[member="Nate Drake"], May I ask why you are not writing this yourself? Is it just because you need help writing, or because you are lazy?
Nate Drake said:
Thanks I'm glad it is better but I don't want write it not cuz I'm lazy I just jump around a lot
Considering this, I would like to see a bio made by you yourself. I am going to be brutally honest here, if you are too lazy to write a bio, then you are too lazy to be here. Because here you need to work for positions of power, and you need to put time and dedication into more than just a few lines, and a good picture.
I want you to know that I truly do want to help you. And if it's just because you don't know HOW to write, then I can help with that. I can try and teach you to write more proficiently, and provide better detail for your characters. However, if you are just being LAZY, then I can't help you. That's something you have to do yourself.
Seriously, I do want to help. I love helping people. In fact, if we could do a thread just so then I can try and teach you, then PM you how to fix your posts, or even write it in the post itself to show progression over time, and what I have recomended, it will show that you can grow, and earn you a few brownie points to those who could potentially train you IC, or OOC. I would rather see someone do many threads about the same thing, and earn a rank, and earn their place, than someone simply be there for the good parts of the story, and (try but will fail to) skip by the rest of the boring parts.
So please, let me know if you want help. I would love to do a thread with you anyways since you are new to the site. *as far as I am concerned, you are new.*