Approved Species Dravala

[Kaili Talith]

They are nearly two times stronger than Wookies and are incredibly dense, capable of taking large amounts of damage and physical harm before beginning to crumble and show signs of exhaustion.

Well, I asked for 'a bit stronger than a wookie' and not 'nearly two times as strong.' Claiming something is nearly two times as strong opens room for a misunderstanding that they are just about twice as strong as a wookie which would be the opposite of what I wished.

Other than that, I have read through the submission one more time and I am willing to approve this for secondary. Once the above mentioned edit has been made.

 

[Voices of The Deep]

[member="Kaili Talith"]

Edited

 

[Kaili Talith]

[member="Cinder Rose"]

Excellent.

Pending approval.

[member="Valiens Nantaris"]

 

[Valiens Nantaris]

Thank you for working with my judges to get something fair and balanced.

Approved.