Give Feedback on the Member Above You

[Nikolas Faselli]

Guys, no off-topic, please.

I haven't had a thread with you, [member="Sochi Ru"], but I have seen your writing a bit and I am liking it. Can't give you constructive feedback, though. Maybe some time in the future, though.

 

[Sarge Potteiger]

I've not RP'd with you, but your constant desire to improve the community would warm my heart (if I had one.)

Keep on keepin' on.

 

[The End Narrator]

I like your style of writing.

I have personally not had a chance to write with you (Character to Character interaction) but I wouldn't mind it.

[member="Sarge Potteiger"] - http://starwarsrp.net/topic/27349-the-sound-of-silence/#entry378229

Like that...

 

[Onrai]

[member="Sochi Ru"] I'd be willing to help you learn how, were you to offer one of your characters as a "sacrifice," so to speak.

 

[Nikolas Faselli]

[member="Enigma"], no off-topic, please.

Also, I have some more, hopefully constructive criticism for you. I hope I don't sound rude. So, RPing is not only about getting romantic relationships or making people just to have a relationship. RPing is about doing what your heart desires with a character. Let relationships evolve from simple friendships, don't force anything. Your characters currently do only what you ask them to do, but let them go. They are not slaves, but a part of your consciousness. If you let go, you can write a perfect story and they can get a relationship if they want it to happen. And whenever you RP, don't make it relationship-centric, just go with the flow of things.

Let your characters free, let them have their crazy lives, and then you can eventually have relationships.

 

[Zion Krayt]

I haven't seen much of your character, but what I have seen I have enjoyed quite a bit! You're a really good writer and you really put in the effort with your detailed posts. (I wish I could do that, haha.)

[member="Maria Natalja"]

 

[Hurrikaine]

@[member="Zaren Bouqi"]

You're a great writer. What criticism I can give is that I get the feeling you may take things too seriously. Not in the sense that you would become offended by an IC insult and take it OOCly, but rather in the sense that your characters are too serious or attempt to maintain the centre stage of a show. Either way, keep up the good work man.

 

[Edward Vyperion]

[member="Hurrikaine"]

Only question is "Who are you..."

That is all for now

 

[Cross Ikon]

[member="Mazarr"]

I actually enjoy writing with you. Charlotte was a pretty well-done character, although you got a bit too NPC-centric with her, and Steffos was a fun guy. I don't acually remember most of your other characters, though, which makes me a bit sad.