LFG Jedi Padawan in need of character development

[Eloise Dinn]

I was going to follow that trend and post a feedback thread, but then realized El has only interacted with like 2-3 characters with any degree of depth, which would make it hard to offer feedback lol. Plus I’m low on threads at the moment, so gimme some more.

Eloise is a Jedi Padawan with a reputation for being headstrong and brutally honest. She started out as a bully but has since mellowed out, though she’s still pretty outspoken. Her parents were Sith and she ran away from home, but still has to deal with the shadow of her heritage/upbringing. She’s a berserker built on brute strength and raw power.

I don’t have anything specific in mind. I’m open to connections, allies, friends, enemies, rivals, etc.

 

[Aris Noble]

Berserker on brute strength and power? That sounds fun.

 

[Aris Noble]

Chaos noooo the lag.

 

[Pahul Vitorbreeze]

Hello there! I am willing to put my character to the test . Older Jedi Master that gave up the force and looks to live alone in exile, however, Eloise could have him "shake off the dust" once more ...: D ... I'd love to write with ya! Pahul comes with drama, family drama, but deep down he cares . Lmk

 

[Laphisto]

If she's looking to explore the less Orthodox ways of the force laphisto is willing pass on a few lessons

 

[Kellen Mynn]

Kel is always willing to mentor new Padawans. He has a unique approach to things and would certainly mesh well with her personality and skill set!

 

[Valery Noble]

I can offer Val if you want something more along the lines of an adventure/mission with someone who can mentor!

Or Vera if you're up for trouble and shenanigans with a fellow Paddy

 

[Saul Whesai]

I'll put my slicer up if you want a thread with someone who is not Jedi/force-related.

 

[Sable Varro]

I was going to follow that trend and post a feedback thread, but then realized El has only interacted with like 2-3 characters with any degree of depth, which would make it hard to offer feedback lol. Plus I’m low on threads at the moment, so gimme some more.

Eloise is a Jedi Padawan with a reputation for being headstrong and brutally honest. She started out as a bully but has since mellowed out, though she’s still pretty outspoken. Her parents were Sith and she ran away from home, but still has to deal with the shadow of her heritage/upbringing. She’s a berserker built on brute strength and raw power.

I don’t have anything specific in mind. I’m open to connections, allies, friends, enemies, rivals, etc.

Same tbh. I’m down to thread

 

[Ares Dargir]

I have this Padawan who quite literally got his identity erased galactic-wide and is having to rebuild himself back up. Once a noble, now an exile in the eyes of nobility. Maybe they could be friends, or rivals as they forge their own stories.

Alternatively I do have Talon Barova who is a war-torn Jedi with a terrible tendency to drink a lot, but he tends not to express what troubles him and honestly does tend to stick to the job. He had a Padawan once that eventually fell to the Dark Side and said Padawan had joined with the Sith. Talon tracked the Padawan down to bring him back into the fold, but the former Padawan basically gave him the middle finger and escaped. Or if you just want a drinking buddy.

Rath Nihro is a potential antagonist if you're looking for an enemy. He's not a Sith, but he's been in a lot of wars both as a soldier and as a dark sider. Formerly part of the Eternal Empire as their Warden of the Shroud, now a Dark Empire Elite. Or if you want to go on a adventure tracking down ancient temples of both Jedi and Sith to either collect relics or destroy them if they prove to be too dangerous. Unless he's on the battlefield or specifically tasked to do otherwise, he won't attack you except in self-defense.

 

[Braze]

If you want to interact with a possible future paddie I have Brander

 

[Delsin Shaw]

Eloise Dinn

I'll throw Delsin your way if you would like. He might be Sith because of his heritage, but he's not the "Kill all jedi on Sight" kind of deal. He'd rather talk it out of he can. If you want some more interesting interactions.

 

[Eloise Dinn]

Holy shit I got a lot more responses than I expected, lol.

