Approved NPC Jen'ari Shadow Guards

[Darth Vyrassu]

OUT OF CHARACTER INFORMATION
• Intent: To have an elite group of guards for the Jen'ari Empire

• Image Credit:
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• Role: Elite Guards for the Jen'ari Emperor

• Links: N/A

GENERAL INFORMATION
• Unit Name: Jen'ari Shadow Guards

• Affiliation: The Jen'ari Empire

• Classification: Elite Guards

• Equipment:
Lightsaber Pike
Heavy Blaster Pistol
Medpac
Encrypted Comlink with holo capabilities
C-25 Frag Grenades
Personal Cloaking Device
Black Phrik Armor
Black Armorweave Force Robes
Reflec Spray
Black Body Glove
Shadow Guards Armor


COMBAT INFORMATION
• Availability: Unique

• Deployment: Limited

• Strengths:
+Have phrik armor making them extremely resistant to lightsabers & Blasters.
+Armor is coated with reflec warping the signal of scanners and radars.
+Has a personal cloaking device that renders user invisible for a short period.
+Is highly trained to use certain force abilities.
+Is highly trained in 3 Lightsaber combat forms and unarmed combat.
+They are undying loyal to the Jen'ari Emperor and would die for him

Weaknesses:
-thighs are not protected, and elbows are un protected.
-Red visor makes them visible from a distance even at night
-Don't do well as infantry therefore cannot be deployed as such.
-has narrow view of sight due to visor size
-They do not do well in lightsaber combat against multiple combatants
-They are not trained to defend against force powers


• Description: The Elite shadow guards are soldiers and sith picked from the Jen'ari Imperial Military that were force sensitive, and the Order of the Jen'ari, the sith order of the Jen'ari Empire. These silent but deadly guards were brutally trained by the Dark Lords in the Jen'ari Empire. They were trained to use force lightning, force repulse, telekinesis, force choke, force push, force speed and heal. They were also trained in all 7 forms of Lightsaber combat. These elite guards remain silent, never discussing anything they hear and only report to the Jen'ari Emperor.
Their force powers consist of:
Force Lightning
Force Repulse
Force Push
Telekinesis
Force Speed
Force Jump
They lacked most other force powers

ALTHOUGH Trained in all 7 forms of combat they only mastered three forms, such as Ataru, Shien/Djem So, and Juyo

Their armor is made of phrik with a spray on called reflec to warp signals of scanners and radars. They also have a personal cloaking device to make themselves invisible for a short period of time. These were only used during top secret missions that were classified only to the Dark Council and the Emperor. The guards used saber pikes but under their robes they were armed with C-25 Frag Grenades and a heavy blaster pistol.

 

[Eugen Aker]

[member="Darth Vyrassu"]

Under review.

 

[Eugen Aker]

[member="Darth Vyrassu"]

Hello there,

I'm going to need you to make a formal factory submission for the armor if you'd like to keep it for this submission.

 

[Darth Vyrassu]

[member="Jyoti Nooran"]

I added the hyperlink to the factory armor submission.

 

[Eugen Aker]

[member="Darth Vyrassu"]

Okay, after you get that through the factory, then we'll proceed.

 

[Darth Vyrassu]

[member="Jyoti Nooran"] it was approved

 

[Eugen Aker]

[member="Darth Vyrassu"]

Looks like your armor was reported and pulled out for another review, so we'll have to wait again.

 

[Darth Vyrassu]

[member="Jyoti Nooran"]

It's approved....again

 

[Eugen Aker]

[member="Darth Vyrassu"]

Welp, looks like it was reported again!

Jk. Let's get on with this.

To start, how strong and experienced would you say these guys are? Apprentice, Knight, Master level?

 

[Darth Vyrassu]

Knight only

[member="Jyoti Nooran"]

 

[Eugen Aker]

[member="Darth Vyrassu"]

Thank you.

As it stands now, your unit has a lot of strengths, including its powerful equipment, but not enough weaknesses to balance it out. Three of the weaknesses related to their armor can really be rolled into one.

Please come up with some more weaknesses, and/or tone down their strengths, particularly in the area related to the Force. Usually, you don't get FU, especially Knight level, who are well versed in all sorts of Force techniques and are good at all lightsaber forms. Since these NPCs are supposed to be serving as bodyguards, it may be a good idea to specialize their abilities to better fit that niche.

 

[Darth Vyrassu]

[member="Jyoti Nooran"]

edited

 

[Eugen Aker]

[member="Darth Vyrassu"]

Your strengths related to the Force and lightsaber combat directly conflict with the weaknesses you added.

Here's my suggestion, make a list of the force powers they specialize in and how proficient they are with each ability. Same thing with the lightsaber forms. Try to pick one or two forms.

 

[Eugen Aker]

[member="Darth Vyrassu"]

Would you still like to continue?

 

[Darth Vyrassu]

[member="Jyoti Nooran"]

Still editing

 

[Darth Vyrassu]

[member="Jyoti Nooran"]

edited

 

[Eugen Aker]

[member="Darth Vyrassu"]

Alright, this looks a little better, but I'm going to need you to edit your strengths and weaknesses section to better match the description of their capabilities and eliminate conflicting statements.

This:

ALTHOUGH Trained in all 7 forms of combat they only mastered three forms, such as Ataru, Shien/Djem So, and Juyo

-They do not do well in lightsaber combat against multiple combatants
-They are not trained to defend against force powers

Conflicts with that:

+Is highly trained to use the force.
+Is highly trained in all 7 Lightsaber combat forms and unarmed combat.

Please fix this.

 

[Eugen Aker]

[member="Darth Vyrassu"]

What's the status of this submission?

 

[Darth Vyrassu]

[member="Jyoti Nooran"]

Working on it

 

[Darth Vyrassu]

[member="Jyoti Nooran"]

Edited