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Jen'ari Sith Trooper Armor

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Darth Vyrassu

Immortal Jen'ari Sith Emperor

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* Intent: personal armor actual Imperial soldier players

* Image Source: source here

* Canon Link: Modified Sith Trooper Armor

* Primary Source: N/A

PRODUCTION INFORMATION
* Manufacturer: Sith Imperial Foundry

* Affiliation: The Jen'ari Empire's Imperial Military

* Model: Sith Trooper Armor

* Modularity: No

* Production: Minor

* Material:
* Terentatek Hide
* Phrik
* Armorweave
* Body Glove
* Reflec

TECHNICAL SPECIFICATIONS
* Classification: Advanced Armor

* Weight: Average

* Resistances:
- Blasters: Extreme
- Kinetic: average
- Lightsabers: Extreme
- Other:
Sonic: Low
EMP/ION: Low
Elemental: Average
The Force: Extreme
Toxins: Extreme
Corrosion: Low


SPECIAL FEATURES
* Mirrored visor Glasteel with polarized anti-flash visor
* Tactical 360 Panoramic HUD
* Multi frequency targeting and acquisition system
* Broadband Antenna + Rangefinder
* Holonet
* M.S.T.A. System
* Identifing system
* Multi channel encrypted comlink
* Universal Jammer
* Filtration system
* Visual & Audio Recorder
* Night and Thermal Vision modes
* Rebreather to filter toxins
* Comlink/Radar/Scanner backpack


Strengths:
+Tarenktate hide makes Armor immune to most force abilities where armor is.
+Armor is made of Phrik making the armor extremely resistant to Lightsabers and blasters.
+user can see in all environments and conditions
+User can breath in all environments and is extremely resistant to toxins/Gases.
+Users backpack can scan and detect enemies in all directions

Weaknesses:
-Big enough EMP blast could take out all electronics
-Armor has low protection against acids
-Gaps in armor are open for attacks
-electronics backpack is exposed to take damage and knock out all electronics.

DESCRIPTION
The Jen'ari Empire Imperial Army armor was designed to be a carbon copy of the Armor of the Resurgant Sith Empire from the old republic but far more advance with capabilities to block most force abilities and lightsabers and blasters for a stronger soldier to survive most combat situations.
 
Good Morning and Happy Thanksgiving!

As I stuff down some Turkey and greens let's take a look at this submission.

So before I even address any other part of the sub there is one rather large violation of the Factory rules.

No set of armor can have an Extreme rating in any category and have anything less than a Unique Production scale. As it is this set has 4 Extreme ratings and stands at a Minor production. I'm afraid I cannot accept this. Also even for a Unique set of armor I am not quite sure it is a balanced and fair submission. You essentially make it resistant to the top forms of assault, The force, Lightsabers, Blasters, and Toxins? That's a rather extensive defense considering the obvious lack of weaknesses.

I'm going to need you to go to work on evening this submission out. From here you have two routes which can lead you to an approval. Either EXTREMELY lower all of the defensive ratings and add some more solid weaknesses, or lower the production to Unique and still lower the defenses a bit and add another weakness or two.

Thank you for your time and please do not hesitate to ask me any questions.

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