Invasion Great Balls of Fire | AoC Invasion of CIS-held Rodia and Talay | OOC

[Rann Thress]

Scherezade deWinter
Thank you, that means so much!
Im just glad that things are happening in such a way that helps me tell Rann’s story. I’m accidenting into awesome stories andI’m loving every second of it!
Edit: also tried to work in the five stages of grief. Thought it was fitting

 

[Domino]

Hey Nyx N1X3 we haven't blown the top of the dome yet unless I missed someone else doing it. This close to the end I'm also hesitant to ask and wait for edits so if I don't hear back in the next hour or two (already midnight here I just got in from visiting family) I'll post and say timey-wimey yarn ball stuff ooc as we're not directly interacting. If it's all cool.

Also just to clarify, are you sending a ship to intercept or just relaying that we're there to intercept?

 

[Nyx N1X3]

Domino

Greetings. Zaldros' post mention a hole in the roof, probably following up to expectation Sasmay was setting it off as they left. Up to discuss though (well, sleep soon, but you know...)

Nyx is calling for Confederate command to send ships after you and Sasmay. She's favoring amicable relations with a possible business partner rather than throwing said organics about inside her ship in a chase, heh.

 

[Domino]

I think they're in the sewers where people keep trying to cave them in to trap Agents or something. Talking with Sasmay's writer the detonation hasn't happened, the smaller is the distance effect from moving away.

Thanks for the clarification on the ship stuff.

Would you be willing to remove the parts explicitly about the dome damage and leave the rest?
Nyx N1X3

 

[Nyx N1X3]

Domino

Hm, you may be right. Sure I can edit it. Hm, is there a particular part you'd like modified? There's one paragraph dealing with debris and the city center being under the top of the dome. There's also a paragraph mentioning a hole in it.

 

[Nyx N1X3]

Domino

I made some edits to generalize the damage over all. Please let me know if additional adjustments would suit the intended scene.

 

[Domino]

Direct references to the hole and the damage it caused both to the dome and city I think. There's the bit after 'Then it happened' and you issue a warning about falling derbies. It hasn't happened yet after all. Nyx N1X3

 

[Nyx N1X3]

Domino

Ah, you would like that section gone rather than reworded. I've removed the section.

 

[Domino]

Thank you for working with me on this, I appreciate it and your speedy replies!
Nyx N1X3

 

[Scherezade deWinter]

Vytal Noctura I'm sorry, that last post of mine was meant to be an exit post. I added a ~fin to avoid future potential confusion.

 

[Vytal Noctura]

Vytal Noctura

I understand, not meaning that we'll continue in the thread as it's wrapping up. More of a hint the chase continues off screen until Scherezade escapes or the Confederacy stops pursuing.

 

[Vytal Noctura]

I have not sufficient Discord Emojis upon this Forum to provide, but thank all those that participated as life and schedules allowed!

 

[Daiya]

Great job in the invasion everyone. It was a pleasure writing with those of you I could, especially Nyx N1X3 / Tiria Reinhart and Nighthaunter . Thanks for the story making these past couple weeks.

 

[Scherezade deWinter]

I'd like to shout out to the MVP's of both sides as agreed upon by AoC staff - Rann Thress & Daiya !!! ♥ ♥ ♥