Okay, so, let's take a step back really quick. You can always edit that post of course, which you should consider doing.
Picture yourself walking into the Jedi temple one day and you come across Varus, who often times could be seen in the Gym or on training grounds hard at work. You would walk up to him and say what? Would you ask him what he was doing or what form of training he was working on? What would be the weather be like? Would the other Jedi n the temple be frantic or stressed out because it was during a time of war? What would Damon be dressed in? What color would his training saber be?
Try writing it like you've read it out of a book. This is an in character post, so pour your creativity into it and see what you get. It'll take a little getting used to, of course, but once we get started and you catch your rhythm you won't be able to stop.
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