Hello there! I am willing to put my character to the test . Older Jedi Master that gave up the force and looks to live alone in exile, however, Eloise could have him "shake off the dust" once more ...: D ... I'd love to write with ya! Pahul comes with drama, family drama, but deep down he cares . Lmk

Sounds good. Where did he exile himself to/what has he been doing during his exile? How would the two of them meet?

Kel is always willing to mentor new Padawans. He has a unique approach to things and would certainly mesh well with her personality and skill set!

Mmhmm. What's his stance on the Hapes Crisis? Since his bio mentions he's looking for a new cause to fight for.

I can offer Val if you want something more along the lines of an adventure/mission with someone who can mentor!

Or Vera if you're up for trouble and shenanigans with a fellow Paddy

How about an adventure/mission with Vera? I liked their dynamic last time and have been meaning to get around to doing another thread with the two of them. Maybe something related to current events in the GA?

Same tbh. I’m down to thread

Ok we fight??? Thoughts???

I have this Padawan who quite literally got his identity erased galactic-wide and is having to rebuild himself back up. Once a noble, now an exile in the eyes of nobility. Maybe they could be friends, or rivals as they forge their own stories.

Alternatively I do have Talon Barova who is a war-torn Jedi with a terrible tendency to drink a lot, but he tends not to express what troubles him and honestly does tend to stick to the job. He had a Padawan once that eventually fell to the Dark Side and said Padawan had joined with the Sith. Talon tracked the Padawan down to bring him back into the fold, but the former Padawan basically gave him the middle finger and escaped. Or if you just want a drinking buddy.

Rath Nihro is a potential antagonist if you're looking for an enemy. He's not a Sith, but he's been in a lot of wars both as a soldier and as a dark sider. Formerly part of the Eternal Empire as their Warden of the Shroud, now a Dark Empire Elite. Or if you want to go on a adventure tracking down ancient temples of both Jedi and Sith to either collect relics or destroy them if they prove to be too dangerous. Unless he's on the battlefield or specifically tasked to do otherwise, he won't attack you except in self-defense.

Which one of these three characters are you most invested in currently?

If you want to interact with a possible future paddie I have Brander

What would you say to a mission thread with Eloise, Brander, and a Jedi Master investigating rumors of a Dark Side cult on a distant planet? Could also make it Braze instead of Brander if you want to work with the established history between him and Eloise for extra drama.

Eloise Dinn

I'll throw Delsin your way if you would like. He might be Sith because of his heritage, but he's not the "Kill all jedi on Sight" kind of deal. He'd rather talk it out of he can. If you want some more interesting interactions.

Eloise is the "kill all Sith on sight" type, so she probably wouldn't talk it out even if she could lol. If you want to radicalize your boy against the Jedi after having him face the El, we can duel. Otherwise we could invent a scenario where they have to work together (i.e. captured and need to escape) if you don't want it immediately escalating to a fight.

 

[Valery Noble]

Vera it is! I'll poke tomorrow for some brainstorming

 

[Sable Varro]

Holy shit I got a lot more responses than I expected, lol.



Sounds good. Where did he exile himself to/what has he been doing during his exile? How would the two of them meet?



Mmhmm. What's his stance on the Hapes Crisis? Since his bio mentions he's looking for a new cause to fight for.



How about an adventure/mission with Vera? I liked their dynamic last time and have been meaning to get around to doing another thread with the two of them. Maybe something related to current events in the GA?



Ok we fight??? Thoughts???



Which one of these three characters are you most invested in currently?



What would you say to a mission thread with Eloise, Brander, and a Jedi Master investigating rumors of a Dark Side cult on a distant planet? Could also make it Braze instead of Brander if you want to work with the established history between him and Eloise for extra drama.



Eloise is the "kill all Sith on sight" type, so she probably wouldn't talk it out even if she could lol. If you want to radicalize your boy against the Jedi after having him face the El, we can duel. Otherwise we could invent a scenario where they have to work together (i.e. captured and need to escape) if you don't want it immediately escalating to a fight.

