skin, bone, and arrogance
I think this could use a refresh. I'm happy to take a swing at it, if you don't have any objections. For instance, the Ubiqtorate and the government part could use a quick scrub.
Any thoughts [member="Ludolf Vaas"] and [member="Aram Kalast"]?
"The Galaxy is calling.
We will let it know we have heard."
Dark winds are blowing in the Force, a new power is rising from the outer-reaches of the galaxy and the red maw of conquest is being laid across devastated worlds and subjugated governments. From the ashes of the Empire came a scattered waste of Imperial Warlords and their followers, each fighting for their own survival in a galaxy that held them without want, reason or cause.
From these remnants the First Order was formed. An authoritarian belief that through power order and discipline within the galaxy can be restored, within the shadows they have mustered up their strength, built armies and restored allies long forgotten, with the roar of a TIE-Fighter and the white fist of a Stormtrooper they prepare to march on into the galaxy.
The SUPREME LEADER
The First Order is led by Sieger Ren, a mysterious and shadowy figure that arose shortly after the fall of the Imperial Remnant. This self-imposed Supreme Leader has the complete faith and fanatical support of the First Order in his quest for Conquest and Revenge.
The call has been issued, the banners have been raised. All Imperial and First Order supporters are welcomed among the banner of the Red Maw.
We have openings within all our faction elements;
THE FIRST ORDER MILITARY
Wear the white armour of a Stormtrooper or sit in the cockpit of a TIE-Fighter, we are looking for those who wish to wage war on a personal level. Commit to the FIRST ORDER MILITARY today and see the stars our way!
THE UBIQTORATE
Within the shadows of the galaxy their lies secrets and espionage. We seek professionals and those experienced within the games of deceit to join the secretive UBIQTORATE. Register your will and begin your spy games now.
THE GOVERNING COUNCIL
Beneath the iron rule of the Supreme Leader lies the council of Moffs and Overseers. Planets need to be governed and ran in accordance to the laws of the First Order and those of high political interest and intellect are invited to be selected for THE GOVERNING COUNCIL and rule the First Orders territory as you see fit.
THE KNIGHTS OF REN
Secretive, mysterious and fanatically loyal to the Supreme Leader are the Knights of Ren. These Force Users have formed their own brotherhood within the First Order and are seen upon the battlefields, negotiations and independently around the galaxy. What their goals entail are unknown outside of their order itself. The Force is calling, will you let it in? Bow to the KNIGHTS OF REN and be part of something bigger.
THE INDEPENDENT SECTOR
Every governing body knows that you can’t be everywhere. The First Order has initiated a Guild House system to allow Independents who support the ways of the First Order, yet would rather not join their strict military systems to give their professional trades as a boon to the Supreme Leader. Mercenaries, Bounty Hunters, Traders, Pirates and everything in-between are welcome within the Guild Houses. Join the INDEPENDENT SECTOR and help us build a secure and safe society.
Any thoughts [member="Ludolf Vaas"] and [member="Aram Kalast"]?
"The Galaxy is calling.
We will let it know we have heard."
Dark winds are blowing in the Force, a new power is rising from the outer-reaches of the galaxy and the red maw of conquest is being laid across devastated worlds and subjugated governments. From the ashes of the Empire came a scattered waste of Imperial Warlords and their followers, each fighting for their own survival in a galaxy that held them without want, reason or cause.
From these remnants the First Order was formed. An authoritarian belief that through power order and discipline within the galaxy can be restored, within the shadows they have mustered up their strength, built armies and restored allies long forgotten, with the roar of a TIE-Fighter and the white fist of a Stormtrooper they prepare to march on into the galaxy.
The SUPREME LEADER
The First Order is led by Sieger Ren, a mysterious and shadowy figure that arose shortly after the fall of the Imperial Remnant. This self-imposed Supreme Leader has the complete faith and fanatical support of the First Order in his quest for Conquest and Revenge.
The call has been issued, the banners have been raised. All Imperial and First Order supporters are welcomed among the banner of the Red Maw.
We have openings within all our faction elements;
THE FIRST ORDER MILITARY
Wear the white armour of a Stormtrooper or sit in the cockpit of a TIE-Fighter, we are looking for those who wish to wage war on a personal level. Commit to the FIRST ORDER MILITARY today and see the stars our way!
THE UBIQTORATE
Within the shadows of the galaxy their lies secrets and espionage. We seek professionals and those experienced within the games of deceit to join the secretive UBIQTORATE. Register your will and begin your spy games now.
THE GOVERNING COUNCIL
Beneath the iron rule of the Supreme Leader lies the council of Moffs and Overseers. Planets need to be governed and ran in accordance to the laws of the First Order and those of high political interest and intellect are invited to be selected for THE GOVERNING COUNCIL and rule the First Orders territory as you see fit.
THE KNIGHTS OF REN
Secretive, mysterious and fanatically loyal to the Supreme Leader are the Knights of Ren. These Force Users have formed their own brotherhood within the First Order and are seen upon the battlefields, negotiations and independently around the galaxy. What their goals entail are unknown outside of their order itself. The Force is calling, will you let it in? Bow to the KNIGHTS OF REN and be part of something bigger.
THE INDEPENDENT SECTOR
Every governing body knows that you can’t be everywhere. The First Order has initiated a Guild House system to allow Independents who support the ways of the First Order, yet would rather not join their strict military systems to give their professional trades as a boon to the Supreme Leader. Mercenaries, Bounty Hunters, Traders, Pirates and everything in-between are welcome within the Guild Houses. Join the INDEPENDENT SECTOR and help us build a secure and safe society.
thank you as always for your input, [member="Ludolf Vaas"] and [member="Aram Kalast"]
