Grish

[TheReal_McChicken]

NAME: Grish

REGION: mid rim

SYSTEM: moras

SUN: moras

ORBITAL POSITION: 3rd rock from the sun

MOON: Frakus

COORDINATES: Inbetween malastare and naboo

ROTATIONAL PERIOD: 16 hours

ORBITAL PERIOD: 30 days

CLASS: Terrestrial

DIAMETER: close to the size of earth


ATMOSPHERE: type 4

CLIMATE: Hot & has dangerously toxic weather.

GRAVITY: Standard

PRIMARY TERRAIN: sand and intoxicated water
with large amounts of buildings.

NATIVES: Trogidens. They are a toad like species that is immune to many different toxins.

IMMIGRANTS: Hutts, Evocii & Twi'lek.


LANGUAGES: Trog, Huttese, Twi'lek

GOVERNMENT: Republic

POPULATION: 6 billion

DEMONYM: Trogiden

MAJOR CITIES: Gorgridge city

MAJOR IMPORTS: metal, crystal, machine parts etc.

MAJOR EXPORTS: ballisticorp products.

AFFILATIONS: Republic

CULTURE: the natives host annual hunting days for gathering the best food in the galaxie

TECH: the planet advanced when immigrants came bearing arms and other tech

HISTORY: not much is known about Grish

NOTABLE PC'S: none so far

INTENT: I wish for this planet to become well known in starwarsrp chaos!

 

[Soeht]

General nitpick:

• The history and intent of this planet is inadequate.
• The culture needs to include the dominant Hutts, and it's otherwise inadequate.
• Why are people from this planet called Trogiden (not referencing the species)?
• Why would a terrestrial planet require metal and crystal?

Star Wars nitpick:

• Why are the Hutts so far away from Hutt space?
• Why did the Hutts colonize Grish?
• Did the Hutts pollute the planet or was it toxic in the first place?
• Why is the planet affiliated with the Republic?
• What is BallistiCorp?
• You will have to submit the Trogidens to the species subforum if they are not unimportant due to Hutt colonization.

Scientific nitpick:

• The orbital period of the planet is too fast.

 

[TheReal_McChicken]

Ballisticorp is a company of my design that creates weapons and armor out of metal and crystal. I'm sorry for the many inadequate info I did not have long to make this. The Hutts colonized Grish because of its resemblance to nal hutta. The planet was always toxic and it's affiliation lies with the republic due to the planet trading with Naboo. And don't worry I will improve the history givin time.

 

[Soeht]

Thank you for your response. I will still ask more questions as this is further developed, though. Most of it is just to get you into developing something unique and exciting.

• Can you further explain Balisticorp?
• Why is Grish so far away from Hutt space?
• How does the conflict between Republic and Hutt interests get resolved?
• Why should this planet be approved if it is like Nal Hutta?

 

[Soeht]

No update for a long time. Denied.