We fight! It doesn’t have to be anything life or death of course, lil fighting and talking is totes my angle.

 

[Ares Dargir]

Holy shit I got a lot more responses than I expected, lol.



Sounds good. Where did he exile himself to/what has he been doing during his exile? How would the two of them meet?



Mmhmm. What's his stance on the Hapes Crisis? Since his bio mentions he's looking for a new cause to fight for.



How about an adventure/mission with Vera? I liked their dynamic last time and have been meaning to get around to doing another thread with the two of them. Maybe something related to current events in the GA?



Ok we fight??? Thoughts???



Which one of these three characters are you most invested in currently?



What would you say to a mission thread with Eloise, Brander, and a Jedi Master investigating rumors of a Dark Side cult on a distant planet? Could also make it Braze instead of Brander if you want to work with the established history between him and Eloise for extra drama.



Eloise is the "kill all Sith on sight" type, so she probably wouldn't talk it out even if she could lol. If you want to radicalize your boy against the Jedi after having him face the El, we can duel. Otherwise we could invent a scenario where they have to work together (i.e. captured and need to escape) if you don't want it immediately escalating to a fight.

Technically Rath Nihro is my most invested character, but otherwise it'd be Talon Barova on the Jedi side.

 

[Kellen Mynn]

Holy shit I got a lot more responses than I expected, lol.



Sounds good. Where did he exile himself to/what has he been doing during his exile? How would the two of them meet?



Mmhmm. What's his stance on the Hapes Crisis? Since his bio mentions he's looking for a new cause to fight for.



How about an adventure/mission with Vera? I liked their dynamic last time and have been meaning to get around to doing another thread with the two of them. Maybe something related to current events in the GA?



Ok we fight??? Thoughts???



Which one of these three characters are you most invested in currently?



What would you say to a mission thread with Eloise, Brander, and a Jedi Master investigating rumors of a Dark Side cult on a distant planet? Could also make it Braze instead of Brander if you want to work with the established history between him and Eloise for extra drama.



Eloise is the "kill all Sith on sight" type, so she probably wouldn't talk it out even if she could lol. If you want to radicalize your boy against the Jedi after having him face the El, we can duel. Otherwise we could invent a scenario where they have to work together (i.e. captured and need to escape) if you don't want it immediately escalating to a fight.

No particular stance other than trying to fix all the killing and destruction like most folks. Though Kellen knows politics isn't so black and white, he has various ways of seeing how to end the Crisis. He is a pretty open-minded Jedi and more your Qui-Gon type.

 

[Eloise Dinn]

Technically Rath Nihro is my most invested character, but otherwise it'd be Talon Barova on the Jedi side.

Eternal Empire? That's a name I haven't heard in a long, long time.

How about a competition to see who reaches the treasure at the center of a tomb first? They can try to stop each other along the way, whether by fighting or setting up traps, etc.

No particular stance other than trying to fix all the killing and destruction like most folks. Though Kellen knows politics isn't so black and white, he has various ways of seeing how to end the Crisis. He is a pretty open-minded Jedi and more your Qui-Gon type.

Ah. Eloise is pretty biased in favor of the Crimson Veil/Hapan Union. What other causes is he getting behind, if not political ones?

 

[Ares Dargir]

Eternal Empire? That's a name I haven't heard in a long, long time.

How about a competition to see who reaches the treasure at the center of a tomb first? They can try to stop each other along the way, whether by fighting or setting up traps, etc.



Ah. Eloise is pretty biased in favor of the Crimson Veil/Hapan Union. What other causes is he getting behind, if not political ones?

Sounds doable, I had a plan for Rath to venture into Hoth to investigate an ancient jedi tomb encased in ice that had recently been uncovered due to a expedition crew that went too far into an ice cave. It could be a labyrinth-like maze that allows you to reach the tomb or something.

 

[Braze]

Eloise Dinn

Do you have a master in mind as another pc or npc? What themes do you wanna explore with their present dynamic?

This could work i just need to know some que cards a little so to speak