn't dissipate to avoid the attack). Because, as it appears to me right now, the Dalatross is essentially invincible while in gaseous form (feel free to correct me on this if I am wrong).
-Another weakness of the Filan was it's slowed walking speed (though it was balanced out with stealth). Is that any different for the Dalatross?
 
Emberlene's Daughter, The Jedi Generalist
Wait I thought Type IV was vacuum? Edited either way though as you are right

They can be harmed in gas form same as when going more solid but they don't know how to dissipate energy like the filar.Its gas form is less dense and sturdy as a trade off for the ability to look more human.

I'll get the species themselves more filled out to part two of your request when I get back from the store.

their movement is on par with the filar when in gas form but they can move around as a semi solid humanoid shape for a little more speed.
 
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edited and made them more Sympatric in their evolution. instead of a genetic anomoly they have altered and changed over time from a single species line developing some of the other traits.

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Do you intend to carry over the relatively immunity to physical damage in gas form as well as vulnerability to energy? I know you mentioned so in the above response but I will need that laid out in the strength/weakness section.
 
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